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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swan20

Malaysia sounds very beautiful.........you know a lot about it......have you been there? Yh i agree nope lol I looked it up on Google 😆

wonder what kasturi bought at the stall.......my curiosity is killing me......😆hehe wait and see 😛

your ff robbie is an absolute darling.......perfect husband....😊i know he is Mr Perfect 😃

thanks for the pm.....😊Youre welcome 😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: siya..

finally! sorry read yesterday...sorry for the late comments!!! no problem 😊

aww...i just adore the understandings and the moments between these two cuties...aw glad you like it, I wanted to get across how deep their relationship is 😳
so she is gonna work again...well thats good! she is independent in everyway!! yippee! "independant woman" 😉
great update!! do cont soon🤗thanks siya will do 😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi everyone 😊
Thanks again for your wonderful comments 😃
Heres the next part 😛
Do tell me what you think 😉
Love TJ x
Chapter 31 ~ Tum Dehna Saath Mera

"Sach! Waah Preet yeh toh bahut hi acchha kabar hain. Jaise hum vapaas aayege, hum milne aajayenge." He disconnected the call.

"Kya hua?"

"Prem aur Heer ki beti hui hain, aaj subah. Suhani naam hain. Dekho, unno ne yeh picture SMS kiya hain."

"Sach mein, Prem jeeju aur Heer bhabhi ki beti bahut hi pyaari hain. Suhani. Naam bhi bahut hi soondar hain."

Robbie nodded and smiled. Kasturi sat on the bed and began to comb her hair. Robbie took her hand in his and she stopped, turning to him.

"Kasturi, tumhe larka chahiye yah larki?"

She blushed, lowering her eyes.

"Kaho na.."

"Mein..ladka hoga yah ladki mein khush hogi," she whispered

"Mujhe toh ladki chahiye. Bilkool meri Kasturi ki tarah."

He gently kissed her forehead, and she leaned into him.

"Hmm. Jaane ka man nahi karta. Bata hi nahi chala, waqt kab beetgaiye. Par doosri taraf sab ko miss karti hoon."

"Jee, mom, saare doston, aur baby Suhani.."

"Oh, mein toh bhoolgayi. Acchha, ab aankhen bandh kardijye."

"Oh tum mujhe surprise dehnewali ho?"

"Jee haan, par cheating mat karma. Jab tak mein na kahoongi aap aankhen nahi kolsakte."

"Theek hain, baba."

He felt her fasten something around his arm.

"Acchha, Robbie, ab aankhen kholo."

On his wrist was a bracelet. It was simple, a band of leather with a small diamond-shaped piece of jade in the middle.

"Bata hain Robbie, iska kya matlab hain. Yeh tumhara raksha karenga, aur acchhi kismet bhi. Aisa yahaan ke log manta hain. Aapko achha laga?"

"Jee Kasturi, shukriya. Aap mere bare main itna sochti hain. Par tujhe bata hain, mere liye kisi aur cheez ki zaroorat nahi hain. Jo tum mere saath ho, mere saath hamesha sab acchha hi hoga."

He began to sing, a content smile on his face, and devotion in his voice.

"Jab koi baat bigad jaye, jab koi mushkil pad jaye


Tum denaa saath meraa, o, humnavaaz

Jab koi baat bigad jaye, jab koi mushkil pad jaye

Naa koi hai, naa koi thaa, zindagi mein tumhaare sivaa

Tum denaa saath meraa, o, humnavaaz"

He held his hand to her. She took it and they waltzed slowly around the room, eyes locked, hearts connected.

"Ho chandani jab tak raat, detaa hai har koi saath,

Tum magar andheron mein, naa chhodna mera haath

Ho chandani jab tak raat, detaa hai har koi saath,

Tum magar andheron mein, naa chhodna mera haath

Jab koi baat bigad jaye, jab koi mushkil pad jaye



Tum denaa saath meraa, o, humnavaaz"

Kasturi began to sing, her words genuine and tender.

"Vafaadari ki vo rasamein nihayenge hum to kasame,

Ek bhi saans zindagi ki, jab tak ho apane bas mein

Vafaadari ki vo rasmein nihayenge hum to kasame,

Ek bhi saans zindagi ki, jab tak ho apane bas mein

Jab koi baat bigad jaye, jab koi mushkil pad jaye

Tum denaa saath meraa, o, humnavaaz"

Robbie joined in, their voices harmonising.

"Jab koi baat bigad jaye, jab koi mushkil pad jaye

Tum denaa saath meraa, o, humnavaaz"

***

Devika smiled as she spotted Robbie and Kasturi arriving from baggage reclaim.

"Hello, Robbie beta, kaise ho?"

"Great mom. You?"

"Good. Aur Kasturi, tum theek ho?"

"Jee, mummyji."

"Bahut enjoy kiya tum dono?"

"Jee, bahut zyaada"

"Aaj ka koi plans hain?"

"Pehle hum ghar jaake thoda aaram karenge, unpack karenge. Phir shaam mein hum Prem, Heer bhabhi, aur Suhani se milne jaayenge."

"Acchha theek hain. Chalo, ghar chale."

***

"Chalo Robbie, Kasturi, khaana tayaar hain."

"Mein madat karoon?"

"Nahi, Kasturi, tum chinta mat kar. Alka aur Ramu Kaka ne sab kardiya hain. Chal, baitho. Toh bata, Heer kaisi thi? Aur Prem, aur unki beti?"

"Bahut acchhi hain. Bahut khush hain woh dono."

"Aur Suhani, woh kitni pyaari hain. Jee karta tha, mein saara din bas wahaan baitkar uske saath rahe," reminisced Kasturi.

"Kasturi, tumhe bata hain, Robbie jab chotta that oh bahut hi cute tha. Bahut shethani tha, par bahut zyaada pyaara. Kal mein tumhe photo dikhaaongi."

"Mom!" moaned Robbie. Kasturi giggled.

"Haan Robbie, Kasturi ko zarror dikhaaoongi. Oh haan, isse pehle ke mein bhoolja, Kasturi, tumhe kal Mr Garewal ko phone karna hain, aur.."

"Mom, actually Kasturi ab se woh nokri nahi karne wali hain," interrupted Robbie.

"Kyun, Kasturi?"

"Actually, mummyji mein..phir se actuary ka kaam karna chahti hoon. Meine sab training krliya hain, bas ek exam lehne hain. Darasal mujhe woh kaam bahut pasand tha," explained Kasturi, slightly hesiatantly.

"Theek hain, jo tumhe sahi lage. Par nayi secretary dhoondni paregi."

"Haan, mom, par ab koi problem nahi. Koi bhi dhoondle."

Kasturi giggled, remembering the reason Devika had chosen her at first.

Devika chuckled too, saying,"Sach mein, Kasturi, tumhe toh bahut hi ajeeb laga hoga."

"Mom, mujhe mat yaad dilao, mein pehle kaise tha."

"Toh kasturi, tum yeh exam kab longi?"

"Ek hafte mein lehsakti hoon."

"Theek hain. Koshish karne, jald se jald lehne. Dyaan se padhaai karna

"Theek hain, mummyji. Mein sone se pehle thoda padhaai karoongi. Goodnight.

"Goodnight, Kasturi

***

Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Chapter 31 ~ Tum Dehna Saath mera (english)

"Really! Wow Preet that's wonderful news. As soon as we get back, we'll come and meet."

"What happened?"

"Prem and Heer have had a daughter, this morning. Her name is Suhani. Look, they've sent a picture of her."

Truly, Prem jeeju and Heer bhabhi's daughter is very lovely, Suhani. Her name's also very beautiful."

Robbie nodded and smiled. Kasturi sat on the bed and began to comb her hair. Robbie took her hand in his and she stopped, turning to him.

"Kasturi, do you want a boy or girl?"

She blushed, lowering her eyes.

"Go on, say.."

"I..I'll be happy with a girl or a boy", she whispered

"Well I want a girl. Exactly like my Kasturi."

He gently kissed her forehead, and she leaned into him.

"Hmm. My heart doesn't feel like leaving. The time went so quickly, I didn't realise. But on the other hand I'm missing everyone."

"Yes, mom, all friends, and even Suhani.."

"Oh, I nearly forgot, OK, now close your eyes."

"Oh you're going to give me a surprise."

"Yes, but no cheating. Until I say you can't open your eyes."

"OK, baba."

He felt her fasten something around his arm.

"OK, Robbie, now open your eyes."

On his wrist was a bracelet. It was simple, a band of leather with a small diamond-shaped piece of jade in the middle.

"You know, Robbie, the meaning of this. It will protect you, and give you good luck. The people here believe so. Did you like it?"

"Yes Kasturi, thank you. You think so much about me. But you know, I don't need anything else. If you're with me, only good things will happen to me."

He began to sing, a content smile on his face, and devotion in his voice.

"When any matter is ruined, when any difficulty arises



You give me your companionship, oh friend

There is no-one, there never was

In my life aside from you

You give me your companionship, oh friend"

He held his hand to her. She took it and they waltzed slowly around the room, eyes locked, hearts connected.

"As long as the night is moonlit, everyone stays together

But even in darkness, you don't let go of my hand

As long as the night is moonlit, everyone stays together

But even in darkness, you don't let go of my hand

When any matter is ruined, when any difficulty arises



You give me your companionship, oh friend"

Kasturi began to sing, her words genuine and tender.

""We will obey those vows of faithfulness

As long as a breath of life is left in our control

We will obey those vows of faithfulness

As long as a breath of life is left in our control

When any matter is ruined, when any difficulty arises



You give me your companionship, oh friend"

Robbie joined in, their voices harmonising.

"When any matter is ruined, when any difficulty arises



You give me your companionship, oh friend"

***

Devika smiled as she spotted Robbie and Kasturi arriving from baggage reclaim.

"Hello, Robbie beta, how are you?"

"Great mom. You?"

"Good. And Kasturi, are you OK?"

"Yes, mummyji."

"Did you both enjoy a lot?"

"Yes, extremely. It was very beautiful."

"Any plans for today?"

"First we'll go home and rest a bit an dunpack. Then in the vening, we'll go to meet Prem, Heer bhabhi and Suhani."

"OK, fine. Come. Let's go home."

***

"Come Robbie, Kasturi, dinner's ready."

"Shall I help?"

"No, Kasturi, you don't worry. Alka and Ramu Kaka have done everything. Come, sit. So tell me, how was Heer? And Prem, and their daughter?"

"They're great. They're both very happy."

"And Suhani, she's so cute. I wished I could have just stayed with her the whole day," reminisced Kasturi.

"Kasturi, you know, when Robbie was little, he was very cute. Very mischevious, but too adorable. Tomorrow I'll show you some photos."

"Mom!" moaned Robbie. Kasturi giggled.

"Yes Robbie, I'll definitely show Kasturi. Oh yes, before I forget, Kasturi, you have to phone Mr Garewal tomorrow, and.."

"Mom, actually Kasturi isn't going to do that job from now on," interrupted Robbie.

"Why, Kasturi?"

"Actually, mummyji, I..want to be an actuary again. I've already done all the training, I just have to take an exam. Actually, I really enjoyed that work," explained Kasturi, slightly hesitantly.

"OK, whatever's right for you. But we'll have to find a new secretary."

"Yes, mom, but now there's no problem. Find any."

Kasturi giggled, remembering the reason Devika had chosen her at first.

Devika chuckled too, saying,"Really, Kasturi, it must have seemed so strange to you."

"Mom, don't remind me of how I used to be," moaned Robbie.

"So Kasturi, when will you take this exam?"

"I can take it in one week."

"OK, Try and take it as soon as possible. Study carefully."

"OK, mummyji. I'll do a bit of studying before sleeping. Goodnight."

"Goodnight, Kasturi."

Thanks for reading 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey wow awesome part. Loved it. Plzzzzz continue soon dear!!! Thnks for the PM!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey hw r u
ok I have lost track in reading your FF
Last part i think i read was 9, 10
I seriously need to catch up
your doing an awsome and great job keep it up
Love Mariam xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow...prem-heer got a cute baby...that too girl baby ! i think even in serial also that jodi is going to have a girl baby.i like the prem heer of your ff but serial premheer.....ufff...sorry.i wonder how they got the best jodi award that too twice while RoKa did not get even once.😭...may be our kasturi has lot of paring like raunak,kabhir, etc..the list is endless.
ummm...robbie want girl baby.i am imagining if RoKa have a girl baby how she will be?😍
i love the bracelet. and the meaning of it too.
so sweet song...i liked it.
Robbie jab chotta that oh bahut hi cute tha. Bahut shethani tha, par bahut zyaada pyaara....such mai he must have been...
lol devika is very sweet in this.i just love her character.
excellent part dear.👏.thanks for the same😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Very nice update
Love the way each of the charaters is portrayed
If only Prem/Heer were this happy in KDMHMD
Cant think off more to say my brain feels like mush and it's about 1 am here
Continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jessica18

Hey wow awesome part. Loved it. Plzzzzz continue soon dear!!! Thnks for the PM!!!!!

No problem thanks for reading and commenting 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: FunkyChick

Hey hw r u

ok I have lost track in reading your FF
Last part i think i read was 9, 10
I seriously need to catch up
your doing an awsome and great job keep it up
Love Mariam xx

Hey Mariam
Lol no problem
Whenever you get a chance
I can PM u when i update if u like
Thanks for your very sweet comment
Love TJ x

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