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Hiya everyone 😊
Thanks for all you comments 😃
Its been quite long but here's the next part 😉
Hope you enjoy it 😛
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Love TJ x
Chapter 32 - Tera Mera Rishta

Robbie quietly entered the room. Kasturi was sitting on the bed, knees pulled up to her chest, brow furrowed as she read over her notes. He crept up behind her and put his arms around her neck.

"Garam garam coffee mere biwi ke liye. Chalo, chalo, kitaab rakdo aur peelo. Itna zyaada padhna bhi acchha nahi hain."

"Robbie, mujhe bahut dar lag raha hain. Agar mein fail hogayi tho?"

"Toh phir se karna. Isme kaunsi bhari baat hain. Bata hain Kasturi, jab college mein mere finals the, mein sab mein fail hogaya tha. Actually, History, Music aur English meine kisi na kisi tarah paas hogaya, par waaki sab mein nahi. Aur kuch bhura hua? Nahi, na.."

"Robbie, mujhe bhadaawa dehne ke bajai yeh kehrahe ho?

"Actually, tum sahi keh rahi ho. Sorry, mein tumhe bahut galat sala dehgaya. Actually, mere kehne ka matlab tha, ke job hi hoga mein tumhare saath ohga. Tum chinta mat karo. Mein hamesha tumhare chehre par sirf muskuraat dekhna chahta hoon. Sirf muskuraat. Par abhi ke liye bas hain. Ab chalo, sojao."

"Theek hain. Goodnight Robbie. I hope tumko acchhi neend aayegi."

"Of course hoga. Tumhari jo sapne dekhnewala hoon."

***

"Aaj mera exam hain, Robbie, mujhe bahut gabrat horahi hain."

"Ek minute. Moo kholo."

"Meethi dhai? Par aapko kaise bata?"

"Kya, Kasturi, tum bhi naa. Mujhe sab bata hain. Kisi shubh kaam se pehle meethi dhai khilaane se sabkuch acchha hojaata hain. Ab chalo, mein tumhe chordehta hoon. Kahaan jaana hain?"

***

"Kasturi, niche aajao. Dekho, sab log aagaye hain."

Kasturi entered, and her and Robbie exchanged hugs and pleasantries with the friends. Preet waved at the circle of people.

"Kya socha tha tum dono, ke aap dono ke maine ke sal gira bhooljaayenge? Jee nahi, chalo, party time!" cheered Preet.

"Par kahaan?" questioned Kasturi.

"Kahaan? Chandni raat, taaron ki baraat, saajan ke saath, haat mein haath, toh phir kaisi.."

"Haan haan, bahut hogayi shaayari. Preet yeh kehna chahta hain, ke hum sab yeh party bahaar garden me rakhenge," explained Meher.

"Theek hain. Toh chalo," grinned Robbie.

***

"Acchha, acchha, sab suno. Ab hum game khelenge. Mein music bajaoonga. Jab gaana rukhenge toh yeh pillow jiske bhi haat mein hain, job hi doosre log kahen , usse karna padega. Jaise naachna, yah, gaan, yeh shayad koi filmi dialogue kehna," clarified Preet. "Theek hain? Acchha, shuru kijye."

He played the music and they tossed the pillow round the circle.

"Shaam hai jaam hai aur hai nasha
Tan bhi hai mann bhi hai pighla huaan
Chhayi hai ranginiya phir bhi hai betaabiyan
Kyun dhadakta hai dil
Kyun yeh kehta
-"

"Robbie! Acchha, mein bataaongi," decided Prachi. "Tumhe hum sab ko gaake batana hoga ke tumhe kaise laga jab tumne pehli baar Kasturi ko dekha tha."

"Jab kisi ki taraf dil jhukne lage

Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage

Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage

Bol do gar tumhe pyaar hone lage

Hone lage, hone lage

Chaahne jab lage dil kisi ki khushi

Dillagi yeh nahin, yeh hai dil ki lagi

Aandiyon ko dabaane se kya faayeda

Pyaar dil mein chhupaane se kya faayeda

Jaan se pyaara jab dildaar hone lage

Bol do gar tumhe pyaar hone lage

Hone lage, hone lage

Jab kisi ki taraf dil jhukne lage

Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage

Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage

Bol do gar tumhe pyaar hone lage

Hone lage, hone lage

Uski khushboo agar apni saanson mein ho

Uska sapna agar apni aankhon mein ho

Jab na dil ke behelne ki surat lage

Jab koi zindagi ki zaroorat lage

Aur jeena bhi dushvaar hone lage

Bol do gar tumhe pyaar hone lage

Hone lage, hone lage

Jab kisi ki taraf dil jhukne lage

Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage

Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage

Bol do gar tumhe pyaar hone lage

Hone lage, pyaar hone lage

Pyaar to hona hi tha, pyaar to hona hi tha.."

"Hai, Robbie, kaisa soondar gaana tha," praised Ragini.

"Main yeh sochke gaaya, ke agar Kasturi mujhe kabhi chor ke jaayengi. Issi khayal ke saath mein shuru hogaya," explained Robbie.

"Nahi, Robbie, mein tumhe akela kabhi nahi choddoongi," promised Kasturi.

The music commenced again.

"Deewanon ko ab tak nahi hai yeh pata
Aaj ki raat khona hai kya paana hai kya
Aaj ki raat khona hai
-"

"Meher! Acchha, Meher, tumhe kuch acting karna hain."

"Acting? Mein? Nahi, nahi, Robbie, mujhe nahi aata, please.."

"Nahi, nahi, koi bahaana nahi chalenga. Ab chalo, tumhe Preet ke liye apna pyaar ka isahaar karna hain, bilkool filmi style mein karna hain."

Preet was pushed into the centre of the circle. Meher took a deep breath and walked towards him. She schooled her expression into one of frustration mingled with affection and launched into a dialogue from Ishq Vishk.

"Tum hamesha aisa karte ho. Pehle mere dil todte hoon, aur phir aise koi stupid si harkat kadke, tumhe lagta hain ke mein tumhe maaf kardoongi. No is baar mein maaf nahi kardoongi mein! Iss stupid masoom chehre se mere dil na pighalwane, don't look at me like that, tum niche dekho! Problem yeh hain na, ke im too good for you, I'm just too good for you! Hans kyun rahe ho? Mein mazaak nahi kar rahi hoon! I hate you, I really hate you!"

Meher flung herself into Preet's arms, tears streaming down her face.

The others cheered and whistled. Meher looked around and felt shy, She hid her face behind her hands, and hurried back to her seat. Preet followed, still a little flabbergasted, but grinning. The music was re-started.

"Kya paana hai kya
Khona hai kya

Do ghadi mein yahaan jaane kya ho gaya
Jo hamesha tha mera dil mera ho gaya
Kaun kiske dil mein hai faisala hoga
Faisala hai yahi jeet hogi meri
Deewaanon -"

"Kasturi!"

"Acchha Kasturi bhabhi, aaj aapke liye yeh jashn hai toh aapko double punishment hain. Aapko Robbie ke saath dance karma hain, aur woh bhi wahi gaane per jo Robbie choonenga," directed Meher.

"Mein wahi gaana choonunga jo Kasturi ka favourite hain, "agar tum mil jao."

""Agar tum mil jao Zamana chod denge hum
Tumhe paa kar zamane bhar se rishta tod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum
Bina tere koyi dilkash nazara hum na dekheinge
Tumhe na ho pasand usko dobara hum na dekheinge
Teri soorat na ho jis mein
Teri soorat na ho jis mein
Woh sheesha tod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum
Tere dil mein raheinge tujhko apna ghar bana lenge
Tere khwaabon ko geheno ki tarah khud par saja lenge
Kasam teri kasamKasam teri kasam
Taqdeer ka roog mod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum
Tumhe hum apne jism-o-jaan mein kuch aise basa lenge
Teri khushboo apne jism ki khushboo bana lenge
Khuda se bhi na jo tooteKhuda se bhi na jo toote
Woh rishta jod lenge humAgar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum
Tumhe paa kar zamane bhar se rishta tod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum"
They both sat down as the others applauded.

"Ab tak nahi hai yeh pata
Aaj ki raat khona hai kya paana hai kya
Khona hai kya
Aaj ki raat khona hai kya paana hai kya
Khona hai kya

Aaon main tumse kahu baat chupke se
Rang badlegi pal mein raat chupke se
Tumko le jaaunga phir saath chhupke se
Jaaoge tum kahaan dekho -"

The music was paused, the pillow in Milind's hands. He quickly tried to stuff it into Prachi's arms. She squealed.

"Nahi, nahi, Milind cheating mat karo," scolded Ranvir. "Aapko Amitabh Bachhan ke style mein naach-gaana karna hain."

"Arrey raam duhaai, kaise chakkar mein pad gaya

Kahaan jaan phasaai, main to sooli pe chadh gaya Kaisa seedha saadha main kaisa bhola bhala haan haan
Arrey, kaisa seedha seedha main kaisa bhola bhala
Jaane kaun ghadi mein pad gaya padhe likhon se paalaa
Meethi chhunri se, meethi chhunri se hua halaal
O chhora o chora

O chora ganga kinaare wala

O khaaike paan banaaras walaKhul jaaye band akal kaa taala O khaaike paan banaaras wala
Khul jaaye band akal kaa taala
Aa dekhe zara kisme kitna hai dum

Jamake rakhana kadam mere saathiya

Aa dekhe zara kisme kitna hai dum

Jamake rakhana kadam mere saathiya

Jummaa chummaa de de, jummaa chummaa de de chummaa
Jumme ke din kiyaa jumme kaa waadaa
Jumme ko tod diyaa jumme kaa waadaa
Le aa gayaa re phir jummaa-

Jummaa chummaa de de, jummaa chummaa de de chummaa"

He pulled Prachi into the circle with him, continuing to sing as they both discoed to typical moves such as the "khaike paan" routine.

***

"Acchha, suno sab log. Mere paas ek fool-proof plan hain. Mein sabko batasakta hoon, ke unne kitne bacchhe hoge," announced Milind.

"Mein nahi maanta," declared Shabd sceptically.

"Acchha, theek hain. Dekho. Chalo, Meher, aaja. Haath aage rakho."

Preet flourished a chain, from which a ring was suspended in place of a pendant. He dangled it into Meher's palm, up and down three times.

"Ladka!"

"Aur ab baari hain hamari pyaari Kasturi ki." She shyly extended her hand and he repeated the process.

"Ladki!"

"Aur ab, tum haath dedo, '."

"Ladka. Ladki. Ladka. Ladki. Ladka. Ladki."

"Hai re, bas karo yaar. Mardaalenge mujhe?"'

"Tujhe? Mere baare mein toh sochye. Pehle mein marjaaongi."

"Mein nahi maanti, Milind," pointed out Gauri.

"Dekhenge, dekhenge. Jab Robbie aur Kasturi ki beti hogi, tab sab dekhenge ke mein sahi tha. Kyun, Kasturi bhabhi?"

Kasturi simply looked down bashfully. Robbie squeezed her hand.

"Par ek baat toh bataaye, yeh special formula hain kya?" questioned Meher.

"Simple. Agar ring clockwise spin kare toh ladka, aur agar anticlockwise toh ladki."

"Acchha. Toh yeh tha raaz?"

"Haan par dekhna, 100% sach hojaayenge mere saare predictions."

"Haan, haan, dekhenge. Ab chalo, cake kaat lehte hain!" yelled Preet.

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Posted: 16 years ago
woohoo!!!!!! me first!!!!!!!!!!!! oops my comments are gna be posted between yur hindi and english translations lol
FABTASTIC part TJ!!! 👏 👏 👏 Loved all of it from start to end!!! 😃
okay where do i start 🤔....ummm okay i'll start from the start 😉
aww kasturi feeling nervous 4 her exams...kno that feeling!!! 🤢
hehe and robbie giving her bad advice!! lol he failed most of his subjects!!! 😆
aww how sweet robbie feeding kasturi meethi dhai!! 😳
wooo loved the next part!!! the game was awesome!!!! 😛
loved the song robbie sang 4 kasturi!!! very sweet!! 😳
omg ishq vishq!!!!! i loooooove that film!!!!!! 😃 haha good dialogue from meher!!! 😉 fab scene 👍🏼
awww RoKa dancing together!!! 😳 😳 😳 beautiful song too!! 😛
hehe the milind-prachi scene was funi too!!! i could imagine them!!! 😃
and the last part was mind-blowing!!!! 👏
love milind's baby predicting thing!!! 😉
aww roka will have a girl!!! hw sweet!! 😳
"Ladka. Ladki. Ladka. Ladki. Ladka. Ladki." 😲 😆

"Hai re, bas karo yaar. Mardaalenge mujhe?"'

"Tujhe? Mere baare mein toh sochye. Pehle mein marjaaongi."
hahahahaha loved these lines tj!!!!! 😆 Well done!! 👏
All in all a wonderful part tj!!! 😃 And well written!! 👍🏼
Maza aa gaya yaar!!! 😛
Update next part soon!!!! 😊
Love ya 🤗
Hinna xx
Edited by ..-..RoKa.._.. - 16 years ago
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Chapter 32 - Tera Mera Rishta (english)

Robbie quietly entered the room. Kasturi was sitting on the bed, knees pulled up to her chest, brow furrowed as she read over her notes. He crept up behind her and put his arms around her neck.

"Hot hot coffee for my wife. Come, come, put down your book and drink it. Too much studying isn't good."

"Robbie, I'm feeling really scared. What if I fail?"

"So do it again. What's the big deal. You know Kasturi, I failed all of my college finals. Actually, somehow I passed History, English and Music but not the rest. And did anything bad happen? No, isn't it.."

"Robbie, instead of encouraging me you're saying this?

"Actually, you're right. Sorry, mein But enough for now. Come. Let's go to sleep."

"OK. Goodnight Robbie. I hope you have a nice sleep."

"Of course I will. After all I'll be dreaming of you."

***

"Today's my exam, Robbie, I'm feeling really scared."

"One minute. Open your mouth."

"Sweet yoghurt? How did you know about this?"

"Kasturi, you're too much. I know everything. Before any good deed, by feeding someone sweet yoghurt, you ensure that veryhting goes well. Now come, I'll drop you. Where do you have to go?"

***

"Kasturi, come downstairs. Look, everyone's come."

Kasturi entered, and her and Robbie exchanged hugs and pleasantries with the friends. Preet waved at the circle of people.

"What did you too think, that we'd forget your 1 month anniversary? No way, come on, party time!" cheered Preet.

"But where?" questioned Kasturi.

"Where? Moonlit night, stars in the sky, with your beloved, hand in hand, so what's the problem.."

"Yeah, yeah, that's enough poetry. Preet's trying to say that we'll have the party outside in the garden," explained Meher.

"OK. Let's go," grinned Robbie.

***

"OK, OK, listen up, everyone. Now we're going to play a game. I'll play the music. Whenever the music stops, whoever's holding the pillow will have to do whatever the others order. Like dance, or sing, or maybe say a filmy dialogue," clarified Preet. "Fine? Right, let's start."

He played the music and they tossed the pillow round the circle.

"Shaam hai jaam hai aur hai nasha
Tan bhi hai mann bhi hai pighla huaan
Chhayi hai ranginiya phir bhi hai betaabiyan
Kyun dhadakta hai dil
Kyun yeh kehta
-"

"Robbie! OK, I'll tell," decided Prachi. "You have describe to us through a song how you felt the first time you saw Kasturi."

"Jab kisi ki taraf dil jhukne lage

Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage

Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage

Bol do gar tumhe pyaar hone lage

Hone lage, hone lage

Chaahne jab lage dil kisi ki khushi

Dillagi yeh nahin, yeh hai dil ki lagi

Aandiyon ko dabaane se kya faayeda

Pyaar dil mein chhupaane se kya faayeda

Jaan se pyaara jab dildaar hone lage

Bol do gar tumhe pyaar hone lage

Hone lage, hone lage

Jab kisi ki taraf dil jhukne lage

Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage

Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage

Bol do gar tumhe pyaar hone lage

Hone lage, hone lage

Uski khushboo agar apni saanson mein ho

Uska sapna agar apni aankhon mein ho

Jab na dil ke behelne ki surat lage

Jab koi zindagi ki zaroorat lage

Aur jeena bhi dushvaar hone lage

Bol do gar tumhe pyaar hone lage

Hone lage, hone lage

Jab kisi ki taraf dil jhukne lage

Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage

Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage

Bol do gar tumhe pyaar hone lage

Hone lage, pyaar hone lage

Pyaar to hona hi tha, pyaar to hona hi tha.."

"Oh, Robbie, what a beautiful song," praised Ragini.

"Main yeh sochke gaaya, ke agar Kasturi mujhe kabhi chor ke jaayengi. Issi khayal ke saath mein shuru hogaya," explained Robbie.

"Nahi, Robbie, mein tumhe akela kabhi nahi choddoongi," promised Kasturi.

The music commenced again.

"Deewanon ko ab tak nahi hai yeh pata
Aaj ki raat khona hai kya paana hai kya
Aaj ki raat khona hai
-"

"Meher! Right, Meher, you have to do some acting."

"Acting? Me? No, no, Robbie, I don't know how to, please.."

"No, no, excuses won't work Now come on, you have to confess your love for Preet in a total 'filmi' style."

Preet was pushed into the centre of the circle. Meher took a deep breath and walked towards him. She schooled her expression into one of frustration mingled with affection and launched into a dialogue from Ishq Vishk.

"You always do this! First you break my heart, and then by doing some stupid action like this, you think I'll forgive you. No, this time I won't forgive you! My heart's not going to melt seeing your stupid innocent face, don't look at me like, that, look down! You know what the problem is, it's that I'm too good for you, I'm just too good for you! Why are you laughing? I'm not joking! I hate you, I really hate you!"

Meher flung herself into Preet's arms, tears streaming down her face.

The others cheered and whistled. Meher looked around and felt shy, She hid her face behind her hands, and hurried back to her seat. Preet followed, still a little flabbergasted, but grinning. The music was re-started.

"Kya paana hai kya
Khona hai kya

Do ghadi mein yahaan jaane kya ho gaya
Jo hamesha tha mera dil mera ho gaya
Kaun kiske dil mein hai faisala hoga
Faisala hai yahi jeet hogi meri
Deewaanon -"

"Kasturi!"

"OK, Kasturi, today's clebration is in your honour so you get a double punishment. You have to dance with Robbie, whilts singing a song of his choosing," directed Meher.

"I choose Kasturi's favourite song: Agar Tum Mil Jao, from the film Zeher."

"Agar tum mil jao Zamana chod denge hum Tumhe paa kar zamane bhar se rishta tod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum
Bina tere koyi dilkash nazara hum na dekheinge
Tumhe na ho pasand usko dobara hum na dekheinge
Teri soorat na ho jis mein
Teri soorat na ho jis mein
Woh sheesha tod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum
Tere dil mein raheinge tujhko apna ghar bana lenge
Tere khwaabon ko geheno ki tarah khud par saja lenge
Kasam teri kasam
Kasam teri kasam
Taqdeer ka roog mod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum
Tumhe hum apne jism-o-jaan mein kuch aise basa lenge
Teri khushboo apne jism ki khushboo bana lenge
Khuda se bhi na jo toote
Khuda se bhi na jo toote
Woh rishta jod lenge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum
Tumhe paa kar zamane bhar se rishta tod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum"

"Ab tak nahi hai yeh pata
Aaj ki raat khona hai kya paana hai kya
Khona hai kya
Aaj ki raat khona hai kya paana hai kya
Khona hai kya

Aaon main tumse kahu baat chupke se
Rang badlegi pal mein raat chupke se
Tumko le jaaunga phir saath chhupke se
Jaaoge tum kahaan dekho -"

The music was paused, the pillow in Milind's hands. He quickly tried to stuff it into Prachi's arms. She squealed.

"No, no, Milind, don't cheat," scolded Ranvir. "Kasturi, sazaa dehdijye."

"Aapko Amitabh Bachhan ke style mein naach-gaana karna hain."

""Arrey raam duhaai, kaise chakkar mein pad gaya

Kahaan jaan phasaai, main to sooli pe chadh gaya Kaisa seedha saadha main kaisa bhola bhala haan haan
Arrey, kaisa seedha seedha main kaisa bhola bhala
Jaane kaun ghadi mein pad gaya padhe likhon se paalaa
Meethi chhunri se, meethi chhunri se hua halaal
O chhora o chora

O chora ganga kinaare wala

O khaaike paan banaaras wala Khul jaaye band akal kaa taala
O khaaike paan banaaras wala
Khul jaaye band akal kaa taala
Aa dekhe zara kisme kitna hai dum

Jamake rakhana kadam mere saathiya

Aa dekhe zara kisme kitna hai dum

Jamake rakhana kadam mere saathiya

Jummaa chummaa de de, jummaa chummaa de de chummaa
Jumme ke din kiyaa jumme kaa waadaa
Jumme ko tod diyaa jumme kaa waadaa
Le aa gayaa re phir jummaa-

Jummaa chummaa de de, jummaa chummaa de de chummaa""

He pulled Prachi into the circle with him, continuing to sing as they both discoed to typical moves such as those from "khaike paan banaraswala."

***

"OK, listen up, everyone. I have a fool-proof plan. I can tell everyone how many children they will have," announced Preet.

"I don't believe you," declared Shabd sceptically.

"OK, fine. Watch. Come, Meher. Put your hand forward."

Preet flourished a chain, from which a ring was suspended in place of a pendant. He dangled it into Meher's palm, up and down three times.

"Boy!"

"And now it's the turn of our lovely Kasturi." She shyly extended her hand and he repeated the process.

"Girl! Congratulations!" Robbie's face lit up.

"And now, you give me your hand, Prachi."

"Boy. Girl. Boy. Girl. Boy. Girl. B-"

"Oh my, that;s enough. Are you trying to kill me?" complained Milind, his face twisted in mock devastation. "Wasn't one enough?"

"You? Think about me at least. I'll die first," retorted Prachi, playfully batting his arm.

"I still don't believ you, Preet" pointed out Gauri.

"We'll see, we'll see. When Robbie and Kasturi have a daughter, then everyone will see that I was right. Isn't it, Kasturi bhabhi?"

Kasturi simply looked down bashfully. Robbie squeezed her hand.

"But tell us one thing, what is this special formula?" questioned Meher.

"Simple. If the ring spins clockwise then it's a boy, and if anticlockwise then girl."

"Oh. So this was the secret?"

"Yes, you wait and see, all my predctions will 100% come true."

"Yeah, yeah, we'll see. Now come on, let's cut the cake!" yelled Milind.

Thanks for reading 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi TJ 😃belive me i was waiting for u r up date😛
kissi bhe ff mai jaawo robbie sweety sweet hai. kasturi kay leyeah he brought garma garam coffee.so sweet of him.😳
haha...college kay final mai robbie failed ...heee...
garma garam coffee peekar sojawo...😲. wa robbie.kya pati hai?.pati ho tho issay...that is y i love that idiot😳
wow...robbie gave thahee shakkar to kasturi ...yet another sweet scene😛...love to read it.
Chandni raat, taaron ki baraat, saajan ke saath, haat mein haath, toh phir kaisi..love this shayari👏
lol i love to play this tossing the pillow game.
dialogue from Ishq Vishk suits the scene.
wow milind predicted ladki for kasturi.so sweet.i was dieing to see that in the serial.
Agar ring clockwise spin kare toh ladka, aur agar anticlockwise toh ladki....lol is it true.i am going to try this.
as usual very well written.yet another beautiful part.keep it up.

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey TJ
Loved the update, it was so sweet
Like how Robbie reassured Kasturi
You can always count on Preet to start a party
The way Preet was guessing if the couples will have girls or boys was funny
Particularly liked what Preet said to Michi
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

woohoo!!!!!! me first!!!!!!!!!!!! yay! 😃 oops my comments are gna be posted between yur hindi and english translations lol lol dont worry 😛
FABTASTIC part TJ!!! 👏 👏 👏 Loved all of it from start to end!!! 😃good good 😊
okay where do i start 🤔....ummm okay i'll start from the start 😉lol 😆
aww kasturi feeling nervous 4 her exams...kno that feeling!!! 🤢i know me too 😕
hehe and robbie giving her bad advice!! lol he failed most of his subjects!!! 😆hehe was too busy flirting 😛
aww how sweet robbie feeding kasturi meethi dhai!! 😳aww 😛
wooo loved the next part!!! the game was awesome!!!! 😛yay glad you enjoyed it 😃
loved the song robbie sang 4 kasturi!!! very sweet!! 😳yay i love that song so lovely😊
omg ishq vishq!!!!! i loooooove that film!!!!!! 😃 haha good dialogue from meher!!! 😉 fab scene 👍🏼i know me too! good you enjoyed it 😊
awww RoKa dancing together!!! 😳 😳 😳 beautiful song too!! 😛hmm one of my fav songs, and i could imagine them waltzing around, Kasturi singing with such feeling 😊
hehe the milind-prachi scene was funi too!!! i could imagine them!!! 😃lol yay! 😛
and the last part was mind-blowing!!!! 👏thank you! 😳
love milind's baby predicting thing!!! 😉hehe got idea from HSSH 😊
aww roka will have a girl!!! hw sweet!! 😳hehe well have 2 wait and see if prediction comes true... 😉
"Ladka. Ladki. Ladka. Ladki. Ladka. Ladki." 😲 😆

"Hai re, bas karo yaar. Mardaalenge mujhe?"'

"Tujhe? Mere baare mein toh sochye. Pehle mein marjaaongi."
hahahahaha loved these lines tj!!!!! 😆 Well done!! 👏lol good good 😆
All in all a wonderful part tj!!! 😃 And well written!! 👍🏼thanks again 😊
Maza aa gaya yaar!!! 😛oh good good 😊
Update next part soon!!!! 😊will do 😛
Love ya 🤗love you too 😊
Hinna xx xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Hey TJ Hi Aaliyah 😊

Loved the update, it was so sweet Aw thank you 😳
Like how Robbie reassured Kasturi Yeah very sweet of him 😊
You can always count on Preet to start a party Lol of course 😛
The way Preet was guessing if the couples will have girls or boys was funny Lol lets see if he was right 😉
Particularly liked what Preet said to Michi Hehe yeah lol can tell you're a Preet fan! 😛
Thanks for commenting 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
glad to read the update after so long......😃....very nice part.

heheeee robbie had failed all his exams.....🤣......very bad Mr Rockstar......😛 😆

ohhh that dialogue from Ishq Vishq is so sweet.......its the last scene right??

hmm so RoKa are going to get a girl......waiting to see if the prediction comes true....😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: robbii

hi TJ 😃belive me i was waiting for u r up date😛hi Shumi and wow thats nice 😳
kissi bhe ff mai jaawo robbie sweety sweet hai. kasturi kay leyeah he brought garma garam coffee.so sweet of him.😳hes so cute 😛
haha...college kay final mai robbie failed ...heee...lol not a surprise 😛
garma garam coffee peekar sojawo...😲. wa robbie.kya pati hai?.pati ho tho issay...that is y i love that idiot😳love that shumi "pati ho toh aisay" and i love him too 😃
wow...robbie gave thahee shakkar to kasturi ...yet another sweet scene😛...love to read it. glad you enjoyed it 😊
Chandni raat, taaron ki baraat, saajan ke saath, haat mein haath, toh phir kaisi..love this shayari👏lol 😉
lol i love to play this tossing the pillow game. me too, such fun! 😉
dialogue from Ishq Vishk suits the scene. oh glad it does 😊
wow milind predicted ladki for kasturi.so sweet.i was dieing to see that in the serial. mmm same so sad would have loved to see RoKa's kids 😕
Agar ring clockwise spin kare toh ladka, aur agar anticlockwise toh ladki....lol is it true.i am going to try this. lol tell me what your results are! 😛
as usual very well written.yet another beautiful part.keep it up. thanks again shumi for your lovely comments 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swan20

glad to read the update after so long......😃....very nice part. thank you 😳

heheeee robbie had failed all his exams.....🤣......very bad Mr Rockstar......😛 😆lol tut tut 😛

ohhh that dialogue from Ishq Vishq is so sweet.......its the last scene right?? yep, correct 😃

hmm so RoKa are going to get a girl......waiting to see if the prediction comes true....😉hehe ... 😊

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