FF-Thoda Sa Pyaar(RoKa)NEW-part-47 to 50 pg107

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: DREAM GIRL
part 7 was just awesome.....great ........wonderful...............fantastic...................really goooood..........thank you sooooo much for all those goody goody words...😃
👏👏👏........kasturi running from the coffee shop and ro running after her and than holding her hand...............hmmmm bohat acha tha....................👏😉 i know it was a romantic scene
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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: DREAM GIRL
again part 8 was too good.......thanks........ro is too brave ...wo to ka k ghar aaaaaaaaaa gaya....such mai.i think love gives them super natural power😉

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Kriya_RoKa luvr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#163

part 10 n 11....superb parts dii....

alana u r sooooooooo nice in dis ff....

n maasi.....very funny!!!!!wat all non sense she was saying....

yeaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh kas ki mehndi....

ohhh i'm soooooooo happy for roka marriage.....

but dos wrds which u told me r still echoing in my mind dat..... "robbie falling for kasturi will be unfortunate for robbie"....

heading towards next part dii...

Ncehu

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Kriya_RoKa luvr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#164

look! they are changing their var mala!!!!! aren't they cute????

no dey r not luking cute....but der luking like....some word which will be never discovered with da meaning of beautiful....

awesoem superb aprt dii....

yea roka is married!!!

i just lived dez wrds dii:

"we have taken the seven steps. you have become mine forever. yes, we have become partners. i have become yours. hereafter, i cannot live without you. do not live without me. let us share the joys. we are word and meaning, united. you are thought and I am sound. may the night be honey-sweet for us. may the morning be honey-sweet for us. may the earth be honey-sweet for us. may the heavens be honey-sweet for us. may the plants be honey-sweet for us. may the sun be all honey for us. may the cows yield us honey-sweet milk. as the heavens are stable, as the earth is stable, as the mountains are stable, as the whole universe is stable, so may our unions be permanently settled."

i'm a muslim so i dnt noe wat pandits say while marriage....

heading toward snext part dii....

Nechu

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sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#165

hi di how r u?sorry im late but very nice part di robbie is so cute n roka rocks but why kasturi dont like all these things aakhir aisa koun sa raaz hai di?plz update soon di all over it was amazing interesting!😊

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev
part 10 n 11....superb parts dii.... thanks
alana u r sooooooooo nice in dis ff....yep.you will find her more sweet later on

n maasi.....very funny!!!!!wat all non sense she was saying....heeee

yeaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh kas ki mehndi....cute na

ohhh i'm soooooooo happy for roka marriage.....me too

but dos wrds which u told me r still echoing in my mind dat..... "robbie falling for kasturi will be unfortunate for robbie"....you are right.he will find hard time with kasturi

heading towards next part dii...heading towards the next comment😃

Ncehu

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DREAM GIRL

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Posted: 16 years ago

#167

y havent u updated till now....😡
kiddng..😉
plz update soon

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#168

PART-15

vidaai -a most emotional part of the marriage:

after the dinner in chawala family the sabarwal family got ready to move to sabarwal house.shaantha came to kasturi's room to help her.

shaantha:'thum nay pooray zaywaraath nikaal thee...?'she said looking at kasturi's empty neck and hands.

kasturi:'wo...muchay bahuth hurt kar rahay thay...'she found the excuse.

shaantha:'kam say kam mangal southr aur chudiyaan tho payhan lo...'she insisted and made her to wear both the hand full of red bangles and mangal southr by force.

now it was time for kasturi to leaves her parents' home and makes her way to sabarwal house. JP and ajay hugged kasturi from both the sides and cried along with her.every one stood still looking at them.after a while shaantha came forward to broke that emotional moment.

shaantha:'pag pheray kay leyeah fir kal kasturi aayeah gee.thab thoda rolay na.....😊'she criticized and sign them it is getting late.

robbie got the blessings of JP by touching his feet and hugging ajay.JP and ajay were emotionaled,unable to speek.JP hold kasturi's hand and placed in robbie's hand.he want to request robbie and his family to take care of kasturi but could not.warm tears shed down on his cheek constantly.robbie under stood his emotions.

robbie:'aap fikr math ki ji yeah😊.mai kasturi ko kush rak ghoon ga' he assured him.

kasturi stepped out of the chawala house with sabarwal family.she threw back hand full of rice over her head, in a way that it falls on the person standing behind her, as a symbol of wishes for prosperity to always flourish in the house she is leaving behind.

with non stop tears kasturi left behind her house and family unwillingly and reached sabarwal house with heavy heart.

sabarwal house griha pravesh:

kasturi and robbie got down from the decorated car.they were stopped by alana and other elderly ladies of sabarwal house at the threshold.alana took the aarti to both robbie and kasturi in order to get rid of any evil eye.

robbie:😊...'with a smile he took few hundred rupees notes and put it in aarti thali.

0n the entrance, maasi kept a small bronze vessel filled with rice .kasturi gently spilled the grains on the threshold of sabarwal house with her right foot to denote the arrival of fertility and wealth in her marital home.

alana brought red colour water in a big round tray and kept it in front of kasturi.kasturi raised her maroon lehanga little bit up, put her right foot into the tray of red colour water and then her left foot too.with both her feet dipped with red colour kasturi stepped in sabarwal house along with robbie symbolizing the arrival of good fortune and purity.robbie followed her.step by step they moved forward leaving red foot prints.she claimed the upstairs along with robbie leaving alana and others behind.

they reached robbie's room.robbie pushed the door and wide opened his room.

robbie:'come...😊' he entered in .kasturi stepped behind him.

robbie:' yeah may ra kamra hai....😃'he stretched both his hands side ways and looked around, turned around once thoroughly enjoying that moment.

kasturi:....stood still as a stranger.

robbie:'aaj thak maira kamra tha...aaj say... ab say... yeah hamara kamra hai...😛'

kasturi looked here and there as if a child looking at a puzzle.

a big round bed in the middle covered with maroon sateen cloths,four white square pillows on it, big blowups of rock star robbie decorating the bed side wall.big luxurious chandeliers hanging in the middle of the ceiling , near the big wide window wind chimes jingling with the wind...even though the room was not decorated with jasmine flowers,rose petals ,candles etc it was very neat and scented with room refresher to receive her.white marble floor reflected her face.she got lost in that room.

robbie moved forward and went near his drums set.

robbie:'when ever i am angry i play this...😛'he took the drum stick and hit the drum once to produce a angry note.

robbie:'when i am happy then also i play this ...😃'again he hit the drum with happy note.

he moved to other side where there were collection of guitars.

robbie:'these are all my favorites... my friends.jab bhee mai mood out hojatha huon insay milnay aajatha huon...'he touched the instruments with love.pushed one of its string with his index finger and made the inhormonic sound.

kasturi was standing reluctantly beside him for name sake with no interest.

he moved on towards a mini bar with a mini fridge beside it.

robbie:'yeah srif bar nahee hai.mai ra dosth hai.i come here when i am dipressed or upset...'

robbie:'...this is my room from my child hood.when i was small this room was filled with toys and decorated with cartoons,later on with books, cups, trophys and bollywood star blow ups.now with CDs and musical instruments...'kasturi did not care to listen to him.

robbie:'come...'😊he hold her hand with care and took her to his bed.

robbie:'baitto...'made her sit . he too sat beside her leaving sufficient gap in between them.

robbie:'patha hai thumai?aaj mai bahuth kush huon.😃'his face showed that he was on cloud nine.

robbie:' actually i want to talk to you before marriage....but i did not get the chance for that...' he continued.

robbie:'😊...uummm... i know you have less interest in me.par thum muchay bahuth achchee lag thee ho.patha nahee issa kyun?i have met hundreds of girls.unn mai say thum alag ho.i feel happy when ever i see you.i like to be with you.why so😕? i don't know...don't understand either...😕'

robbie:'but one thing i can assure you...thumaa ray marzee kay khelaaf yahaan kuch nahee ho ga.you can feel at home...'he took her palm in to his.

robbie:'mai thumai bahuth kush rakgoon ga.dunyaan ki har ek kushee thunga.sirf pathi nahee mai achcha dost bhee banoonga.😊'he assured keeping his other palm over hers.

kasturi:😳

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#169

PART-16

this part was dedicated to nehaa nawab and swan20 aka anu who guessed robbie's past correctly.

robbie felt very much relived and relaxed after expressing his feelings to kasturi.

he looked at the silky-smooth sky blue cotton sateen long collar fleece shawl night robes kept on the bed.he leaned back and took them,replaced kasturi's set on the bed for her to wear.

robbie:'thum ab relax karlo😊...i would like to refresh myself...' he said looking at his sherwani and went to wash room.

after a quick hot shower robbie came out of the wash room tieing his night robe. he came to the bed wiping his head with the turkey towel and looking at kasturi.she was lying with her lehanga choli at one edge of the bed turning on her right side.her ghunkhat was lying beside her.she was curling her self as a shrimp and sleeping without even a pillow.

for a second he admired her posture with a smile spread on his face.he threw the towel down,moved forward took the pillow in one hand,with out disturbing her sleep he slowly raised her head supporting her neck with his other hand and placed the pillow below her head.he took the ghunkhat ,spread it across her shoulders covering her chest.

switched off the lights leaving night pulps on .he walked around the bed and went to the other side of it.pulled a pillow and slide on the other edge of the bed leaving a big gap between them sufficient enough for minimum of six children to sleep in between.her presence in his bed room, on his bed ,beside him ,gave a feeling of pleasure in him.he closed his eyes,took a peaceful breath thinking in his mind 'she is all mine 😛' and went to sleep.

in middle of the night robbie got disturbed with some kind of sound which he cannot figure it out what it is.he turned his neck towards kasturi and could not find any disturbance in her.he closed his eyes and tried to sleep.again he got disturbed with that sound .it was a kind of crying,weeping ,sobbing.he immediately got up on his bed and moved towards kasturi.

robbie:'kasturi....😕'he touched her shoulder ,slowly turned her towards him and shocked to find her weeping.

robbie:'😲...kasturi...kya huwa?' he asked.looking at her red eyes and puffy face he under stood that she was crying for a long time.he supported her and made her sit on the bed.first time kasturi raised her eyes and looked at him directly in to his eyes.

kasturi:😭

robbie:'kasturi please...chup hojawo...'he wiped her tears from her cheeks.she pushed his hands suddenly and quickly.

kasturi:'thum bahuth buray ho...😭'she burst in to loud cry.

robbie:'ssshhhh...k..ast..uri...'he quickly grabbed and encircled her in his arms,hold her face on his wide chest,caressed her head.

robbie:'kasturi...please...stop crying.dii may hear your cry...'for a second she forgot about herself.buried her face deep in to his chest,rubbed her face and made his chest wet with her tears.

robbie:'if i would have hurt you i am sorry...'he regrected.

kasturi:😭

robbie:'i love you...'he hold her strongly against him and tries to pacify her.He just cannot see her in so much pain.

kasturi:'😡😭.....i don't like you..'she pushed him back and moved out of his hug.

robbie:'😲....kasturi...'he lose his balance both physically and mentally.

kasturi:😡... hard and angry look creeped into her eye.

robbie:'please don't say that. it hurts me...'he tried to touch her cheek.

kasturi:'don't...'she turned her face away from his hand and clinched the bed spread and moved back.

kasturi:'i hate you...😭'she tried to control her tears and whispered.

robbie:'please kasturi.stop saying that.mai nay thum say pyaar kiya hai...💔'his heart wrenched with pain.

kasturi:'srif much say he nahee....thumaary pyaar kay jaal mai hazaaron ladkiyaan hain...😭'she completely disregarded him.

robbie:'........'he was speach less.got slightly angry too. he tried to controlled it.

kasturi:'do you remember kiran?...your secretary...😭'

robbie:'😕....she resinged her job long before.she is no more my secretary...'his anger dissolves into concern.

kasturi:'she is no more in this world too...😭'said with tears flowing down her eyes

robbie:'😲.....'he was taken aback with her statement.

robbie:'kya!!!!!...😕😲'

kasturi:'wo kiran chawala thee😭....'she contiued with a very harsh look in her eyes.
robbie:'😲.....he helplessly stared at the changing emotions on her face.there was an awkward silence between them for a second.

kasuri:'kiran chawala was my sister...she was not only my sister, she was my mother too....😭'in between her cry she spoke in broken voice.

robbie:😲😲....he recieved a huge shock which was absolutely un expected.kirans face flickered in his mind...going on flickered... non stop.emotions explored with in him.his head stared hurting.he could not fight with his own feelings.

robbie:🤢....he was exhausted mentally and physically.

kasturi:'wo thum say pyaar kar thi thee...😭'

robbie:😲...the situation was shaping up very bad.he felt something dies within him,as if earth quaked and swallowed him.he was able to visualize his castle of love beautifully built by him was falling down to ground level.

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

look! they are changing their var mala!!!!! aren't they cute????

no dey r not luking cute....but der luking like....some word which will be never discovered with da meaning of beautiful....so true dear

awesoem superb aprt dii....thanks

yea roka is married!!!

i just lived dez wrds dii: yep these words are too good.i too liked it

"we have taken the seven steps. you have become mine forever. yes, we have become partners. i have become yours. hereafter, i cannot live without you. do not live without me. let us share the joys. we are word and meaning, united. you are thought and I am sound. may the night be honey-sweet for us. may the morning be honey-sweet for us. may the earth be honey-sweet for us. may the heavens be honey-sweet for us. may the plants be honey-sweet for us. may the sun be all honey for us. may the cows yield us honey-sweet milk. as the heavens are stable, as the earth is stable, as the mountains are stable, as the whole universe is stable, so may our unions be permanently settled."

i'm a muslim so i dnt noe wat pandits say while marriage....heeee...me too😊

heading toward snext part dii....waiting😃

Nechu

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