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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: reenbana
hi di how r u?....fine fine...by the grace of almighty sorry im late take your time dear but very nice part di thanks robbie is so cute n roka rocks but why kasturi dont like all these things aakhir aisa koun sa raaz hai di?read my up comming parts to know about the raaz plz update soon di all over it was amazing interesting!😊thanks

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missindia26

@missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

#172

Awesome parts Shumi!!! 👏
Loved all the post-wedding rituals and very nice how you explained the symbolism of each one 😊
"hamara kamra hai, mai thumai bahuth kush rakgoon ga.dunyaan ki har ek kushee thunga.sirf pathi nahee mai achcha dost bhee banoonga." -
aw Robbie is trying so hard to make her happy 😛
Loved his room btw very rich and glamorous 😉
Love how Robbie takes such care of her, covering her up, leaving such a large space between them... 😳
Aw poor Kasturi crying so much and bechara bemused Robbie 😭
Wow you dropped the bombshell bout Kiran...she committed suicide because of Robbie's rejection..? 😲
Cant wait to hear the whole proper story 😊
Thanks for the great part update soon 😃

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meepha

@Meeph

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Posted: 16 years ago

#173

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
PLZ PLZ PLZ update damn soon

JALDI JALDI
a v touchy part yet well-written

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DREAM GIRL

@DREAM GIRL

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Posted: 16 years ago

#174

literally great great part....................😭
very good.........
kirans truth revealed......
hmm new twist really good
bohat mza aaya parh k......

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DREAM GIRL

@DREAM GIRL

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Posted: 16 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: robbii
PART-16

this part was dedicated to nehaa nawab and swan20 aka anu who guessed robbie's past correctly.

but wat guesses about .....did u asked the readors to gues it or they did it themselves......

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DISHA MAIR

@Disha8

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Posted: 16 years ago

#176

oh diiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.it wasawesome.enjoyed it completely. fabulous concept.ddddddyeing........................to read the next part.secondly i m very sorry for replying so late.actually now i've chosen the non med stream so its a great burden.but thanks a lot for the pm. i wont miss even a single line of ur ff.

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DREAM GIRL

@DREAM GIRL

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Posted: 16 years ago

#177

hey so after writing a gud part plzzzzzzz....dont take a long break.......
update soon;-)

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swan20

@swan20

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Posted: 16 years ago

#178

Part 15.......all the rituals & the symbolism of each was beautifully described. All these rituals are so significant for a newly wed couple but it must have been an ordeal for kasturi.....

loved how you described robbie's bedroom & how you showed him talking about all the things in it.......Shumi you have a wonderful knack of engaging your reader & making them visualise what you have written.......👏 👏 👏

Part 16......thanks so much for dedicating this part to me.....🤗.......but to be honest it was neha who guessed it right so all the credit should go to her...😊

so the truth is finally out....

kasturi's cry was heartwrenching.....😭.......it was as if a dam had burst open & all her pent up emotions were pouring out......😭

i feel bad for robbie too.......imagine being told on your wedding night that your wife's sister committed suicide because she was in love with you..............i think this love of hers was one sided & robbie didn't know anything of it........even if this is true kasturi won't believe him........

story is getting very interesting........waiting to know what happens next......😊

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Pepsi

@Savvy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#179

u write soooo well shumi dii....👏

Robbie is jus too good 😛...u were ryt that he'd be more understanding in future...it was so good to see him taking so much care of kasturi n speaking to her so much sweeetly n ye leaving biggggg gaps...😳

n finally u revealed kiran's story....hope Robbie did nt have any kind of affair with her n kiran's love was jus one-sided...😳

nw i jus can't wait fr the nxt update....plzz plzz plzz update as soon as possible..😊

1 more fing..plzz nominate urself fr Favorite FF writer...😃