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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
oh great part

sorry paras i stole d idea of my ff from u so sorry plz forgive 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
oh great part

sorry paras i stole d idea of my ff from u so sorry plz forgive 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
@miselegant: no need to say sorry yaar...I still think both our ffs are going different directions! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
oh thanx yaar
i felt guilty so sorry again yah both going in different ways i like ur ff
keep writing

somya 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
cool ff 😆
heyyyy hun i really lik da idea of running robs plan by raunal 😆
tht was a good 1 😳
continuee soonnn 😳
Edited by white star - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
Hey paras maine edit kar diya hai manpreet
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
@manpreet: thanks for the comments..haan main Raunak koh kasturi ke bhai bana di...takhi koi problems na aaye! 😆

@whitestar: Thanks sweety!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4:

Until now: Devika arranges RK marriage..Robbie tries to stop the marriage but Raunak foils his plans!

JP comes to kasturis room.

JP; kasturi puttar

K: jee bauji

JP puutar tum khush hona iss shaadi se

K: bauji…woh

JP kya hai batao na

K: bauji main soch rahin thi ki aur thoda aage padu aur kaam karke aap ka ilaaz karao

JP: puttar tum meri chinta mat karo…mujhe sabse zyada khushi tab milegi jab teri shaadi hogi…aur padne baat hai…who tum shaadi ke baad bhi pad sakte hoan Sabharwal log bahut acche hain

K; par aap ka tabiyat teek nahin hain…ilaaz toh karana haina

JP: dekho puttar aisa rishta baar baar nahin aate….ek baar tera shaadi ho jaaye…mujhe bahut sukoon milega

K; bauji..nahin..main soch rahin thi…

JP; ghar mein sab bahut khush hain iss rishte se…na mat karna..main tere aage haat jodti hoon

K(she is in tears) bauji aisa nmat kahiye…main aap jaisa chahte hain waisa hi karoongi!

JP(hug her) jeete raho puttar

Kasturi comes to the office next day

Devika: kasturi beta…aaj shaam ko tera engagement hain…aur tum yahan kaam pe

K: who madam thoda kaam bhaki tha ..woh main karke jaldi ghar chale jaaoongi

De; teek hain jaldi karo aur ab toh main teri saas banne wali hoon ab toh mujhe mom bulao

K; teek hain madam(bites her tongue) ..sorry teek hain mom

De: kasturi main teri bauji ka ilaaz ka bandobast kiya hain…shaadi se pehle hi usse treatment karte hain

K: Thanks mom…aapka ehsan

De; (cuts her) tum mere ghar ke ho…ehsan ka baat hi nahin utta

K: mom main soch rahin thi ki shaadi tak main kaam pe aajaya karoongi

De: teek hain..jaise tum chaho

Just then Robbie and Raunak enter with one of their friend Anil

Raunak: Anil aaaj Robbie ka engagement hain…aur eh hain kasturi tumhari honewali bhabhi

Anil: Robbie congratulations yaar…congratulations bhabhi…Robbie excellent choice!

Kasturi excuses herself.

Ro: kya..

Anil: haan yaar…bhabhi bahut sweet and sundar hain…acha raat ko milte hain. Take care!

Ro; Raunak isko kya hogaya …kasturi…aur sundar

Ra: Robbie sundarta chehre pe nahin idhar mann se dekha jata hain(points towards his heart) ....Kasturi wakhehi bahut susheel aur sundar hain

Ro: mujhe toh aisa nahin lagta

Ra; tum kab kasturi ko positively dekha hain..jab dekho usko bala bura kehte rehte ho ....dekho Robbie tumhara saari GFs bahut modern aur beautiful hain…par koi bhi aisa nahin hain…jo jeevan saathi banne ki layak hai

Ro; Raunak eh kya bakhwaas bol rahan hain tu

Ra: tumhari koi GFs aise sach mann se tumhko chahte hain..sab teri paise ke peeche pade hain…sirf kasturi tere liye kuch bhi karne ke liye tayar hain…aur usne aisa kiya bhi hai

Ro; kya matlab

Ra: who Divya ke liye…

Just then Devika enters

De; Raunak eh kya tum abhi yahan ho…jaon engagement ka kuch arrangement karni hain…aur sabko invite bhi karni hain

Ra: jee aunty main sab karta hoon aap chinta mat kee jiye

Robbie is left wondering after Raunak leaves…raunaks words keep playing again and again…and also Anils words that kasturi is beautiful has surprised him He searches for kasturi …she is busy with some files..he keeps staring at her…for the first time he sees her in a new light…Kasturi is wearing a orange coloured salwar …her face is so peaceful…with no makeup also she was looking so simple …he sees a certain glow in her face…

Just then kasturi approaches Robbie

K; Sirr aap kya socha hain

Ro: jiske bare main(he is still staring at her) She is confused

K; sir aap kya soch rahen hain…main pooch rahin hoon…aapki plan ke bare mein

Ro: woh main abhi tak kuch nahin soch..

Ishita comes there looking for Raunak…she often comes to the office and takes Raunak for lunch

Ishita: robbie Raunak kahan hain

Ro: raunak kuch kaam se gaya hain ….aaj meri engagement haina

Ish: kya…teri engagement..kissee ..kab..itni jaldi..

She is all excited…

Ro; haan kasturi se …aaj shaam ko..aaogi na

Ish: haan zaroor aaongi…you are very lucky Robbie…kasturi is a very nice girl..she will take care of your family also…she will compliment you perfectly

Ro: stop ishita

Ishita senses that everything is not right

Ish: kya hua Robbie

Ro; ishita main aur kasturi dono shaadi ke liye ready nahin hain..main usse pyar nahin karta..aur kasturi aage padna chahti hain

Ish: so what…kasturi shaadi ke baad bhi padh sakti hain…aur kasturi jaise ladki se tum bahut jald pyar kar loge…very easy!(she winks at him)

Suddenly Robbie gets an idea…he explains to Ishita that both RK are trying to stop the marriage and they don't want to do it openly as both the parents are not well! Robbie asks for Ishitas help in this

Ro: ishita aaj engagement function mein please behave as if we both are very close and like lovers then Kasturis parents will themselves stop the marriage

Ish: nahin…main aise nahin kar sakti…na..

Ro: ishita pleeeaaseee

Kasturi comes there and she also askes Ishita to please help them

After much pleadings Ishita agrees half-heartedly

Engagement function:

Both SS families arrive at Chawlas house..and the function starts. Alka is not at all happy…she is fuming…Music starts and all go on to dance…Robbie pulls Ishita on to the dance floor and starts dancing very closely..Raunak is surprised with Robbies bahaviour…Robbie is moving very closely with Ishita!

Tanu passes by and Robbie asks her to bring her family members attention to his dancing Tanu leaves…she is still going upstairs thinking how to tell this to JP/kaush…suddenly Tanu crashes into Alka

Alka; arre dikhayi nahin deti..engagemnt toh teri behen ki hain..aur tujeh kya hua

Tanu: woh ..chachi Robbie……

Alka: Robbie ko kya hua…bolna..

Tanu: whispers in Alka chachi ears that Robbie is dancing very intimately with Ishita

Alka is glowing with happiness at the news..it is like eating falooda for her…she rushes down and watches Robbies dance…and rushes to inform this to JP/kaush

Alka: bhabhi..bhai saab…dekha aaapne…maine kahan na…bade ghar ke vichaar neeche hote hain

JP: alks kya hua..kyon chilla rahin hoan

Alka: bhai saab aap hi dekhiya Robbie kaise usse ladki ke saat gul khilah rahan hain

They all watch Robbie dance with Ishita…and are shocked…JP is fuming..

Kaush: lalaji suniye…jald baazi mat keejiye…jo ankhon koh dikhati hain who hamesha sach nahin hota

JP: Kaushalya par eh humari beti ki zindagi ki sawwal hain

Kaush: aap rukhye main uss ladki se baat karti hoon

Whereas Robbie is watching out of the corner of his eyes both JP and kaush coming towards them in anger…

Kaush: Robbie beta..Ishita…aap dono humare saat aayiye…aapse baat karni hain

Robbie Ishita follow JP and kaush..

Kaush: ishita…main jaanti hoon tum Robbie ke bachpan ke dost hain…hum eh jaanana chahte hain..kya iss dosti se aur kuch(hesitates)…JP prompts her…iss dosti se aur kuch rishta hain tum aur Robbie ke beeech mein.

Ish: jee…aunty…who

Kaush: Ishita…eh humari beti ki zindagi ke sawaal hain…tum bhi ek ladki hon…tum samjoge na…jo bhi hain…tum saaf saaf batao..taki baad mein kuch pachtava na ho

Ishita is all in tears …she is regretting her act…tears are flowing down and she is crying hardly

Ish; aunty…main aap ko such such bata deti hoon…main Robbie ke sirf ek dost hoon..actually main Raunak se pyar karti hoon…aur hum dono jald shaadi kar rahein hain…jo aap soch rahen hain…who galat hain

Kaush: dekha lalaji…Ishita bahut shukriya beta…humara dil se ek bad bhoj utara..Robbie puttar hume maaf karo..hum tumpe shak kardiya

Robbie is all flustered by the turn of events…he just excuse himself raunak comes there to see Ishita in tears and Ishita takes raunak to the balcony and explains to him everything about robbies pland and about the events that followed

Ra: yeh Robbie bhi..na Ishita tum kuch samajdari se kaam le sakte ho na..

Ish: sorry Raunak…RK dono mujhe itne request ki…main bhi thodi der batak gayi…chalo anyways everything ended well

They join everyone in the hall…kasturi comes down wearing a beautiful ghaghra-choli…megenta coloured…and Robbie turns towards her and is mesmerised by her beauty…and is not able to look away…Raunak comes

Ra: Robbie …apna muh band kar..abhi itna mujhe pata chal hain ki tujhe bhi kuch kuch hone laga haina..phir maanne se kyon inkar kar rahan hain…maan lena tumhe kasturi achi lagti hain

Ro; is brought back to reality..dekh Raunak tum mera dimaak mat kha..chala jaa

Ra: haha..abhi meri zaroorat kahan hain…

Engagement function starts…Robbie and kasturi exchange rings…and asked to sit together

Kas: Robbie sirr aapka plan fail ho gaya…ab kya kare..

Ro: haan har baar main hi plan karu…tumhara bhi dimaak haina…tum bhi kuch socho..

K: na …bbaba..main aur kuch gadbad karna nahin chahti…mera ma-bauji aaj kitna pareshan ho gaye…aapke harkat se..

Ro; acha ab tum side badal di…toh tum shaadi ke liye tayar ho

K: haan ..main tayar hoon..

Robbie is suddenly aware of her acceptance…he feels he can see something more in her eyes that he fails to recognise…Tanu and navneet asks them to dance…RK are brought on the dance floor

'Tumhi dekho na eh kya ho gaya' is playing and Robbie holds her hand and in the other he holds her by the waist…his touch suddenly brings a tingling sensation in kasturi…she feels his breath on her face… this sudden proximity is creating havoc with her emotions… Robbie is unable to comprehend the changes going on..both of them are lost in each others eyes…when the music stops they move away but their eyes look for each other!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
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pls continue soon
davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50

Iam soo glad tat u r writing this story yaaar and also, Iam happy tat u r not following the same thing exactly.....

Luv ur style of writing, Do continue soooooooooooooon yaar

Krishi

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