Maahi Ve...!!! part 17 updated - Page 41

Originally posted by: sahib29

@Kishu tu ab kisi ko ILU nahi kehti toh ismeh hamari kya galti hai 🤣 🤣 🤣 sonu aur main ek dusre ko bol bhi chuke hai aur mehsoos bhi kar chuke hai 😳 😳 😆

Oyyyeee Mannuuuu, Dont underestimate me in this I L U matters 🤣

If i see KP now here this minute then I might even say I L U to him rite here rite now😆

And Sonuuuuu, dont barbaad time in mehsoosfying this luv of Mannu😆, Write the next part soooon😆😆

Krishi

@Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 🤗 🤗 🤗

thankooooos... 😃 for the insight.....now that you explained the logic about why you led the story this way its easier to understand.....

I agree that in real live its the lack of communication or selective communication that breaks the deal....but as opposed to fiction more attempts are made in real life to see that people see reason... 😊

And a high five for being the sporting darling that you are... 👏 👏 👏

nahi re ...mere comments criticism nahi tha....just my perception of how it should be...we get emotional about things that matter to us right 😃 😃 😃 .... you and your FF matters to me and am emotional about it 😊 so always want to see it perfect 😳 😃


Lots of love .....JW 🤗

Hai Sonia, that was a fabulous part..Oh! my you bowled me over with your perfect dialogues and gripping sequence! It was par excellence! 👏 I cant stop clapping dear...awesome!

It had so much of magic.....atlast robbie realised his mothers true colour...I could actuallly visualise how he would enact this part! Hope this happens in the show also!

I loved the way you wrote the song helping us to visulaise! 👏 👏 👏 Superb!!

It was worth all the wait...but now I cant wait dear...so please write fast...dying to know how you take it from here! 😃

wow sonia..wht a part..i don't have any word..
wait kiya wo worth tha..
robbie finally find his mom truth..kasturi come back to him..
robbie get acctident 😭 😭 ..jaldi se kasturi ko bhej do..

jaldi jaldi next part itna powerful likh lo...


payal

oh my god, that was a brilliant part. u explained everything so well. i totally loved it. and i mean it. keep up the gud work.

love
harman 😛

Hey

Sorry about the late comment but I did read it last sunday but just wasn't able to put a comment as I was a bit busy...my bad!

First thank you for the extra long part...but for some reason with ur FF the length is never enough 😆

Ur Devika is NASTY...the way she talked to Kasturi.For some reason I liked it.hmmmm maybe cuz in da show Kasturi is gettin irritatin....

Bechara Robbie,Poor guy.His wife and his mother both r breakin his heart 😭 & he had an accident, hopefully Kasturi will mend his heart 😉 😉

Every single time u nail the characters and make the FF believable👏

Overall can't wait for the next part and in the meantime I'll reread this part again!!!!!!!!

Cheers
Pretz

where are you..................??????pls continue.........dieing to readddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey soniya awesommeeeeeeeeeeee parts dear.plz cont soon.cant wait 2 see wat happen next

Dearest Sonia,

Firstly, very verry sorry for such a delayed reply!! Lagta hai teri bimaari lag gayi hai 😉 🤣 🤣

But man, what an awesome part this was!!!!!!!!!
Fantastic!!!!! Every aspect of it, the emotions, the dialogs, the sentiments, the plot, the description!!!!!!!

LOVED the part!!!!!!! And the length too!!!! It was long and I am feeling so bad to think how much time you must have spent on it!!!

Greatjob dear and thank you so much for keeping us all entertained!!!! 🤗

Hey pragg esse mat kaho yaar maine usko naam diya wo mere piche dhanda lekar pard jayegi 😭 😆 😆 cos yee naam maine hi usse diya hai 😆 jab bhi sonu ki itni tarif sunti hoon hassi band hi nahi hoti 😆

manpreet