FF: Tune zindagi mein aake...Teaser on pg 81/2 :)

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: jessica18
Hey ur ff is awsome. Plz continue soon!!!

Hi Jessica thanks for reading and commenting 😊

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey everyone 😊
Thanks to everyone who is still dedicatedly reading and commenting 😛
Heres the next part 😉
Hope you like it 😃
Love TJ x

Chapter 27-Tu Chand Banke Aana

"Robbie, mujhe dar lagraha hain. Mein pehli baar plane se jarahi hoon. M-mein... Jai Hanuman Gyan Gun Sagar Jai Kapis Tihun Lok Ujagar.."
"Daro mat Kasturi." She gripped his hand tightly; he patted her arm and tried to gently coax her into admiring the view. "Dekho, Kasturi, samundar kitna soondar lagraha hain."
"Nahi, mein aankhen nahi kolsakti. Lagraha jaise mein asmaan se girjaaongi."
"Ab take-off hogaya hain. I promise, darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain. Dekho mujhe." She slowly opened one eye and then, at Robbie's encouraging glance, the other. "Dekho? Kuch hua? Nahi na. Daro mat, aaram se baitho aur flight enjoy kar." Slowly, she relaxed a little.
"Robbie, aap pehli baar Malaysia ja rahe hain?"
"Jee, par Milind ja chuka hain. Kaha ke bahut hi soondar jagah hain. Waha goomna bahut mazaa aayega."
***
"Dekho, hamara hotel aagaya hain. Chalo."
The amiable receptionist greeted them cheerfully, deftly checking their details.
"Welcome sir, madam. Your room no's 108. Hope you enjoy your stay in the Honeymoon Suite, and please don't hesistate to ask if you need anything. There is a party in the Pacific Room tonight at 8, dress code blue or purple. Thank you and have a nice day."
"Thank you," Robbie replied with a smile, collecting the keys.
***
"Kasturi, jaldi karo. Saat bajchuke hain, aur tumne abhi decide nahi kiya kya pehna hain. Tum sab mein acchhi lagti ho, toh phir kya problem hain?" Robbie was already dressed in black jeans and a royal blue silk shirt, open-necked with a cutwork collar.
"Acchha baba, ab dekho, sirf do choice hain. Yeh sari ya yeh?"
"Hmm, yeh. Yeh rang bahut hi soondar hain." He held out the sari: it was two-toned, lavender from one angle, and lilac from the other; most of it was plain net, except the pallu, which was slightly stiffer and decorated with miniature pearls and intricate silver embroidery.
"OK, mein abhi tayaar hokar aati hoon."
***
"Sir, madam, welcome to tonight's party. Our guest singer tonight is actually from India, Atif Aslam. Also, we would be very honoured if you would take part in a special couple's game. It's very easy and simple, and I promise you will enjoy it very much."
"Of course, we'd be delighted," replied Robbie. "Theek hain na, Kasturi?"
"Of course, Robbie. Bahut mazaa ayega!"
"OK, all couples on the dancefloor," announced the host. "All you have to do is dance whilst remaining on this piece of paper. If any part of you touches the floor, you're out! And you will be dancing to the wonderful new hit of Atif Aslam. Please, put your hands together for him, ladies and gentleman."
As the opening instrumental played and Atif Aslam walked onstage, each of the couples were handed a piece of A3 paper, which they stepped onto.
"Doorie..doorie..doorie..
Sahi ja yeh na..ahah..sahi ja yeh na
Khamoshiyaan ye se na saku
Awaaz dehke mujhse tu dehja sakoon
Khamoshiyaan ye she na saku
Awaaz dehke mujhse tu dehja sakoon"
The paper was folded in half and they were now dancing with their waists touching.
"Doorie..doorie..doorie..
Sahi ja yeh na..ahah..sahi ja yeh na
Adhoora hoon main ab tere bina
Adhoori meri zindagani rehjaayengi
Adhoora hoon main ab tere binaA
dhoori meri zindagani rehjaayengi"
As the paper was folded again, Kasturi stepped cautiously onto Robbie's toes; he stood with his hand in hers and the other arm around her waist to support her. She continued to look lovingly into his eyes.
"Doorie..doorie..doorie..
Sahi ja yeh na..ahah..sahi ja yeh na
Har raha mein tu aaye nazar
Katta nahi ab akele tanha safar
Har raha mein tu aaye nazar
Katta nahi ab akele tanha safar"
As the paper was folded into a square the size of, Robbie didn't hesitate for a moment, fluidly, he carried Kasturi in his arms, she circled her arms around his neck, comfortable in his hold.
"Doorie..doorie..doorie..
Sahi ja yeh na..ahah..sahi ja yeh na.."
"And we have our winners!" He set her down, and they both looked around slightly embarrassed, having forgotten both the game and the other people.
"Your prize is these beautiful roses for the lady, these delicious chocolates for the gentleman, and this lovely photo album for the both of you. Well done!"
"Robbie!" A leggy, tanned Malaysian girl dressed in a violet assymetrical cocktail dress screamed his name and flung herself around him. Around the hall, others recognized him enthusiastically. The group of girls swarmed around Robbie. He had a bemused look on his face as one draped herself around him, her friend eagerly snapping a photograph, while a horde of others begged for his autograph. Kasturi stood on the side, pushed away, a half-amused, half-disgruntled expression on her face. It took 15 minutes for Robbie to extract himself from his admirers'clutches by which time the party was ending.
"Chale, Kasturi?"
"Mmm." Her slightly stony expression stayed fixed as Robbie unlocked the door to their hotel rooms.
"Bata nahi kyun yahaan itne excitement tha. Mumbai se bhi zyaada yahaan ke fans parayshaan karte hain! Par Kasturi mujhe bilkool acchha nahi laga, sach mein m-"
"Kyun? Meine dekhe ke tum woh sab titliyon ke saath bahut kareeb ho rahe the," pointed out Kasturi.
"Kasturi, tum jaanti ho na, mein sirf tumhe chahta hoon. Woh sab bas aisa peechay pari thi, mein kya karta.." She was slightly mollified as he hugged her, but still wanted to tease him a little more.
"Banno mat. Mein jaanti hoon sach kya hain," stated Kasturi coldly.
"Haai, kaise manaao," muttered Robbie desperately. He grinned as an idea formed.

Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

#263

Chapter 27 - Tu Chand Banke Aana (english)

"Robbie, I'm scared. This is the first time I'm going in a plane. I - I.."
"Don't be scared Kasturi. She gripped his hand tightly and he patted her arm as he tried to gently coax her into admiring the view.
"Look, Kasturi, the sea looks so beautiful."
"No, I can't open my eyes. It feels like I'll fall from the sky."
"Now the take-off is over. I promise, there's no need to be scared. Look at me." She slowly opened one eye and then, at Robbie's encouraging glance, the other. "Look? Did anthing happen? No, right. Don't be scared, relax, sit back, and enjoy the flight." Slowly, she relaxed a little.
"Robbie, is this your first visit to Malaysia?"
"Yes, but Milind's been there. He said it's a very beautiful place. We will have a lot of fun visiting there."
***
"Look, our hotel's here. Let's go." The amiable receptionist greeted them cheerfully, deftly checking their details.
"Welcome sir, madam. Your room no's 108. Hope you enjoy your stay in the Honeymoon Suite, and please don't hesistate to ask if you need anything. There is a party in the Pacific Room tonight at 8, dress code blue or purple. Thank you and have a nice day."
"Thank you," Robbie replied with a smile, collecting the keys.
***
"Kasturi, hurry up. It's gone 7.00 and you still haven't decided what to wear! You look nice in everything so what's the problem?" Robbie was already dressed in black jeans and a royal blue silk shirt, open-necked with a cutwork collar.
"OK baba, now look, there's only two choices left. This sari or this one?"
"Hmm, this. This colour is very pretty." He held out the sari: it was two-toned, lavender from one angle, and lilac from the other; most of it was plain net, except the pallu, which was slightly stiffer and decorated with miniature pearls and intricate silver embroidery.
"OK, I'll be back ready soon."
***
"Sir, madam, welcome to tonight's party. Our guest singer tonight is actually from India, Atif Aslam. Also, we would be very honoured if you would take part in a special couple's game. It's very easy and simple, and I promise you will enjoy it very much."
"Of course, we'd be delighted," replied Robbie.
"Its OK, Kasturi?"
"Of course, Robbie. We'll have loads of fun!"
"OK, all couples on the dancefloor," announced the host. "All you have to do is dance whilst remaining on this piece of paper. If any part of you touches the floor, you're out! And you will be dancing to the wonderful new hit of Atif Aslam. Please, put your hands together for him, ladies and gentleman."
As the opening instrumental played and Atif Aslam walked onstage, each of the couples were handed a piece of A3 paper, which they stepped onto.
"Distance..distance...distance
I can't tolerate it..I can't..
I can't bear the silence
Call me and give me peace
I can't bear the silence
Call me and give me peace.."
The paper was folded in half and they were now dancing with their waists touching.
"Distance..distance...distance
I can't tolerate it..I can't..
I'm incomplete without you
My life will be left incomplete
I'm incomplete without you
My life will be left incomplete"
As the paper was shrunken once more, Kasturi stepped cautiously onto Robbie's toes; he stood with his hand in hers and the other arm around her waist to support her. She continued to look lovingly into his eyes.
"Distance..distance...distance
I can't tolerate it..I can't..
I see you on every path
I can't endure this lonely journey alone
I see you on every path
I can't endure this lonely journey alone"
As the paper was folded into a square the size of a postcard, Robbie didn't hesitate for a moment, fluidly, he carried Kasturi in his arms, she circled her arms around his neck, comfortable in his hold.
"Distance..distance...distance
I can't tolerate it..I can't.."
"And we have our winners!"
He set her down, and they both looked around slightly embarrassed, having forgotten both the game and the other people.
"Your prize is these beautiful roses for the lady, these delicious chocolates for the gentleman, and this lovely photo album for the both of you. Well done!"
"Robbie!" A leggy, tanned Malaysian girl dressed in a violet assymetrical cocktail dress screamed his name and flung herself around him. Around the hall, others recognized him enthusiastically. The group of girls swarmed around Robbie. He had a bemused look on his face as one draped herself around him, her friend eagerly snapping a photograph, while a horde of others begged for his autograph. Kasturi stood on the side, pushed away, a half-amused, half-disgruntled expression on her face.It took Robbie 15 minutes to extract himself from his admirers' clutches, by which time the part was ending.
"Shall we leave, Kasturi?"
"Mmm." Her slightly stony expression remanined as Robbie unlocked the door to their hotel rooms.
"I don't know why there was so much excitement here. The fans here disturb us more than the ones in Mumbai! But Kasturi I honestly didn't like it all, really.."
"Why? From what I saw you were getting very close to all those butterflies. "Kasturi, you know, I only love you. They were just after me, what could I do.."
She was slightly mollified as he hugged her, but still wanted to tease him a little more. "Don't pretend. I know what the truth is," she staed coldly, turning away.
"Haai, how do I placate her?" He grinned as an idea formed.

Thanks for reading

Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#264

me first i am back the way kasturi was scaring while travelling in the flight was too good to read.

my god they are going to stay in honeymoon suit😳😍

kasturi's sari discribtion was very nice.

singer Atif Aslam😲...mai mar jawaan...i love that idiot songs😳uffff...he has killer voice.but dear he is not an indian .he is a pakistani pop singer😉.what ever.......i love all his songs.

omg dance on A3 size paper.....😳

finally the paper became the size of a postcard😍

yepeee they are the winner.👏

poor guy he cannot get rid from his fans😊

over all lovely part.

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

#265

Wow Shumi that was quick :P

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Lavender21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#266

awww so sweet. awesome part. loved it. Plzz continue soon. Thanks for the PM!!

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: jessica18
awww so sweet. awesome part. loved it. Plzz continue soon. Thanks for the PM!!

No problem glad you enjoyed it 😊

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sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#268

awesome t j great good going kasturi tease robbie so sweet! interesting!😊

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: reenbana
awesome t j great thanks sonia 😃
good going kasturi tease robbie so sweet! lol well she wanted her own back 😛
interesting!😊yay! 😃