FF-Thoda Sa Pyaar(RoKa)NEW-part-47 to 50 pg107 - Page 19

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Posted: 16 years ago
part 15 was very sweet.What all robbie said to Kasturi was soo sweet.
Part 16 was great.I really liked this line "
leaving a big gap between them sufficient enough for minimum of six children to sleep in between "😆
so we are finally gonna know robbies past ....kool😊
roka hug was soo cute.....luved it
will be waiting for next update
m happy that all the misunderstandings will be cleared on the first day of marriage itslef....hopefully😃


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Posted: 16 years ago
hey where r u?????😕......
no reply no post...
hmmm....seem to be very busy..


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Posted: 16 years ago
So sweet part....can't wait for another one!
please update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow 2 great parts!

I feel for both of them Kas blames Robbie for Kiran's death and Robbie has been told by his wife that she hates him

Eager to find out what happens next

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: missindia26

Awesome parts Shumi!!! 👏thanks 😊
Loved all the post-wedding rituals and very nice how you explained the symbolism of each one
😊
"hamara kamra hai, mai thumai bahuth kush rakgoon ga.dunyaan ki har ek kushee thunga.sirf pathi nahee mai achcha dost bhee banoonga." -
aw Robbie is trying so hard to make her happy
😛such mai.let us see how far he is going to succede in his love

Loved his room btw very rich and glamorous 😉his room rocks!!! even in the serial i love his room settings
Love how Robbie takes such care of her, covering her up, leaving such a large space between them... 😳wish they come closer soon😳
Aw poor Kasturi crying so much and bechara bemused Robbie 😭poor girl losed her sister isn't it?
Wow you dropped the bombshell bout Kiran...she committed suicide because of Robbie's rejection..? 😲hahaha....huwa na blast sahee waqth pay😉
Cant wait to hear the whole proper story 😊it will not disclose every thing in one single part.you have to wait for few more parts.😃hahaha...i can see you like this😡
Thanks for the great part update soon
😃will try to up date today

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: muneefah

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!1😉
PLZ PLZ PLZ update damn soon i will

JALDI JALDI doing doing inshaallah today
a v touchy part yet well-written thanks

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: DREAM GIRL

literally great great part....................👏thanks thanks thanks 😭don't cry soon every thing will be fine
very good.......thanks..
kirans truth revealed......yep.most awaiting part isn't it?
hmm new twist really good lot more is awaiting😃
bohat mza aaya parh k......keep reading and enjoy

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey ur ff is awsome. Love it. Plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: DREAM GIRL


but wat guesses about ...they guessed about kiran's relation with robbie long before...did u asked the readors to gues it or they did it themselves......they did by them self due to curiosity .i like it when they do so😊.

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Posted: 16 years ago
PART-17

kasturi wiped her dripping nose by rubbing it on her sleeves ,fall back on the bed with out control and turned herself other side of him.small small jerks in her body showed that she was wincing.robbie was literally sweating.looking at kasturi's physical and mental condition he understood that there was on use of talking to her.he tried to calm down himself first.
he got down from the bed ,went to the fridge,pulled the door and grabbed a water bottle.opened it in hurry and drank the water non stop directly from the bottle,left out water he poured it on his face to chill down.before closing the fridge he took another water bottle from it, went to kasturi and kept the water bottle beside her on the bed.he looked at the time.it was 2 am.he took his wallet along with car key and left the room.

sat in to his car and started driving randomly...aimlessly.he let out all his frustrations and emotions in his rash driving.he drew till his shoulder started hurting ,wrist started paining.when he was back home it was 6am.while entering sabarwal house he guessed nandu and his wife (!!!!!!!!!😳...can you guess who can be she????)were busy in the kitchen.he went up , straight to his room, climbing two two steps.he reached his room and found kasturi sleeping, the water bottle left out with one fourth water was lying beside her.

with a sigh he moved away from her and went to wash room for a shower.when the hot water showered on his face with force he felt as if his mental stress and tension was washing out.he stood in the shower for a long time until wrinkles started forming in his fingers.

it was a saturday:

hangama day for chawala house.holiday, masthee and kushee day for kasturi and kiran.

kasturi was lying on the bed upside down hugging a pillow. raising Sun rays peeped through the window,pricked her eyes sharply and disturbed her sleep.

kasturi:'ufff...this sun light...' she shrunk her eyes and woke up scolding the sun .she looked at the wall clock.for her surprise it was showing 6:30am.

kasturi:'what😲? 6:30 only😛...let me sleep for some more time'she said to herself and turned on other side to continue her sleep.but she could not.the sun rays fall on her back and tickled her with its warmth.

kasturi:'ufff...ab mai utti jaathee huon...'she got up from the bed getting annoyed with the sunlight.she went and closed the curtains of the window.

'today for a change let me make tea and surprise dii...'she said to herself and went to the kitchen to make tea.she kept s steel vessel on the gas stove ,added lot of sugar,milk and tea leaf ,made strong concentrated tea.filtered in small cups ,arranged in a tray to take it to kiran's room.

kiran was still sleeping which was unusual for kasturi.usualy she use to wake up by 6am sharp that too with out the help of alaram.now it is going to be 7am.

'is dii is not feeling well?😕...'with that thought she kept the tea try on the table and sat beside kiran.

kasturi:'ummm😛...dii kyaa baath hai?.abhee thak soorahee ho...am i disturbing your sweet dreams?😉...'

kasturi:'utto...thay kho mai nay thumhaaray leyeah chai banaa yee hai...😃'
kiran:🤢.....

kasturi:'saaray ka saara dooth shakkar chai pathee...poora dalthee...'
kiran:🤢....

kasturi:'chai nahee...chai pathee ka kheer hai yeah😉...'
kiran:🤢....

kasturi:'...come on get up and try my tea...'she shook her.
kiran:🤢.......

kasturi:'mai boolthee hee jaarahee huon...'while she was shaking her she realized stiffness in her body.
kiran:🤢......

kasturi:'😲dii...diii...'she pat on her cheek.

'why her cheek is so hard😲...'a feeling of fear raised up from her stomach and stuck in her throat.
kiran:🤢........

kasturi:'diii...😲😕'she took her hand up and realized that her body temperature is very much below the normal temperature.with shock she left her hand down.kiran's hand fall down with out control and hanged out side the bed.from her hand sleeping pills bottle fall down and rolled on the floor.kasturi stared at the bottle senselessly.

kasturi:'diiiii😲....ddiiii😭....thumai kya hoga ya.utto diii...😭' words refused to come out from her mouth.
kasturi:'uttooo😭.....uuttooo😭....thum issa kaisaa kar sak thee😭😭...?'she broke out and screamed with all her energy.
Edited by robbii - 16 years ago

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