Kashmakash - RK FF - Page 26

Pragggggggggg 🤗 🤗

kitna long part hai par phir bhi dil nahi bhara mann karta tha ki kabhi khatam hi na ho 😳

Dear very nice part 👏

dear tumne is part ke har scene ko barde hi tarike se joda hai 👏 👏 every diolouge is perfect 👏

sonni de nakre mera fav.song hai cos in SAREGAMA meh harpeet ne gaaya tha 😳 i love this song 😳

but dear yee kya girish phir se badal gaya yaa sirf apni mummy ko jaan bhooj kar jhoot bool raha tha ....am confused 😕 hey bhagwaan ab in dono ki life meh koi problem na aaye 😭

siya is very good friend 😳 asse friend sabki life meh honi chahiye ....

ab aate hai apne RK par 😳

i love this scene ki kastu jab uski perfomance ka eyes se signal deti hai and wo bhi back signal deta hai ki tumse aacha kuch nahi 😳

I hav't saw mussoori but i can imagaine ki bahut hi aacha place hoga 😳

Thanks dear for lovely romantic scene 😳

shayari bhi bahut aachi lagi 😳

Robbie is very caring ..i love ki wo dinner banana start hogaya wesse to ladko ko omlate ke siva kuch nahi aata 😆 😆 he is cho cweet 😳 par tumne yee nahi bataya ki humare robbie ne banaya kya 😉 😆 😆

😲 I am shocked ki devika ko heart attack aaya hai ..accha bhala scene kharab kar diya 😆 😆
just kidding i know yee bhi tumhari part ki koi kadi hogi 😆 but i wish ki isse serial meh bhi attack ho jaye 😆 😆

Wonder ful part dear 👏 👏

aur yee kehne ki jaroorat nahi ki tum acha likhti ho cos u are perfect 👏 👏

and continue please ab main janti hoon ki devika ko attack huya hai to next part meh koi romantic scene to hoga nahi 😆 😆 😆 tum bhi sochogi ki kitni pagal hoon main 😆 😆

yaar deer mat lagana bas jaldi se next part lihk dalo 😛


with lots of love manpreet 😳

hi dear😛 Prag main yee likhna hi bhool gayi ki kastu ne Robbie ki eyes kyo band kardi🤣 🤣 usse to apni eyes band karni chahiye thi .😆 i can't stop laughing in this scene 😆😆 Wo kitne hi cute lag rahe honge 😳😆 accha bhala scene chal raha hota hai aur phone ki ring baj jati hai 😆😆 Tu aur sonu apni FF ke robbie ke mobiles mujhe dedo main unke phone calls apne aap attend kar loongi ....unhe jo kar rahe hai karne do😉😆😆

sorry yaar double post kar rahi hoon actully maine robbie aur kastu ka part phir se parda to bahut accha lagha 😳

Really pragg i love ur FF 😳

thanks dear for cute scene 😳

manpreet

superbbbbbbbb Pragalbha, Excellent part. I loved each and every scene of your ff. Literally heat was oozing out of my laptop - while i was reading it..lol. HOTTTT stufff!

The part where kasturi covers his eyes with her hand, while she herself is shy, is simply ADORABLE! I literally laughed out loud. SO cuteee and funny! And trust me, very believeable ;).

Great going, intense stuff - loved it! 5 stars for you :D

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww, both of the parts were simply beautiful. loved both of them. specially the 2nd one and u know why 😉 😆 i loved all those punjabi dialogues and the song was superb. 👏 abhie yar is devika ko heart attack aa giya. kuch na kuch to zaroor hona hi hota hai beech mein. anyways everything was sooooooooooooooooooooo perfect. i loved the part where robbie was sweating 😛 wow i can imagine my robbie there. 🤗

love
harman 😛

pragalbha, did i ask u ur real name before too. cuz i'm thinking about it since i got to know u. 😆 yeah, so what's ur real name.

love
harman 😛

Hey Pragz,
👏 👏 👏
Really good work 👍🏼. Can't wait for the next episode.

Cheers
Anju

That was a mindblowing part! 👏 👏 👏 Just loved every bit of it! Ihave already read it 3 times! 😳 I know it is so difficult to write such parts using the right words and will have to cut many scenes which actually happen! 😉 😆 But the best part is how you have gradually devloped their relationships...raising it slowly from part to part! That was excellent! 👏 I loved to see kasturi getting comfortable and also gaining confidence! 😉

When Siya tells kasturi...to give her details of suhaag raat...I was actually thinking all of us pestering you to give us more romantic parts! 🤣 🤣🤣

Are you turning Girish a villain again???? or is there more drama to it! 😉

I so much enjoyed the part where Robs and kas both talk thru eyes and I could as well visualise it! Robs is too good in portraying anything through his eyes! 😉 I loved the song and fits very well being a peppy one...just right for a concert! 👍🏼 It was cute to see kas J and proud! 😃

though I have not visited mussoorie I replaced it by OOty! 😆 This track I loved so much...it is so natural...like any newly weds they are understanding each other...getting to know each others likes and dislikes...you get to do things which your partner enjoys...just like kasturi is starting to hike! It was a beautiful feeling! It remeinded me of my honeymoon days! 😳

I was all emotional reading your shayari...you are too good!

Ab har pal saasein lenge, tumhaare deedar ke vaaste
Varnaa toh jee rahe the, marne ke vaaste.

It reminded me of the present Robs on the show 😭

It was so sweet of her to close his eyes as she was shy! 😆 thanks for making kasturi such a sweet sensitive girl! I love her more than Robbie in your ff! Will we be able to see anything close to this on the show! 😕

'Tumne iss tarah se meri aatmaa ko chua hai, ke mei khud ko bhool gayaa. Agar ab kuch yaad hai toh bas tumhaara pyaar. Woh pyaar jo meri zindagi, meri saansein aur meri dhadkan ban chuki hai. '

I loved these lines! 👏 Thanks for sharing all that with us and I know how much hard work you have done the last week!🤗

You didnot bring them together yet...no problem with me...I can get more passionate scenes!😃

Love you dear!

👏 wow prag that was such a good part 👏
sorry i couldnt comment on ur last 2 parts but i swear it wasnt my fault ...its just tht i got too busy wid homwork,test ec etc 🤢

n ooh my god .. all ur parts are written very very very wellll 👏 girl u have some good writing skills 😛i love ur song selection😳n seriously i wouldnt be able to write such biggg parts like in a very short time but u actually wrote them 😛 woohhhh keep up da good job 👏

n coming to ur ff .. i simply lovethe dierction ur ff is heading too.. its written soo well that i could imagine every n each bit part of it ....i love it how u describe robbie in ur ff 😛 ahhh my jaan 😛 ur ff is getting romantic n romantic as each day is passing 😳 n i hope devika is not planing any of her evil plans

okkk hun lookin farward 2 ur nxt part 😍 plzzzz continue soon 😃 waiting impatiently

Hey everyone,

Sorry for the delay in replying to your posts. I was out the whole day today!
I am very happy to see your replies. I am surprised none of you liked Kasturi's dialog about the mangalsutra! That was my favorite dialog in this part! Very very romantic!!!
And Kasturi closing Robbie's eyes, I thought no one will even notice it!!!!!!! But you all did! 😃

Krishi : I agree this part is very emotional. And I really wanted them to do something adventurous for their honeymoon , though not exactly a honeymoon 😆. I am very very happy to note all the points that you liked in the FF! Its a pleasure to write for you!

Shara : I am glad you noticed the locking of the door issue. I feel that happens in almost all married couple's life! Don't you agree? And thanks for all the appreciation!

And to you and Krishi : What rituals??? As far as I am concerned, the moment they got married, all rituals are complete, so the dhamaka/C-night/D-day can happen any time 😉 !!!!

cutykoo20 : Thank you! 😃 Glad you liked it!

aksn : Thanks for the appreciation shown even without mentioning a word!!!!! 😃

nightsangel : Hey, seeing you here for the first time! I am very happy that you liked it! Welcome!

Manpreet : Thanks dear!!!! Your comments are very valuable and I am very glad you liked the comments! Aur manpreet you never know!!! Kuch bhi ho sakta hai next part mei.............

NazS : Finally, I was able to get 5 lines out of you 😉!!! Thank you so much for the stars!!! A big 🤗

Herman : Yep! Wanted to bring that punjabi touch in! I am sure he would have looked yummy, there!!!! Thanks a lot for liking the parts!!!! And by the way just call me 'P' or as Krishi does 'Pppppp'. That should be good!

Anju : Thanks a lot! I am very happy that you took the time to read this!

RK_fan111 : Kya bolu?????? You exactly got the point and I love you for that!!!!! The problem is, so much happens in the real situation which I cannot write here 😳 and that makes it all the more difficult to actually make it sizzling!!! I have just a few words to play with and trust me it is tough !!!! But I hope I have done an acceptable job! Glad it reminded you of your honeymoon!!! Maybe its time for a second honeymoon 😉 !!! Thanks a lot for liking the poem and the dialogs. I give a lot of importance to dialogs and actually put a lot of effort in thinking them up!
I appreciate your comments. 🤗

white star : I sooooooooooooooo missed you!!! But I can understand that you must have been busy. Very glad to see you here. Yep, the romance is building up still it does not seem enough. Everyone wants more of it (including me 😆 ). Well, loved to read your comments.

Okkk Ppppppppp

I think we have given u enuff time to rest, relax and also write the next part 😉 , So i guess u must have completed the next part by now 😆

So, are u going to post it??? If not then wen are u going to post it??? Please, Post one part everyday na... I promise, I ll not ask u more than tat and there will be no complaints from our side 😆

P.S: Confrats for the goldie part😆, Hope to see u become IF rockerz one day [5000 posts😆]

Krishi