RK-Poets Corner - Page 6

Originally posted by: pragalbha

manny sweetie,

That's right, I invariably write poems from his perspective!!!!! Kya karun, uska dard dekha nahin jaata!!!!

But I have to seriously stop doing that!!!

Awww, I am touched that you want to give it to your bf!!!!!

Thanks dear!!!!

Di u need 2 continue making it from robbiez POV.......im loving it......brilliant.......

OMG.......i gave it 2 ma bf n told him i wrote it but he din't blive it......then i had 2 tell dat u wrote it.....but he was still very impressed....👏

New poems...........

Pehle jo gam diye,
woh dhoke mein diye,
phir jo gam diye,
woh pyaar mein diye,
pehle, dillagi samajhkar maaf kar, na kar
ab ke, dil ki lagee samajh kar zaroor maaf kar!

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Teri aankhon ke saamne se chale jaayange,
Apnaa gam tere dil se mitaa jaayenge,
jo neend teri churaai tujhe lautaa jaayenge,
kyonki bhula degi tu mujhe, yeh teri zid hai

Magar,
Tu na sahi, tere dard ko, hum saath lete jaayenge.
Tu na sahi, teri yaad se, hum raah roshan banaayenge.
Tu hi nahi, teri khusbhoo bhi , hum bhool ke bhi na bhulaayenge
Teri kasam, jeetkar iss doori ko, dar pe tere phir aayenge!

Hats off to u pragalbha! 👏 👏 👏 Like herman has said in the other thread Ur way of writing hindi in English is very good. I am surprised at the way I enjoy ur poems!!! Thankyou so much for taking time out and giving us so much pleasure which this show is actually supposed to give!!!

since long i havnt been 2 dis thread ,read all d poems nw Pragalbha BRILLIANT aur kya kahun shabd kam pad jaate hain aapki talent ki tareef karte waqt .

tara very good poem. and thank u very much for opening this thread.

pragalbha amazing as usual. do u write these poems ur self i doubt because itna achha writer india-forum mein keha se aaa giya. 😆 just kidding dear. i would have been given it to my bf too but i the prob was that i don't have one. 😆 keep up the great work. 👏

hey P, wonderful poems again... i luv how u express Rob's dard in ur words....

I wish Rob will be happy again and we wud see some happy poems tooo from u

Krishi

RK_fan111, Sonali, Harman and Krishi,

Thanks!!!!!!!!! 😃
And yes, once the good days start, I will write happy poems for my dear Robbie again!!!

Just trying to revive this thread!!!!

We have a lot of new members........hopefully some of them are poets and can share some of their poems with us. 😃

This poem has already been posted in the ED thread......


Dedicated to Robbie/KP

Kee thi aapse iltijaa, ke mere saamne na aaye,
Samhalta nahi dil meraa, apna mukhda na dikhaaye,
Hulchul si uthti hai tann mei, aap paas na aaye,
Dol uthta hai mann, aap gaana na gaaye,


Ek na suni aapne...................

Paas aakar, mujhe gale lagaa liyaa
Mujhe chookar, mera hosh udha liyaa
Sharm se band aankhe jab khuli toh
behaal hue jaankar, tha ek khwab woh

Agar aap mujhe khwab hi mei mil sakte hai,
toh yeh aankhe, qayamat tak band reh sakte hai!!

welcome back prag di with ur wonderful poems....Im very jealous cuz i don't noe how 2 write poems .....


aap ne tho mood hi change kar diya......Plzzz continue