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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi everyone

I really like writing poetry and i've written loads of poems about loads of different things even RK😳 and Raunak-Kasturi. I just wanted to share a few with everyone so i'll be regularly posting my work here and anyone else who wants to contribute and post their poem related to Kasturi because they are most welcome😊

Ok here's the first one i wrote it especially for Karan

When i saw those eyesmy heart skipped a beat

Let me tell you that aint an easy feat

You are indeed a man worth millions

I can feel your heartbeat within the heartbeat of billions

My love for you soars high

But to tell you that I am too shy

With a heart of gold the looks of a Prince Charming

To my friends my obsession for you seems alarming

You have helped me define the word Love

Now im ready to tell

The world and all humanity

That my Love begins and ends with you

I know it isnt that good because its one of my earlier ones and critiscism is indeed welcome.

Do share your views

Lots of Love Tara😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Please someone do comment this is sooo discouraging 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! 😃
it's a wonderful poem tara! 👏 👏
it's a gr8 start and keep up da gud wrk! 😛

X.o.X.o.---Jasmine---x.O.x.O
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujal_kashish

wow! 😃
it's a wonderful poem tara! 👏 👏
it's a gr8 start and keep up da gud wrk! 😛

X.o.X.o.---Jasmine---x.O.x.O

Thankyou sooo much🤗.It feels amazing when a beginner's work gets appreciated😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow! how cute and touching! Nice poem dear!! i loved it 👏

Keep it up!!

Love,
Gracella 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so touching poem yaar!! really nice!! keep adding more 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice 👏 👏
keep them coming
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Tara,

Great poem!!!! 👏
You have a lot of talent!! And I loved the lines rhyming at the end!! Please post more. 😊

And I also think it was a great idea to have a Poet's corner thread. Very convenient, one stop place for all of our talented forum members!

Edited by pragalbha - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Omg thankyou so much a response like this is so overwhelming and not to mention so sweet of you guys🤗

Ok here's another one i wrote and trust me its my own work😳

This one is dedicated to Robbie and Kasturi

Love hurts but i'll welcome the pain

Because of this pain its your love i gain

You might deny your feelings

You might not see me eye to eye

But how can i make you belive

Its your love i live by

Our worlds may forever be apart

Bur your name is carved eternally in my heart

I'll live my live saying your name

Because honey love is no game

When you've lost your heart once

Its gone in all true sesnse

Hey hope everyone like it its been inspired by RK and is dedicated to them and to all the people who love RK😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fabulous poem!! 👏 👏 And as you said it is perfect for RK.
Great job 👍🏼

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