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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: reenbana
awesome t j robbie is so romantic yaar fantastic great going good job!👍🏼

i know isnt he 😍 thanks for your comment 😃

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

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part-2

this part started with suhaag raath😳.very decently said.i liked it😊.

the nook jook of RoKa early in the morning was too cute.

who is the hell poisoning devika's mind?😡

thank god.devika defended kasturi👏.that was very nice of her.

i love the way robbie supported kasturi.

thank you for this wonderful part.😛

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

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part-2

this part started with suhaag raath😳.very decently said.i liked it😊. thanks 😊

the nook jook of RoKa early in the morning was too cute.aw 😛

who is the hell poisoning devika's mind?😡 some idiot 🤢

thank god.devika defended kasturi👏.that was very nice of her. i know loved it 😃

i love the way robbie supported kasturi. yeah go robbie!!!

thank you for this wonderful part.😛 thanks 4 reading n commenting 😊

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366791

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Sorry i didnt get to comment properly earlier That was a great update TJ Glad Devika defended Kasturi Please dont end this yet Maybe you could have Raunak break out of jail and have a final showdown with RoKa

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Delena

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Posted: 16 years ago

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awww that was soooooooooo cuteee!!! love each and every bit! robbie is soo romantic...thanks for the woderful update! cont soon🤗

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Aaliyah01
Sorry i didnt get to comment properly earlier No problem you were first anyway though 😛
That was a great update TJ Thanks 😃
Glad Devika defended Kasturi I know me too
Please dont end this yet Aw 😳
Maybe you could have Raunak break out of jail and have a final showdown with RoKa Yeah maybe that would be dramatic 😉
Thanks for commenting 😊

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: siya..
awww that was soooooooooo cuteee!!! love each and every bit! robbie is soo romantic...thanks for the woderful update! cont soon🤗

Thanks for your sweet comment Siya! 😛
I know love Robbie!! 😍
I will try 😊

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366791

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey TJ Just wondering when you're gonna update

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey everyone 😊
Thanks for all your lovely comments 😛
Heres the next part 😃
Hope you enjoy 😉
Please comment 😊
Love TJ

Chapter 26 ' Teri Ore

"Ro mat, Kasturi," he soothed, his voice filled with pain.She trembled a little as he hugged her close to him. A tear escaped. Quickly, he caught it in his palm and pretended to rub at it in mock anger.
"Yeh kambakth jaata kyun nahi. Finally, gaya. Ab doosra mat dehna, verna mein.." She giggled despite herself.
"Ghatyaar mazaak tha, jaanta hoon. Par phir bhi tumhe hasaaya, na?"
She smiled again tentatively; Robbie was relieved.
***
"Mom, Kasturi kaha hain?"
"Shayad kitchen main hain..bata nahi kyun..meine Alka se kehdiya tha khaana banane ki.."
Robbie strode into the kitchen , spotted Kasturi chopping the "dhaana" and wandered over to her.
"Kasturi, iski zaroorat nahi hain. Hamari shaadi toh kal hi hui aur tum yeh sab kaam kar rahi ho? Chinta mat kar, Alka aur Ramu Kaka hain iske liye."
"Nahi Robbie, mein chahti hoon ke aaj mein aapke liye aur mummyji ke liye khaana banao."
"Kasturi.."
"Robbie, mujhe yeh sab karna pasand hain."
"Theek hain..par mein bhi tumhaara madat karoonga."
"Aap..peechli baar aapne khaana kam aur masti zyaada ki thi."
"Haan, haan, banno mat. Tum bhi kuch kam nahi thi. Par aaj hum dono sirf swaadish khaana banayenge. Chalo, chalo, kya banana hain?"
"Aapke pasand ki gobi ke parathe tayaar hain, sirf mujhe garam karna hain. Mummyji ke liye mutter aur bhaaji pakaana hain. Yeh dhaana kaatkar sabzi mein milaadijye. Khichdi Alka aur Ramu Kaka banayenge."
Robbie smiled and continued to slice the coriander, one eye on Kasturi. Skilfully, she flattened the cauliflower-filled ball into a thin circle, placed it in the pan on the gas, flipped it over, rolled out a new one as she waited, then emptied the cooked one onto a plate and repeated the process.
"Aaaahh!" The knife slashed his index finger, and a few drops of blood spurted out.
"Kya hua, Robbie sir?" cried Kasturi in distress. She ran to him and popped his finger in her mouth, sucking gently to quell the bleeding. He simply stood there, gazing at her. As she calmed down, she realized and blushed a little, removing his finger.
"Dard ho raha hain?"
"Tha. Ab khatam hogaya." She smiled and turned away. He caught her hand.
"Kaha jah rahi ho? Hamare paas to aao na.."
"Robbie, kya kar rahe ho? Koi dekhlenge toh.."
"Kaun dekhenge? Yahaan sirf hum dono hain. Sirf hum.."
"Ramu Kaka!" Robbie cursed silently as Ramu Kaka entered and Kasturi busied herself with the cooking, deftly finishing the "dhaana" and adding them to the vegetables. She stirred the pot again, then finished off the parathas.
"Chalo Robbie, table par rakhenge."
She picked up the steaming parathas and the fragrant curry and left the kitchen. Robbie followed her, a pile of plates in one hand and glasses in the other.
***
"Waah Kasturi, khaana lajawab tha."
"Shukriya, mummyji."
"Acchha, kal, tum dono ki meeting hain concert organizer ke saath. Theek hain na, Kasturi?"
"Jee, mummyji."
***
"Robbie, aap tayaar ho? Humhe nikalna jaaye."
"Ek minute, Kasturi. Aankhen bandh karo."
"Kyun? Humhe dehr horahi hain. Chaliye na, Robbie."
"Pehle aankhen bandh karlo."
"Theek hain, baba." She closed her eyes. "Kaha ho Robbie. Mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aata."
"Chinta mat karo. Mein yahaan ho." He held her hands and guided her to sit down. "Acchha, Kasturi, ab tumhe yeh teen cheezo ko pehchaana hain."
"Theek hain...kyun nahi poochongi. Aap toh mujhe nahi bataayenge. Chalo, shuru karte hain." He poured the first object into her outstretched palm. "Reth?"
"Jee, sahi pehchaana. Ab doosre ko khushboo se pehchaana hain."
She sniffed. "Samundar ki paani jaisa lagta hain."
"Bilkool correct. Aur ab, yeh peelo." He guided a straw into her mouth, which she sucked.
"Nariyaar ki paani? Mujhe bahut zyaada pasand hain!"
"Jee, ab aankhen kholo." She did so, but was still bemused. "Ab sochlo, yeh teen cheeze kis ki taraf ishaara karte hain.."
"Hmm, mein nahi jaanti. Batao na, Robbie.."
"Theek hain, ek aur clue doonga. Aisi jagah jahaan suraj dhoobto hain, neele samundar par, aur kinare.."
"Hum goomne jaayenge..?"
He grinned as understanding bloomed and her eyes sparkled.
"Kyun, meri pyaari Kasturi, tum honeymoon bhoolgayi? Hum aaj hi Malaysia ja rahe hain!"
"Sach, Robbie?"
"Jee, sachmuch!"
"Par woh concert.."
"Woh toh sirf bahaana tha. Ab jaldi chalo, hum dono packing karlenge."
"Shukriya Robbie!"

Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Chapter 26 ' Teri Ore(english)

"Don't cry, Kasturi," he soothed, his voice filled with pain.She trembled a little as he hugged her close to him. A tear escaped. Quickly, he caught it in his palm and pretended to rub at it in mock anger.
"This just doesn't go. Finally, it went. Now don't give me another one." She giggled despite herself.
"It was a rubbish joke, I know. But at least you laughed, right?"
She smiled again tentatively; Robbie was relieved.
***
"Mom, where's Kasturi?"
"Maybe she's in the kitchen..don't know why..I told Alka to make the dinner.."
Robbie strode into the kitchen , spotted Kasturi chopping the "dhaana" and wandered over to her.
"Kasturi, there's no need for this. We only got married yesterday and you're doing all this work? Don't worry, Alka and Ramu Kaka are here to do this."
"No Robbie, I want to make dinner for you and mummyji today."
"Kasturi.."
"Robbie, I like to do all this."
"Fine..but I'll help you."
"You..last time you did less cooking and more mischief."
"Yeah, yeah, don't pretend. You weren't any less. But today we'll both just make tasty food. Come on, come on, what do we have to make?"
"Your favourite cauliflower parathas are ready, I just have to warm them on the pan. For Mummyji we have to prepare peas and spinach. You chop the coriander and mix it into the vegetables. Alka and Ramu Kaka will make the rice."
Robbie smiled and continued to slice the coriander, one eye on Kasturi. Skilfully, she flattened the cauliflower-filled ball into a thin circle, placed it in the pan on the gas, flipped it over, rolled out a new one as she waited, then emptied the cooked one onto a plate and repeated a process.
"Aaaahh!" The knife slashed his index finger, and a few drops of blood spurted out.
"What happened, Robbie sir?" cried Kasturi in distress. She ran to him and popped his finger in her mouth, sucking gently to quell the bleeding. He simply stood there, gazing at her. As she calmed down, she realized and blushed a little, removing his finger.
"Is it paining?"
"It was. Now it's stopped." She smiled and turned away. He caught her hand.
"Where arte you going? Come close to me.."
"Robbie, what are you doing? If someone sees.."
"Who'll see? Here there's just us two. Just us.."
"Ramu Kaka!" Robbie cursed silently as Ramu Kaka entered and Kasturi busied herself with the cooking, deftly finishing the "dhaana" and adding them to the vegetables. She stirred the pot again, then finished off the parathas.
"Come Robbie, we'll put on the table."
She picked up the steaming parathas and the fragrant curry and left the kitchen. Robbie followed her, a pile of plates in one hand and glasses in the other.
***
"Wow Kasturi, the food was delicious."
"Thank you, mummyji."
"OK, tomorrow, you two have a meeting with the concert organizer. OK, Kasturi?"
"Yes, mummyji."
***
"Robbie, are you ready? We should leave."
"One minute, Kasturi. Close your eyes."
"Why? We're getting late. Come. Let's go, Robbie."
"First close your eyes."
"OK, baba." She closed her eyes. "Where are you Robbie? I don't understand anything."
"Don't worry. I'm here." He held her hands and guided her to sit down.
"OK, Kasturi, you have to identify 3 things."
"OK..I won't ask why. You'll just say it's a surprise. Come on, let's start." He poured the first object ibnto her outstretched plam. "Sand?"
"Yes, you recognized it right. Now, identify the second thing with your nose." She sniffed.
"It seems like seawater."
"Absolutely correct. And now, drink this." He guided a straw into her mouth, which she sucked.
"Coconut water? I like it very much!"
"Good, now open your eyes." She did so, but was still bemused. "Now think, what are these three things pointing towards.."
"Hmm, I don't know. Tell me, Robbie.."
"OK, I'll give you one more clue. Such a place where the sun sets on blue seas and sandy shores..."
"Are we going out somewhere..?"
He grinned as understanding bloomed and her eyes sparkled.
"Why, my dear Kasturi, did you forget our honeymoon? We're going to Malaysia today itself!"
"Honestly, Robbie?"
"Yes, truly honestly!"
"But that meeting.."
"That was just an excuse. Now come quickly, we'll both do our packing."
"Thank you Robbie!"

Thanks for reading 😊

Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago

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