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Posted: 17 years ago

wahhhhhh soniaa 👏 👏 👏 bas bagwan kare ke tum ishi update karti raho 😍
omgoshhh wat a long parttt 😛
however it was so saddddd ab bas be karo yeh rona dona updates karna 😆
woohoooo finally robbie kowns about da devil devika 😈 thank godddd all da misunderstandings are clear now ....welll only 75% clear now ... n u betta make sure tht in da nxt all da misunderstandings are clear 100% ..... 😉

nic collection of song 👏 its one of my fav... n oops tum tu ekta nikli if u notice in all her serails she mostly uses dis song wen a theres a misunderstanding between da hubby n da wifyy 😆
okkkk now tht u have given us a very very sad, emtional, n heart breaking part so den plzzz plzzzplzzz give us a very very happy, romantic, n a lovely part.... 😊
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onu nxt part plzzz jaldi ..cant wait for da big part 😳 continue soon hun ..loookin farward 2 nxt part.....😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
Sonishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 🤗 🤗 🤗

hey hey hey....ok i loved the way you write....actually i read it yesterday , but wanted to collect my thoughts and write. I loved the way you wrote...i always do ... 😊 👏 👏 very brilliant and real life. The characters as always seem real and its like a string of images flowing before us. 😃

I am so happy that the Devika truth is out, so kudos to you for that 👏 ....its high time it should be and the sooner Robbie knows it the better....Also because in real life you cannot put up a facade for long..I loved his reaction when he gets to know the truth...you were spot on with the emotions. 👏 Yes the emotion can only be shock , denial and a numb reaction......Like Krishi i too feel if ever and when this actually this happens in the real serial, KP's performace would be worth watching 😊

Also liked the song.....one of my favorites and i have never seen anyone interpose each line of a song so beautifully with the related scene..... 👏 truly fabulous 😃



But Sonia I have a slightly different take on this part (and for that matter even the last 2)...i know i am being different here....I cant understand why Robbie and Kas had to have a grave misunderstanding.....why in your FF.... 😭

Purely and only because whatever i know and have interacted with you...i know that you are a very rational person .....then how can you visualse a misunderstanding that gets extended at length only because of abslolutely no communication.....I can appreciate creative liberty but frankly i for one did not like the misunderstanding leading to divorce twist. 😊 ....

PS : Sorry if my above reaction is different. you know that i have always loved your FF 😊 🤗 ....And I could find the guts to write the above only because it is you.....agar friends se bhi true reactions nahi kahen to kya ....and am sure you know that only a 'hitaishi' will at the risk of own equations give a negative comment

Lots and lots of love 😃

JWMRK
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Posted: 17 years ago

Mannu: Thank you Mannu..... For the lovely comments and also once again for the beautiful b'day post.... love you dear🤗

My God yeh toh ultimatum ho gaya yaar😉.... Nahin yaar even I was fed up with the misunderstandings so had already made up my mind to end it in this part.... chalo achcha hain aapko pasand toh aaya😉😆

Next part main lovely scene jaroor dal doongi😳

@Krishu: First of all thank you once again for the lovely wishes😳

I'm so happy that you liked this part.... Nahin nahin no more misunderstandings from now on😳 I know KP will justify the scene if such a thing happens on TV but that will be again a very painful eppy to watch yaar😕... and I'm sure we are by default in to see KP suffering for sometime now

Will try and continue soon.... pakka😳

@Robina: Hey dear I'm so releived you got your quota of Devika here too😆😆😆... Devika should be proud of herself to have an ardent supporter like you😆.... I genuinely thank you from Devika's side yaar....

don't bother yourself with wat Krishu says😉.... Krishu kya Robina ne tumse kabhi kaha hai ki yahan toh Robbie ka peecha chod de😉😆😆

Thank you so much Robina for the all the encouragement and support😳

@Davia: Yup.... Ab ke liye rona dhona kafi ho gaya na.... I know.... and in next part Robbie will get his smile back😳

@Ash: Thank you so much dear..... na na don't worry this time not ek mahina.... this was the longest time I took to post a part yaar.... I know and I'm very very sorry for that....

Thanx ash for the b'day wishes and I'll write the next part soon with no misunderstandings but only Roka love😳

@Gia: Thanx dear.... I'm glad you liked it😳

@Princess: Thank you Princess.... I'm so glad to know you liked this part so much😳

@ Robinblue: thanx for your wonderful wishes dear😳

You want to see Kastu's reactions.... not to worry next part main woh bhi ho jayega😃.... Glad to know you liked it.... thanx once again😳

@ Sadsunzarsum: Thanx dear😳

@ Whitestar: Ok next part main 100% understanding and no misunderstanding😛.... Ya I know that Ekta uses that song quite often but I like that song too and it was perfect for the situation yaar.... issiliye daal diya😉

Thanks yaar.... Will try to put all the masala in the next part😳

Sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago
@JRRRRRRRRRRRR: Thank you sooooooo muchhhhhhhhh dear...... Don't worry I didn't feel bad at all..... Infact Pragalbha asked me a similar question last time but I couldn't answer her then.....

Now coming to your take on misunderstandings.....

I know exactly what do you mean.... but JR for this ff I had tried to maintain the original characteristics for all the characters and we all know earlier Devika was quite capable of all this scheming and all.... Kasturi was dumb and Robbie a kaan ka kachcha!!!

The next hurdle was the circumstances in which RK got married.... in those circumstances it was very easy to let insecurities and doubts creep in their relationship..... and so it did!!!

It was Devika's plan to put divorce papers in the cupboard and she did it when everyone who could help Kasturi were away and Kasturi was gravely insulted before she made her move.... But her plan backfired as Raunak and Nandini got this whole thing to Puru!! So that divorce papers thing played the last straw in her game and proved to be a big evidence of Devika's doings in front of Robbie which he couldn't deny!!!

Now coming to a little bit of my psycology.... Most couples separate due to lack of communication between them... Its either their egos that lead to misunderstandings..... that is either the people involved in the relationship are too egoistic to clarify things and don't like to explain themselves or are scared and don't want to face the truth.... Denial is not a thing that everyone can handle so they try to avoid it for as long as possible!!!

In RK's case.... Robbie wanted to give time to Kasturi to accept him and forget Girish.... but at the same time he feared rejection.... he didn't want to loose Kasturi as she became the focus of his life... So he didn't want to force himself on her that might make her further move back in her shell.... On the other hand Kasturi never knew Robbie loves her.... She had seen old Robbie who had been harsh on her.... have conspired agianst her and have been with many girls which she has seen with her own eyes... She knew that Robbie had not liked her at all in the beginning.... Now this made it difficlut for her to trust Robbie all the more... So her insecurities grew when Anjali walked into their lives.... Their fear and insecurities made them see things which never existed!!!

I hope I made some sense....

and the last thing afterall its a fiction yaar.... My knowledge of soaps, bollywood and my readings are sure to influence my writing also na 😆

JR and Pragalbha I'm very happy that you expressed your criticisms.... They are all welcome and I didn't feel bad at all.... why should I?? but I hope I made some sense in explaining the factors.

Luv,
Sonia
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Posted: 17 years ago
@sonu wow dear tumne relation par bahut aacha explanation diya hai 👏 👏 👏
actuly sorry yaar maine bhi tumhe kaha ki mujhe tum par gussa aa raha tha

I know ki hum hamesha love scene hi chahate hai ...aur ji bhi nahi barta jitne marzi read karle 😳 😆 but koi twist bhi hona chahiye ...hero ,heroin, and villine yee teeno hi serial ho yaa bollywood movie yaa FF inki jaan hote hai 😳 😉 😆

tumhe itna force karte hai love scene likne ke liye ...but am sure ki ager koi twist nahi hoga toh humhe maza bhi nahi aayega ...

@Praggg yaar tujhe bhi humne kitna force kiya 😆 sorry dear 😳

manpreet
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ sonu main tumhe yee kehna bhool hi gayi ki maine galat nahi kaha in B'day post 😳 kesse karti ho sab 🤔 😳 😆

I Love u my darling 🤗

mannu
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Posted: 17 years ago

Ahhh Chalo koi toh humari problem ko samjha 😉 😆.... thanx Mannu 😆 😆 😆

But seriously Mannu we just write and believe me I enjoy reading your comments more than writng the ff... and I'm sure even Pragalbha will have a similar opinion.... I absolutely don't mind when you guys demand for the lovey dovey scenes... So no need for apologies 😳

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Mannu I love you too🤗 I do nothing special yaar.... just put whatever I feel.... Its you guys who makes it so nice😳

Sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago
Sonu mujhse galti ho gayi kis lardki se sorry keh rahi hoon lazy boon se 😳 😆

but u are so sweet and inteligent and lazy also 😳 😉 😆 just kidding 😆 only for last one 😆

manpreet
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia_s11

@Robina: don't bother yourself with wat Krishu says😉.... Krishu kya Robina ne tumse kabhi kaha hai ki yahan toh Robbie ka peecha chod de😉😆😆

Thanks yaar.... Will try to put all the masala in the next part😳

Oyyyeeee, Robina also likes Robbie.. But u know y?? Main reason is Becos he is SON of Devika🤣

And Madam, I dont want all the masalas in the next part... i want only and ainly Romance romance and romance between only RK... Dont include romance between Puru-Devika noww😆

@Mannu and @Sonu: Ohhhhooo,yahan thoo I L U mesgs zyaada ho raha hia bhaiiiiii 🤣

Krishi

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Posted: 17 years ago
@Kishu tu ab kisi ko ILU nahi kehti toh ismeh hamari kya galti hai 🤣 🤣 🤣 sonu aur main ek dusre ko bol bhi chuke hai aur mehsoos bhi kar chuke hai 😳 😳 😆

manpreet

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