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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
👏 👏 awsome!!!!....plz plz plz make robbie fall in luv with kasturi....n add sum romantic scenes of them 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
wow..awesome part n "talking parrroott" i cant stop laughing 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
please con........... soon as u can plzzzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
thnks for all ur comeents..

😊 pls do commenting.. next part on wednesday for sure..
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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here is the next part. ppls do comment after reading..

2.ronak geta call that his friend was met with accident and he was needed to go to kolkata immedietly.. so he leaves.. canceling his pune trip . and then robbies gets idea and says kasturi u have to accompany me to pune.. but sir.. she sayss he replies.. I know but it is just one day trip u can return in night but little late .. she was like ok.. he ask her to come up early morning.. she smiles and sayss mein to ajaaoungii par kya aap sub uthenge.. and she smiles like teasing him.. he sayss kasturi tumein.. iu will get upp u need not worry.. and says tum jasakthi hoo and she leaves.. and he was like kal ke baad u will always remember me kasturi chawla.. .. and smiles..

kasturi comes back to home .. he says maa kal muje jaldi uthna hoga aur muje pun eke liye bnikalna hoga.. lekin beta.. aap phikar matt kijiye,.. unko pata hai hai kii muje ghar se bahar rehne aalllowed nahi hai.. aur ye tripp sub jakar shyaam koo lauthne wale hain. Isliye aap logon ko phikar karne kii koi jarrorat nahii .. aacha beta bahut raat hochukii sone chalet hainn and both goes.. and next day morning around 4 a.m she gets upp and gets ready within half an hour and leaves for her work.. her mom was also waken and sayss baghwan kare tumhare din acche se bite .. aur tum jaldii lauthii..

then she goes thinking she should go and wake him knowing that he will not be awake .. and sees that he was ready waithing for in standing in front of car sitting over the car dikki and was whisling.. kasturi gets shocked .. and was like sir aap .. he says chalein????? She says yes sirr.. with a shocked face… and he starts to drive and she was sitting next to him in the paseenger drive..and she was trying the seat belt.. and he stops seeing it and then helps her to do it.. and then he start the drive.. and she slowly starts to feel sleepy and sleeps.. and then he sees and then smile and then muje neend se uthakar tum kud so rahi ho.. and suddenly he press the break forcely which makes her come out of her sleep and says ahhhh and Robbie smiles.. saying don't sleep it make also too feel sleep .. isliye.. waise bhii agar muje bhi neend agayii to we both need to sleep permantly that too inside the sand..

then they somehow reach pune.. and goes to the meeting.. the meeting goes smoothly after that they have arranged for breakfast and they have it.. and after having it.. kasturi sayss sir agar meeting katam hogayi too kya hum nikalsathe hain?he sayss nahii shyaam ko ek aur meeting yahi hai isliye we need to be here itself.. par sir.. he sayss kasturii agar tum ye poochne wali hook ii shyaam tak hum kaha rehenge ya kya karenge too I tell we wil be in my guest over here .. and before it we need to go for shopping as look at ur dress.. it is already creased.. and what colour is this same green soo dull soo .. I think I need to change ur style.. first as I don't want to make my self look down In front of others.. isliye chalo.. and both go out….

Preview: robbies chosees a dres for kasturi…

Promo:something Robbie does with kasturi..

davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
👏omg..i love ur fanfic..but i think this part was kinda short...Robbie takes her shopping hehe..
Hmmm..Robbie is going to do something with Kasturi..y do i have a feeling he's going to rape her..plz continue very soon..as in i can't wait for the next part...i m so in to this fanfic.. 👏
Edited by koolkat - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolkat

👏omg..i love ur fanfic..but i think this part was kinda short...Robbie takes her shopping hehe..
Hmmm..Robbie is going to do something with Kasturi..y do i have a feeling he's going to rape her..plz continue very soon..as in i can't wait for the next part...i m so in to this fanfic.. 👏

wait for it. what is robbie upto.. but thnks for ur reply.. haan sorry for the short update but next time will be long..

davia

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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
😭 lagta hai jyada logon ko paand nahi aaya...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
👏 i have a suggestion please give gaps after each line i mean after each line give one line space in that way it will be easy to read 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: ANJANA

👏 i have a suggestion please give gaps after each line i mean after each line give one line space in that way it will be easy to read 😊

thnks for the sugg i will do it.. thnks for reply

davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago

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