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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

Sorry friends was too tied up...sorry for the long delay! Here is the next part.

manpreet, ashvez,princess..sorry gals..thanks for waiting! 😃

Until now: Devika arranges RK wedding and but Roka doesnt want to get married...they try to foil the marriage but fail.

Part-7:

Devika is unconscious and Raunak has already called the ambulance….Robbie rushes to his mothers side and tries calling out to her but no response from her. Ambulance arrives and she is wheeled to the hospital. Everyone else arrives at the hospital….both RK are still in wedding attire..they exchange anxious looks and Robbie is devastated and kasturi can feel his agony and she is desperate to comfort him. Just then the docotor comes out and tells them that Devika has sufferd an attack…and tells them that she is still in critical condition and they need to observe her for another 24 hours. Everyone is shocked beyond words..there are many unanswered questions going on in everybodies mind. JP goes and comforts Puru and Raunak is besides Robbie . The nurse announces that only 2 can remaina and others should leave the place. Chawla family decide to leave ..

Pu: Jayaprakash ji main samaj sakta hoon aap ki mazboori..par chinta mat kee jiye..jab bhi hain kasturi humari ghar ki bahu hain

Listening to purus words gives some courage to JP otherwise he was almost on the verge of breakdown.

Chawla family return but they are confused and saddened to think the wedding getting cancelled..but conditions were such nothing could be done.

One day passes by and Devika gains conscious and the doctors shift her to the ward as she is okay now. Raunak and Robbie come along with Nandini

Robbie: mom aap kaise hain..hum sab bahut gabara gaye..

De: main teekh hoon beta…

Nandini: bhabhij aap aaram kee jiye sab teekh hoga

Alaana: kya teekh hoga..who kasturi itni besharam nikli..aur aapke bete ke toh socho mat

All three Ra,Ro and Nandu are shocked

Ro: kya bol rahi ho Alaana…

Alaana then tells Robbie everything about the abortion thing and how Nikhil just before wedding showed devika the abortion papers and which disturbed Devika so much and she collapsed. Robbie and Raunak are shell shocked and Robbie is about to answe Alaana back and tell about Divya but Raunak stops him and takes Robbie out..Nandini is fuming and follows them. She blasts off Raunak and asks him whether what Alaana tells is true..Raunak themn explains Nandini n about divya .
Ra: Robbie tum abhi jald bazi mat kar..aunty ko agar Divya ke bare mein pata chala toh socha kya hoga..

Ro: par mom toh ab tum dodno pe shakh kar rahin hain

Nandini: Robbie beta Raunak teekh keh rahan hain..tum ab isko aise hi rehne do..abhi hum bhabhiji ki jaan bachani hain..

Robbie half-heartedly agrees but his mind is a battlefield..many things keep pondering him and most of them is directed with kasturi…what will she do..how to tell thi s to her family???

Next day JP and kaushalya come to visit devika but Alaana doesn't allow them in…Nandini is waiting outside as now Devika is angry on her because of Raunak.

Kaush: Nandini bhabhi..kyon hume andar jane nahin dete..devika bhabhi teekh hain

Nandini then explains to JP and kaush that devika thinks kasturi is amangal and she is upset thatb'cos of that Devika is not well ..

JP: toh shaadi..Purushottam ji keh rahen the..shaadi agale hafte rakte hain

Nandini: bhai saab ab thodi din shaadi ki baath nahin karte..bhabhi ko thoda aaraam karne do..phir baaad mein sochenge

JP and kaush are fully disappointed and they leave in silence. Nandini didn't want to hurt them and also she didn't want everyone to know about the abortion thingy which might affect kasturi's future.
JP and kaush explain this in the house and everyone is disappointed but pray that all will go well. Meanwhile kasturi wants to join her masters course in Delhi University and JP agrees to it.

It is already one week and Robbie has not seen kasturi…he is feeling delicate to call her..he wanders around her house but never catches kastu..he is all disappointed. He is missing her like hell and is desperate to meet her.

One day when he is driving around suddenly he sees kastu walking along the road with her friends. He is all excited and immediately parks his car by the side and calls out to her..kasturi is surprised to hear her name and even more puzzled when she turns to see him. All her friends are excited to see their fav. Rockstar walk towards them..but kasturi somehow manages to escape from them and comes over to Robbie

Ro: kasturi tum kahan chali gayi..main kitne dino se tumko dekhne ke liye taras rahan hoon

K: sirr..aap yahan..abhi mera friend s kya sochenge..unko kal main kya jawab doongi

Ro; tumko toh apni friends ki padi hain..itne din huye..mere baare mein ek bhi sawaal nahin poocha

He is all angry

K: sorry sirr..chale wahan baitke bat karte hain

Ro; chalo.gadi mein chalte hain..chai peeke baat karenge.

They go to his car and drive to a stall and get tea
K: Devika mom kaisi hain

Robbie thinks it is best to tell kasturi the truth…so he explains why Devika fell sick and how she is suspecting kastu and raunak. Kasturi is shocked to hear this.

Ro: main soch rahin hoon eh baat main tumhare ghar walonko bataadoo.

K: nahin ..sir…unko abortion ke baare mein kuch pata nahin..eh baat sunke bauji ka kya haal hoga mujhe samajme nahin aah raha hain..iss liye eh baat aise hi chod dete hain…ghar mein sab samaj rahein hain ki Devika mom sochte hain ki main amangal hoon….aise hi sochne dena!

Ro: itne saari confusions…sab Divya ke wajah se huan hain…

K: sir..please aap upset mat hona…sab teek ho jayega…waise aap ko toh khush hona chahiye..

Ro: kis baat ki khushi?

K: aap shaadi rukhwana chahte the …waise hi hua..

Ro: haan khush toh hoon(faking ignorance)…ek dum khush hoon…mere dost..GFs…mast..
Actually kastu doesn't know that after the marriage failed..Robbie has not gone out with any of his friends annd is always in thought s of kasturi.

Ro; accha yeh bata tum yahan kya kar rahi thi…tumhare dost ke saath..

K; main aage pard rahin hoon..idhar delhi university mein admission mili hain

Ro; wow…congrats…bahut khushi huyi yeh sunke….par uni toh tumhare ghar se bahut door haina..

K: haan iss liye main yahan ishita ke ghar mein tehri hoon..weekend mein ghar jaati hoon

Ro: kya..ishita ke ghar mein…Raunak ne bataya nahin mujhe..He thinks he should take Raunak to charge!

K: accha sir..main ab chalti hoon..

Ro;accha ….tumhara timings kya hain..
He takes down her timings and he drops her home and leaves.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
Thank u Paras...halke...halke...Pyar hone lagaa...
👏
Gr8 Job!!!
Ash
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
thst was not good.weddign stopped? 😭
robbie askign timing ye kya hai. hmmmm love?
pls cotnineu soon

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84

Wooooowww Paras

Tats soooooo gud yaaar.... Even though i know the basic story line, Iam luving this FF, U are taking the story sooooooo damn well yaar..

But the part is really short😆

Soooo now tat the worst part is over, Iam waiting to see some masaledaar scenes😳 and u shud give me my quota/dose of RK in every part from now on😳😆😆

Krishi

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Posted: 17 years ago
#85

Hey nice part dear 👏

Par yaar yee kya kar diya unki marriage nahi huyi 😭yee alana bhi na 😡 isko apni FF se nikal bahar kar do 😡😆😆

Wowww robbie ko kastu se pyar hai😳 nahi toh kaam kharab ho jata 😆

bas issi tarah chota sa love scene dal diya karo har part meh toh hum khush hai😳 😉😆

ab jaldi se next part likho aur long bhi 😛

manpreet

Edited by sahib29 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
hmm ... yaaara v were not worried abt devika but abt weddin woh tou tum ne cancell kar hi di na ..!!
hm ... chalo acha hua k robbie ko divya n abortion mein phele hi bata dia tha warna phir wohi ghalat fehmiizz hoti ....!!!

nice part ... par thoda sa bara likhna agli bar aur jaldi bhi..!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
paras: wedding cancelled! 😭 ...but loved the RK scene 👏 ...so pyar kas mausam hain! 😳

Okay the worst is over..time for some nice RK parts 😳 ...and make it bigger! 😆

waiting for the next part! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
plzzz. post the next part...still waiting!!!
ur ff's r gr8 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
awesome awesome part p@ras, so when is the nxt part coming, i'm so glad you didnt kill off devika thank you, but i have to say i really like this sweeet version of your devika, i hope one day to see it on the show, thank you and do please keep it up, i cant wait to see robbie tell kasturi how he feels jaaldi jaaldi please please likhon, the suspense is killing me 😡

regards
robina
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90

Dear p@ras,

I finally found the time to read your FF. It was highly recommended and I found it every bit worth that recommendation!!!!!

Excellent work!!! Loved every part!!!!! The characters are same but you treated them in such a fresh manner 👏 .

I read in one of the posts that you want to end it soon....PLEASE DON'T!!!!

The last one was on Nov 6th, that's 3 weeks ago 😭 . Its at a very interesting point and can't wait for the next part............please post ASAP!!!! 😃

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago

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