Pyar ka Rishta--nu part--pg 15 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
hey paras loved both the parts..it is very interesting 👏 👏 👏 .....very curious about how you continue..please put the next one fast! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
omg i just read your whole ff and i loved it plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
@princes: yeh, he is an artist so def. He can speak artistically! 😛

@ manpreet; he is actually confused whether he is love with kasturi or not! 😕

@davia: ya,continuing soon. 😃

@nightsangel: you want longer romantic parts..you have to wait for that dear! 😳

@krishi; you guessed it right again! 😉

@RK_fan111: glad you like it..thanks! 😊

@sadsunzarsum: thanks for the comments..just hold on..posting the next one maybe tomorrow! 😃

@whitestar: hai dear…glad you like the suspense!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
okay i'm offically hooked you better not end it quickly sweetie, or you'll have a hoard of people on your back, great part very cunning of you to get rob to try to kidnap kas, great part update sooon plz

robina
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
hi paras
wow just finished reading all the parts starting from one.
Good FF yaar 👏 👏 👏
thanks 😃
when are you putting the next part. i am waiting 😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66

Part 6:

Until Now: Devika arranges RK marriage..Robbie tries many ways to foil the marriage but is left unsuccessful!

Robbie calls Raunak .

R: Raunak kaha hoan yaar.

Ra: main ghar par hoon.

R: acha main abhi akke tujhe milta hoon.

Robbie comes home and goes straight to raunak's room..Raunak is working on his laptop..As Raunak comes towards Robbie..Robbie just hugs Raunak tightly …Raunak is surprised.. As they face each other..Raunak sees that Robbie is all in tears..Raunak is puzzled..

Ra;Kya hua Robbie…sab teek haina..

R; (is still emotional) ..haan…

Ra: kya hua bata Robbie..kuch problem hai kya…..

Robbie then tells everything about kasturi and then what Divya said..

R: Raunak tum itna kuch kia..aur mujhe kuch bataya bhi nahin…

Ra: nahin robbie..tab aunty ka tabyat teek nahin tha..iss liye..main kuch keh na saka..

R: tumhara dil bahut bada hain raunak…

Ra: hey chod na yaar…kya ehsaan ki baat kar rahen ho..itna paraya ho gaya main…hum sab ek family hain..aur ek doosre ke liye karna itna badi baat nahin..tumne bhi mere liye kitna kia hain…tum kisiko shukriya kehna chahti ho to woh hain kasturi….kasturi ne jo madad kia..woh bahut badiya hain..

R: haan yaar..main kasturi ko kitna galat samaj raha tha..aur woh bina kuch expect karke..humra itna bada help kia hain..

Ra: accha chalo..ab toh tumko shaadi se kuch aitraaz nahin na..

Robbie is very happy..slightly embarassed …

Ra: accha ab so ja…kal kasturi se zaroor milna…aur sorry bolna..(winks)

Robbie nods and leaves. That night Robbie is not able to sleep..he is thinking all the incidents with kasturi over and again…he is more clear now..he is looking forward to meet kasturi..but is slightly hesitant thinking how she will react after his behaviour today..He makes a resolve..he will ask her forgiveness.

It is morning and first thing Robbie leaves for kasturi's place…he comes to chawla house…JP is surprised to see him so early…he welcomes and enquires about everyone..Robbie tells JP that he wants to meet kasturi..JP sends him upstairs to kasturi's room..Robbie is slightly relieved with JP's behaviour he is clear that kasturi has not said anyhting about yesterday to them.

Kasturi has just finished her bath and is drying her long hair..she is wearing a pink dress..Robbie nears the door and stops in his step..he is not able to take his eyes of kasturi ....he is watching her without batting his eyelids…..her serene face with large eyes and a sweet smile makes him loose sense of time…he is brought to present by Tanu's voice..

Tanu: jiju..aap yahan..

Kasturi turns to see Robbie there and she is also puzzled by his sudden visit..

R: woh kasturi se baaat karna tha

Tanu: accha…jiju aap kal tak intezaar nahin kar sakte kya..(giggles)..accha jaayiye..main chai lati hoon

Robbie enters hesitantly…kasturi is silent

R: kasturi…main tumse kuch baat..

K: ab kaunsi plan lekar aaye hain..batayiye..

R: jo kal hua..main uske liye maafi maangta hoon..mujhe please maaf kardo..mujse bahut badi galati hui..

Kasturi doesn't respond..Kasturi is quiet..she is upset…

R: woh..kasturi Divya ne mujhe sab kuch bata diya…

Kasturi is shocked..

R: main maafi ke layak nahin hoon..please ho sake toh maaf kar do..

K: accha toh main Divya ko help kiya..iss liye/..aapko apni galati ka ehsaas hui…

R: nahin..aisa nahin..tum jaante ho na..main thoda impulsive hoon..aur bina soche samjhe kuch karleta hoon..Tum itna selflessly help kiya hain..aise karte main kisiko nahin dekha hoon..bachpan se hamesha main logon ko paise ke peeche baagte dekha hoon..tumhara jaise log bhi hain..jo doosro ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tayar hain…aisa main pehli baar dekh rahan hoon..you are really great…

Kasturi is already all pani-pani..she is touched by his explicit showcase of his feelings..she understands his predicament…

R: please mujhe maaf..kasturi suddenly covers his mouth with her fingers..(she nods her head asking him not to say anything.) Robbie is in turmoil watching her in tears..he wonders how sensitive and emotional kasturi is..he slowly covers her hand with his..they are lost in each others eyes..so many things are conveyed thru eyes..they don't feel the necesiity to talk…they move away only when Tanu brings tea. Robie has tea and quietly leaves…he is still very hazy with his feelings…but he feels very happy…he is feeling like dancing and jumping…looks like he has discovered a new joy..he is not able to attribute the happiness to anything….he comes out whistling to himself..he looks himself in the rear mirror and gives a smiles.

That night both Robbie and kasturi are not able to sleep..both are thinking about each other..Robbie is still wondering about the turn of events..last week he was hating this girl and suddenly she looks so endearing…he has forgotten his agenda to foil the marriage..actually he is waiting for tomorrow, the wedding….kasturi is also pleasantly surprised by Robbie's behaviour..she always sensed a good soul behind his rockstar image..but had never seen it…..she is experiencing a unknown peace. Both drift off waiting for a new day to start.

Marriage Day:

SS families arrive for the wedding and everyone is seated …..Alaana is still not happy..she is growling to Nikhil…Devika comes to kasturi's room…

De: kasturi..aaj tum bahut sundar lag rahin ho…eh rang tujhe bahut suit karta hain..haina Divya..Divya is with kasturi from before..she has helped kasturi to dress up..

D: haan mera bhabhi jo hain..(kasturi is shy hearing Divya call her bhabhi.).the real meaning sinks and she is feeling a bit apprehensive..she is going to be Mrs. Sabharwal..she is still not sure how Robbie is feeling..

Devika has brought a necklace for kasturi..

De: kasturi lo..eh haar khandaani hain..eh tum pehan lo…

K: par mum…

De: agar magar kuch nahin…

Devika herself hooks the necklace…

Robbie is restless…he wants to meet kasturi once more..he slowly reaches kasturi's room..but nobody is there..he starts to search for her..and finds her in the terrace…Kasturi is standing looking at the stars..Robbie approaches from behind…

R: kasturi tare gin rahin ho..kitne hain???

K: (blushes)…

R: tum aaj bahut khoobsurat lag rahin ho..

K: (goes red )

R: kasturi aaj mujhe yakin ho gaya ki bhagwan hain aur who jodiya upar banake bejta hain

K: like marriages are made in heaven….bhagwan jo bhi karta hain acche ke liye karta hain..

R: hmmmm..dekho hum kitne koshish ki shaadi tudwane…

K: aap ko iss baat ka bura lag raha hain(she is waiting with bated breath to know his answer)

R: nahin..mujhe bura nahin lag rahan hain…Thank God I never did any mistake…nahin toh mujhe bahut pachtawa hota..tujhe kaise lag rahan hain

K: nahin mujhe bhi bura nahin lag rahan hain….aap bahut acche hain..I am lucky

R: nahin kasturi lucky toh main hoon

Kasturi is looking at her hands with mehendi..Robbie takes hold of her hands..

R: woww very beautiful..

K: kehte hain….iss rang se pata chalta hain ke aap apne pati se kitna pyar karte hain..dekhiye kitna laal hua hain..(after the words are out she realises what she has spoken and feels very shy)

Robbie is very happy..he is having a naughty smile on his face…her hands are still in his…he draws her closer

R: accha kasturi toh tum itna pyar karte ho mujh se…

Kasturi was feeling heady with the proximity…she was searching in his eyes for some assurance..she wanted him to reciprocate with the same love..suddenly they heard shrieking voices and confusion downstairs..both ran down to see Devika unconscious on the ground.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
Hey paras Wonderful part 👏 👏 👏

I love terreca scene 😳 tumne toh humhe Purane dino ki yaad dila di 😳 wo bhi kya din the 😍 😍

Maine socha tha ki tumhe kahugi ki next part meh ek Romantic scene likhna but yee end meh devika ko kya ho gaya Please jaldi se devika ko theek karo aur inki mariage karwake pyara sa love part post karo 😳

Am waiting 😛 jaldi karna deer mat karna

manpreet
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68

Ohh NOOOOOOOOoo Paras..... Now Iam dreading the worst tats going to come in the next part...

Please yaar, Dont make it worst of the worst sorts, Just make it bad😆.... And please Please dont drag this tragic part yaaar😆

I luved the terrace scene and also how u described Kas tat she is all Pani pani 🤣🤣🤣

Continue sooooooooooooooooooooon😛

Krishi

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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
nice part..how romantic romance in the terrace..devika ko thik kar do..waiting for marriage..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
haila no problems.. pls continue soon
robbie and kastuir cute..

davia

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