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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnks for replies.. next update tom..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Just scanned through the pages must say interesting plot u have got me curious to know wht will happen in the next part 👏

Luv,

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Posted: 18 years ago
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updates tiommorrow typed half but kya karron guest hai too..sorry for the delay.. wanting ur all supprott ot continue..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
great ff 👏
please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry for late update...

and a short update..

3.now both go to a shop she sayss sir lagta haii yahan sb mehenga hongii hum kahii aur nahi chal sakte hain.. and he keeps his hand over his forehead… and sayss u need not worry I will pay.. par sirr.. tumhare salar se nahi katungii.. ab too chaloo and drags her.. and then he (as it was morning their were the first customer .. and they were welcomed warmly because of Robbie populartity…. )he says jee muje accha saa salwar kameez dikayii hai.. meriliye nahi inkeliye… jee aaye.. and was taken and she showed different kinds.. whatevr the lady showed she was like ok and nice.. but doesn't anything feeling all are very expensive.. . then robby comes fast and picks a red chudidar and sayss ye loo this is perfect.. and it was 3000 rupees.. and he ask her try it and she wears it and comes and when he sees her and he suddenly feels like he has seen a model in front of him.. and mitwa song is played. and she asks too ye teek hai sir he was like kya.. and she asks to ye final hai sir??? He sayss haan yahi pehnloo and she syas teek hai mein change karloon?he was like ok.. and they change .. and they buy it and leave… on leaving he says kasturi ek min and goes back and says I will come now.. and she was standing there waithing for him.. and after few min he comes.. and she ask kahan gaye the.. bathroom do u have a problem nahi.. par.. par kya??????? Kuch nahi.. and they goo and within few min they reach the guest house
on getting out of the car she see the house which is not big but really sweet with garden and a fountain inbetween it.. and flowers were planted all over.. and she gets lost in that.. and he snaps his fingers in front of her and ask what happen she sayss woo showing the garden and says bahut hii sundar hai…. Woo sab baad mein deklene pehle andar chaloo.. and they both goes and only one butler was there and Robbie ask him to show kasturi her room and he goes saying he will come in few min… and he goes.. and he ask her to take rest and he will come back in while.. and goes.. and she was shown her room . and on entering she was surprised at the sight as it was quite a big room and in the middle was a king size bed.. and gets surprised .. and was like aaj tak meine ye sab kuch sapnon mein hi deeki hain ya phir tv mein par.. ab.. and goes and sit there in the sofa.. did not know why she dint sit in the bed.. and then the butler comes in with some tea and says mam aapkeliye.. lekin.. sir ne aapka dyaan rakne keliye kaha.. and she was like ok.. and he sayss agar aapko aitraaz na hoo to mein aapse kuch kehna chata hoon haan kehaiye.. he sayss muje bahar jana hai sabji lane keliye aaj naukar bi nahi aaya kya aapk bahar baitkar ghar ko dekbal karenge tab tak mein nahi lauthi. She says okk ismein poochne ki kya baat haii .. mein dekloongi aap jayiye and he leaves.. and
and she drinks the tea and goes out and places the thing in the dinning and goes and sits in the soafa and sees around the house.. and then feels like using bathroom and goes in and after few min comes out and sits in the same place and watches tv.. and slowly falls asleep.. few hours later she looks it was lunch time and sees that servant had returned and says trhat she was sleeping so he dint disturb.. and then Robbie comes down stairs.. and sayss kyun maharani kii neend puri hogayi??????she was like what?.. (as she doesn't know what happen after she was made to sleep…………hmhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmm a secret which will ruin kasturi's life..) he sayss meri neend karab karke kud itni aaram se sorahithi.. sir woo mein.. buaa buaa .. go and have ur lunch and get ready soon as it is nearing 3 already… we have meeting don't forget … she then thinks how ccan she sleep for soo long and get ready soon after having lunch..
few min later they leave for the meeting….and after the meeting they head back to their homes….

Preview:kasturi's wedding date is fixed.. and robbies owes to destroy her…

Promo:kasturi says meine aise kuch nahi kiya. Aab sab log mujpar yakeen kyun nahi karte.. ye sab joot hai.. and ..she was send out of the house..
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
omg..wow awesome part..u finally continue..will say some more but later rightg now i have to go.. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
fantastic.. 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
really nice, pls do continue soon. you have a very creative writting style. can't wait until the next part comes. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
plz davia continue awesom i really got hooked 2 it
u r really very creative yaar kaash balaji mein aap jaise log hote..
hope u wont separate rk in future 😉
plz continue i m eagerly waitin for next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
cool.......very good........thanks 😊

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