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Posted: 17 years ago
#61

Harman : Thank you!!!! I am very glad that you like the romantic scenes that I write!!! 😃. In the next part you will get to read one more 😉

Sonia : Thanks a lot for liking the humour and the song!!! I was really wary about the song. But I did not imagine Robbie singing it. I just imagined him feeling miserable with this song as a backdrop.
Thank you for all your comments and I am hoping the next part will be up by the weekend!!

mike : Don't worry, agli baar jab woh US aayega toh Ohio zaroor aayega!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
I was so surprised to see 2 parts! I dont have to say how nice it is read ur ff 👏 ! I love the reality and sensible things the characters do in ur ff unlike the show!!!

I was so happy to see Robbie back! It was so heart warming to read the part where Ronak is with his wife and kid! Raaga, is such a sweet name! And the song is one of my fav.

Cant wait long for the next part even when I know it is so much of hard work!!! The next part seems to be holding lot of action and any ahem ahem?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
Pragalbha dear u r ff rocks 👍🏼
simply da best ff 😃
love it ❤️
ok dearr i cannot wait for da nxt part plzzzzzz update soon n wat a writer u r ..da way u rit ..da way u choose u r song selection ...n da way u express feelings ..really really really good wow i cannot belive tht we hav such writers in todays geration 😳 😳 😳 i say lets kick out kekta n put u in ...ohhhhhhhhh myyyyy godddd kasturi will be lik da first in trp everday 😆 n seriously cant not wait for da da big twist n 1 suggestion never finish u r ff .....im just waiting for da part where rob/kas will get married 😍 ok update u r nxt part soon plzzzzzzzzzzz 🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by white star - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Amazing parts ,luv d way u introduce a song 4 every situation,always apt selection of song.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
RK_fan111, white star and Sonali,

Thanks guys!!!!!! 😃

coming up the next part in a few minutes.......
Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
Hope you like it..........

PART- 16

The next day evening, everybody is at Sheraton. Kasturi will spend some time at her friend's reception and will decide to leave quickly. She is walking out of the hotel, when she sees a man for a flash and thinks that it is Raunak!! She is surprised and tries to follow that man. She will reach the Sheraton hotel restaurant, but he has disappeared. Then she will think
Kasturi : Raunak Sir, yahaan kyu honge?? Aur yeh aadmi toh kisi aurat ke saath hai. Mei bhi na, ek dam paagal hoon.
She will be walking back when she will notice in a remote corner, Raunak sitting at a table. She can see only him, she cannot see the woman who is sitting with him. She is surprised and starts walking towards his table. Suddenly, she sees that Raunak gets up and goes to the lady and extends his hand towards her. She gives her hand. He kisses it and they both go to the dance floor and they start dancing. Kasturi stops in her track. From the way they are dancing, it is very clear that they are totally in love with each other! Kasturi is completely shocked!!!!! She cannot believe her eyes!!! She is confused. She is trying hard to understand what is going on. She turns back and is quickly walking out of the restaurant trying hard to make some sense. Her pace quickens and she does not notice a server coming towards her and goes and crashes into him. They both fall down and whatever the server is carrying also falls down with a thud!!! Robbie turns to see what the matter is (as does everybody else in that part of the restaurant) and is flabbergasted to see Kasturi!!!
The next second he is next to Kasturi, giving her a hand and helping her up. As soon as his hand touches K's arm, she immediately recognizes the touch and looks up surprised to see into Robbie's eyes. Emotions flood them as he is helping her up and they both remember their last meeting!! Then Robbie helps the waiter up and slowly turns back to Kasturi.

Robbie : Ghar jaa rahi ho?
Kasturi shakes her head in affirmation.
Robbie : Mei tumhe chod detaa hun.
Kasturi : Nahi Sir, aapko kyun takleef......
But Robbie has already walked past her to the table and starts talking to the 2 guys. Kasturi seems him explain something to them and she also notices that he was in the middle of his dinner. Robbie shakes hands with them, picks up his coat and comes back to K.
Kasturi : Sir, aap apnaa dinner keejiye. Beech mein yun khaana chod ke aa jaana.....
Robbie (cuts her) : Chalo.
He holds her hand and steers her out of the restaurant towards the car. They sit in the car and start driving home. They steal glances at each other. Robbie notices that she is looking lovely, but there is something on her mind as her face is looking very clouded.
Robbie : Tumne khaana khaaya?
Kasturi : Nahi
Robbie : Kahin khaogi??
Kasturi : Nahi Sir, mujhe bilkul bhook nahi hai. Bas, sar me dard hai.
She sits thinking about Raunak, that unknown lady, about meeting Robbie so unexpectedly. In a few minutes Robbie stops the car. Kasturi looks at him with a questioning glance and then notices that he has stopped the car close to a chai waala.
Robbie : Ek chai peeyogi, toh dard ekdam gaayab ho jaayega.
He signals to the boy. When the boy comes to the car
Robbie : Ek chai, adrak waali.
Kasturi : Aap nahi peeyenge, Sir?
Robbie : Peeyungaa, tum mere liye thoda chod.....
He stops. They both look at each other. Robbie suddenly remembering that he cannot share Kasturi's cup anymore. Kasturi is also very embarrassed. He says to the boy
Robbie : Ek nahi, do chai leke aao.
He turns to see K and K is staring down. There is an awkward silence between them. They both remember how they had shared chai before. To break the silence Kasturi says
Kasturi : Aapkaa trip kaisa rahaa?
Robbie : Bahut bura. Sab concerts flop hue!!
Kasturi (looks at him shocked and confused) : Lekin, meine toh kuch alag hi padha! meine toh padha ke aapka har concert bahut badaa hit...
She suddenly sees that Robbie is looking at her intently. And then she realizes that he was just playing with her and she confessed so easily!!!!
Kasturi looks away. Then the chai arrives. They drink and drive back home. They don't exchange a single word again. Robbie is restless thinking that the ride is coming to an end and wondering if he will get a chance to talk to Kasturi again. They reach home.
Robbie gets out and open the door for K. Kasturi gets out, thanks Robbie for the ride and starts to walk past him. He is looking at her. She has not taken 2 steps when Robbie says
Robbie : Iss ek mahine me, kya ek bhi baar mei tumhe yaad nahi aaya?
Kasturi stops walking and just stands there. Robbie turns and slowly walks to her and is standing right behind her.
Robbie (his voice filled with hurt) : Sach kaho Kasturi. Tumhaara jawab yeh saabit karne ke liye bahut zaroori hai ke meraa pyaar sacha hai ke nahi. Agar mei tumhe ek bhi baar yaad nahi aaya, toh mei abhi isi waqt tumhaare zindagi se chala jaaonga. Jeete ji toh mei phir kabhi tumhaare saamne nahi aaongaa, marke bhi mei.....
Suddenly Kasturi turns around and hugs him!!!!!!
Robbie is shocked!!! He slowly separates K from himself and looks at her. She is crying and her eyes are telling him the truth. She does not have to open her mouth. It becomes impossible for him to hold back!!!!! He is ecstatic!!!! He kisses her upturned face all over and hugs her tight!!! Kasturi realizes that the constant ache that she experiences in her heart when thinking about him, has finally dulled in his embrace!! She will melt in his arms and all fears, apprehensions and pain have disappeared with his arms around her. Robbie is thinking, this is the first time K has acknowledged her love post-marriage. Till now, it was always him cornering her and she was fighting him. But today she completely broke down!!! He does not understand it but is too happy to bother. The passion is building up in them and RK will feel they are loosing all control. Robbie will slowly turn her face to him with an intention to kiss her when K will suddenly break away from him and will turn away forcefully. She will not realize that her mangalsutra has got hooked to Robbie's button and when she turns away so suddenly, the mangalsutra will not be able to bear the impact and will break!!!!!!!!!!!
Before either of them can realize what is happening, the mangalsutra will break and will fall down on the ground!!! They both look at it completely shocked!!!!! Kasturi stifles a scream, grabs the mangalsutra and runs away towards the house. Robbie just stands their looking after her, not knowing how to react!!!

Kasturi reaches her room and falls down on her bed and cries like a baby. She is confused and scared. She is thinking
Kasturi : Mukje samjh me nahi aa rahaa hai ke mere zindagi ke saath kya ho rahaa hai. Raunak Sir aaj kis ke saath the? Unhone shaadi se pehle mujhe yeh kyun nahi bataaya ke woh kisi aur se pyaar karte hai!!! (and looking at the broken mangalsutra) Aur yeh kya abshagun ho gayaa? Iskaa kya matlab ho saktaa hai?

Meanwhile Robbie is pacing in his room. He desperately wants to see Kasturi, hold her and console her. But he does not want to go to Raunak's room and get Kasturi into trouble. Finally, he cannot take it anymore and starts towards Raunak's room. But as soon as he gets out of his room he will see Raunak coming back from his trip and going to his room. Robbie will stop.

Raunak will enter the room. He will see Kasturi standing next to the window staring outside. He will wish her.
Raunak : Hello Kasturi
Kasturi (will turn towards him) : Hello Sir, Kaisaa rahaa aapkaa trip?
Raunak (fumbles and glances away while lying) : Accha tha.
And then he will suddenly turn towards K and say
Raunak : Kasturi, mujhe tumse kuch kehnaa hai.
Kasturi : Kis baare mei?
Raunak : I know ke maine jo letter tumhe shaadi ke pehle diyaa tha,ussme meine kahaa tha ke jo bhi woh letter mei likha tha, usske baare mei hum kabhi baat nahi karenge. Lekin aaj mei usske baare mei baat karnaa chahta hun.
Kasturi (looking puzzled) : Lekin Sir, mujhe jahaan tak woh letter yaad hai, ussme aise koi baat nahi thi.
Raunak (looks surprised) : Ofcourse thi! meine khudh apne haathon se likha tha. Aur meine uss mei Neela ke baare mei bhi likha tha.
Kasturi : Nahi Sir, uss chitthi mei kisi aurat ka zikr tha hi nahi.
Raunak : Kya keh rahi ho? Ussme ek nahi, do-do auraton ka zikr tha. Ek Neela aur ek Shivani.
Kasturi : Mei theek keh rahi hun. Thahariye, mei abhi woh chitti laati hun.
She searches for the letter and gives it to Raunak. Raunak opens the letter and reads it. His eyes widen with disbelief!! Kasturi will be observing him.
Raunak : Lekin Kasturi, meine toh yeh khat nahin, doosri likhi thi.
Kasturi is startled and says : kya matlab?
Raunak : Haan Kasturi, yeh chitti maine nahi likhi. Maine jo letter likha, ussme Neela ke baare mei poora information tha.
Kasturi : Lekin, yeh Neela hai kaun?
Raunak (looks at her in surprise because he is thinking why is she asking me questions, when she already knows the truth) : Neela, meri patni hai!!!
Kasturi is completely shocked and is staring at him in disbelief!!!
Suddenly the door to their room is flung open and Robbie is standing in the doorway his face burning up with anger!!!!


Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
wow
great going
cant wait to see robbie's reaction
continue soon
😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaaayyyyyy!!!! finally the truth is out of the bag...

Thank u dear... I missed RK but still i got one wonderful RK scene... Kab yeh Ronak ki track will come into place and wen will RK meet....

yaar P, please dont do like Ekta yaaar... Its almost 1 month in ur fanfic since RaKa got married.. Still they are not separated and still RK is not together 😆 😆 😆

Jokes apart, take ur time, its a wonderful part, gud tat ronak's part is out in front of both Robbie and Kasturi... Yayyy RK are going to unite... They will have sooo many more happy moments in ur fanfic and iam sure tat u will definitely do justice to their happiness tat they both deserve...

Continue sooooon dear, are u planning to write before u fly to india? BTW wen are u starting??

Krishi
Edited by knumnum - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
Oh thanku so much Pragalbha dii..
i was waiting for this...
Robbie is going to kill Raunak for this... 😆
Continue soon...!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u soo much
robbie kasturi scene was so cute
and robbie kiss to kasturi
and kasturi knows the truth
now i think robbie gonna kill raunak yahoooooo
continue soon pls!!!

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