FF: Tune zindagi mein aake...Teaser on pg 81/2 :) - Page 15

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Hey great part Thanks 😊

Glad Raunak is going to be punished for all his misdeeds Yeah me too he deserves it 😡

Hope Devika now accepts Kasturi even if it is just for Robbie Yeah hopefully her maternal feelings will win her over

Cant wait for the next part Thanks, I'll update as soon as I can 😉

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

wow raunak is arrested, but devika is creating problems..... nice part, pls update soon.....

"Tum nahi jaante ho, meine zindagi mein kya kuch bardaasht karna pada. Par tum yeh to jaante ho, ke mujhe aisi position par pochna kitna menat kiya hai. Aur ek jhatke mein mere reputation..."

"Par mom, reputation pyaar se zyaada zaroori nahi hain."

"Agar pyaar sacha hain."

"Hamara pyaar sacha hi hain, mom. Aur log Kasturi se milke, usse pasand karenge. Woh sundar hain, sushil hain, logon ki khayal karti hain, dhimak chalaati hain. Usse bata hain kya karna, kya kehna. Aur sabse ehm baat hain ke woh mujhse behat pyaar karti hain."

"Jee, Devika ma'am, mein Robbie sire se behat pyaar karti hoon. Aur mein vaada karti hoon ke meri wajah se tumhe kabhi sharminder hone ki zaroorat nahi hogi."

"Please, mom'"

"Theek hain, Robbie. Ab yeh tumhari marzi hain'aur agar tum sure ho ke tum yehi chahta hoon'toh phir theek hain. Pehle bhi, aur aaj bhi, mere liye sabse zaroori baat hain ' tumhari khushi."

"Thanks, mom," he answered gratefully. His mom was the only family he had, and her consent mattered greatly to him, perhaps more than he had expressed.

Kasturi smiled in relief and bent forward to seek blessings. Devika was pleased at this show of respect. She nodded approvingly.

"Thank you, Devika ma'am."

As she looked into Kasturi's eyes, she saw love, truth and passion in them. She realized this girl really did love Robbie. And that was good enough for her.

"Nahi, Kasturi, ma'am nahi, mummyji." She hugged her.

Robbie looked on, almost bursting with contentment.

"Yahaan aao, Robbie." She enveloped them both in an affectionate hug. "Mein tum dono se maafi maangthi hoon. Mein apne khamand ke aage kuch dekh na paayi. Par ab yeh khushi mein, main party rakhoongi. Ab kisi se nahi dharange, tum dono khulke apna pyaar ka isahar karlo."

***

"Hello?"

"Kasturiji?"

"Mein Inspector Verma bolraha hoon. Maine Raunak ko giraftaar kiya, yaad hain?"

"Jee sir, koi problem hain?"

"Nahi, bas Raunka ne paper sign kiya hain, aap police station aakra formalities puri karengi, toh aaj mein divorce ke liye apply karsakta hoon. Raunak ki case court mein aane se pehle sab khatam hoga toh acchha rahega."

"Jee haan, mein abhi nikloongi."

***

"OK, Kasturiji, sab hogaya. Bas mujhe aur ek sawal hain. Aap court nahi aane chahti, mein theek samaj raha hoon?"

"Jee, inspector saab, agar mumkin hain, toh'"

"Theek hain, par mujhe aapka baiyaan lena parega. Kal aapne kahaan tha ke aap chahti hain ke Raunak ko karwi se karwi sazaa mile. Aap abhi bhi isse sehmat ho?"

"Woh sazaa kya hogi?"

"Paanch saal."

"Toh inspector mere liye wahi insaaf hoga."

"Toh mein lawyer se kehdu, paanch saal ke liye koshish karne?"

"Jee, magar isse zyaada nahi."

"Theek hain, Kasturiji. Aap jaasakti hain. Umeed karta hoon, ab aaapki koi problem nahi hogi."

"Shukriya, inspector saab."

***

Kasturi sat on her bed, lost in thoughts of Robbie, twisting the edge of her dupatta as his words ran through her head. At last, she was free to be with him. She jumped as her phone beeped.

"Hello?"

Kasturi smiled as she imagined Robbie with her. With one hand clutching the phone towards her ear, she extended the other outwards, as if it held Robbie's hand. She glided around the bedroom, continuing the song.

Kaise bathaayein tumhe shab mein tumhare khwab hasseen jo aathe hai...

Kaise bathaayein tumhe labz woh saare jism ko jo mehkaathe hai..."

"Yeh jahaan tumhi ho, woh jahaan tumhi ho

"Tumhi ho beshubaa tumhi ho

"Sir, aap har waqt mere liye gaana kyun'"

"Kya karoon Kasturi, tumhari aawaz soonkar mera aawaz shuru hojaate hain. Waise bhi, mere paas wajah thi phone karne ki. Aaj raat ki party saat baje shuru hoge."

"Saat baje! Par abhi toh paanch baj chuke hain, Robbie sir."

"Toh jaldi karo, Kasturi."

"Theek hain, aap phone rakhdijye."

"Hmm, yehi toh karna chahiye'magar mera dil nahi maanraha'"

"Mujhe jaana hain, Robbie sir."

"Toh tum phone rakhdo na"

"Nahi, aisa karna acchha nahi hoga. Aap ne phone kiya, aap rakhdijye."

"Par mujhe tayaar nahi hona. Mujhe bas saara sham tumse baat karni hain. Tumhari taareef karni hain. Tumhari woh pyaari si muskaraat. Tumhari sharmillee ada. Tumhari'"

"Robbie sir'"

"Mein jaanta hoon, tum zaroor sharmarahi ho. Tumhara gaal gulaab hoge, tum apni dupatta se'"

"Mujhe jaana hain, Robbie sir. Bye."

"Bye, Kasturi." He hung up reluctantly.

"But mom, reputation isn't more important than love."

"If love is true," she commented skeptically.

"Our love is true, mom. And once people meet Kasturi, they'll like her. She's beautiful, cultured, she cares about people, she uses her intelligence. She knows what to say, what to do. And the most important thing is that she loves me immensely ."

"Yes, Devika ma'am, I love Robbie sir immensely. And I promise that I will never be the reason for your embarassment."

"Please, mom…"

"OK, Robbie. If this is your wish…and you're sure this is what you want…then fine. The most important thing for me has always been, and still is – your happiness."

"Thanks, mom," he answered gratefully. His mom was the only family he had, and her consent mattered greatly to him, perhaps more than he had expressed.

Kasturi smiled in relief and bent forward to seek blessings. Devika was pleased at this show of respect. She nodded approvingly.

"Thank you, Devika ma'am."

As she looked into Kasturi's eyes, she saw love, truth and passion in them. She realized this girl really did love Robbie. And that was good enough for her.

"No, Kasturi, not ma'am - mummyji." She hugged her.

Robbie looked on, almost bursting with contentment.

"Come here, Robbie." She enveloped them both in an affectionate hug. "I apologise to you both. I was blinded by my ego. In this new happiness, I want to organize a party. Now you shouldn't be sacred of anyone, you can openly declare your love."

***

"Hello?"

"Kasturiji?"

"I'm Inspector Verma speaking. I arrested Raunak, remember?"

"Yes sir, is there any problem?"

"No, just Raunak has signed the papers, if you come to the police station and fulfil the formalities, then I can apply for a divorce today. If everything is finished before Raunak's case comes to court than it would be better."

"Yes OK, I'm leaving now."

***

"OK, Kasturiji, everything's finished. I just have one question. You don't want to come to court, have I assumed rightly?"

"Yes, inspector sir, if that's possible, then…"

"Fine, but I'll have to take your statement. Yesterday you said that you want Raunak to receive the most serious sentence possible. Do you still think this?"

"What would that punishment be?"

"5 years."

"Then inspector for me that would be justice."

"So, I'll tell the lawyer to try for 5 years?"

"Yes, but no more that that."

"OK, Kasturiji. You can leave. I hope, now you will have no problems."

"Thank you, inspector."

***

Kasturi sat on her bed, lost in thoughts of Robbie, twisting the edge of her dupatta as his words ran through her head. At last, she was free to be with him. She jumped as her phone beeped.

"Hello?"

Kasturi smiled as she imagined Robbie with her. With one hand clutching the phone towards her ear, she extended the other outwards, as if it held Robbie's hand. She glided around the bedroom, continuing the song.

How do I put into words the beautiful dreams I see of you

How do I put into words your fragrance which lingers everywhere..."

You're my life's goal, and also the reason"

"Sir, why do you always sing for me…"

"What do I do Kasturi, just listening to your voice triggers mine. Anyway, I had a reason to phone. The party tonight starts at 7.00."

"7.00! But it's already gone 5.00, Robbie sir."

"So be quick, Kasturi."

"OK, put the phone down."

"Hmm, I should…but my heart doesn't want to…"

"I have to go, Robbie sir."

"Then you put down the phone"

"No, that wouldn't be right. You started the phonecall, you end it."

"But I don't want to get ready. I just want to talk to you the whole evening. Praise you. Your sweet smile. Your coy habits. Your…"

"Robbie sir…"

"I know, you're feeling shy. Your cheeks will be pink. You'll be fiddling with your dupatta…"

"I have to go, Robbie sir. Bye."

"Bye, Kasturi." He reluctantly hung up.

Originally posted by: siya..

haey TJ...i ddn knw u are such an awsome writer,,,just came to ff section and look wat i found here...hehe...u wont believe iv been readin ur ff the whole evening...stil want to read more and moreee....wow thanks that's really lovely and complimentary 😊

Robbie kasturi's journey is so cute...love their sweet leg pulling..specially the phone

convos...aw I know so cute 😛

and u knw wat?! my eyes dd pop out seeing my ever fav..milind mishra😍...isshhh...but u shudve had prachi too wit him😒...usse neev-ayesha ke paas nahin chodna chahiyeta...hehe just kiddin.😆...lol im sorry 😳 I think there was a reason Prachi wasnt there but i cant remember right now 😕
simply simply awsomee...is raunak really gone??!! i mean..dd he really get paid for his dues?!! wow!! and devika...dd she really accept her?! hard to believe but a mom's heart is very tender and would melt easily...i hope that its the case...simplyyy awwwsooommmeee...yes i promise raunak is gone 4evr and devika's heart has melted 4 now but cant be sure of her 😃😕

luv this ff...ur song selections are mindblowin too...those are my favs too..hehe...thanks 😊
eagerly waiting for the next part...do cont soon🤗will do asap on study leave now so hopefully i'll be able to write more 😛 would you like me 2 PM u?

Originally posted by: missindia26

Originally posted by: hmughal1

heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy TJ!!!! 😛 wow excited Hinna 😃 Hi!

me not first!! lmao aw lol 😛

that was..........................................................FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANTASTIC (robbie style) 😉yaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy!

aww im sooo glad devika whole-heartedly accepted kasturi...good on her! 😊 now there's no hadi in the kebab...so we can enjoy our kebabs properly now 😆 lol hehe cept i dont like kebabs so lets have paneer instead 😊

and the robbie kasturi phone convo was soo cute 😳 with the beautiful song n evryfin...well done!! 👏aw thanks i love that song too

and oye hoye a long part!!!! me likes!!! 😉lol hehe getting better 😳 (much better than revising for italian oral)

aww after all kasturi's been through she still tells the inspector not to punish raunak 4 more than 5 years....she's too nice isn't she 😊yeah thats our sweetie kasturi 😛 she wants him to be punished but not excessively for revenge

woohoo waiting for the party now i am invited aren't i? i better be!! n let me know in advance so i can decide what 2 wear......takes me foreverrrr 2 decide! 😉 lol hehe lol of course you're invited, its tomorrow night so get ready, dress code green or blue 😉

wikid update! 😛thanks again

update next part soon sweety! 🤗will try 😊

hinna xx

Originally posted by: siya..