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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx for the PM Urghh hate Raunak so much in this! So glad that Rpbbie stood by Katuri and is helping her remove Raunak from her life Hope Kasturi tells the polce everything Cant wait for the next part Thank you!
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Posted: 16 years ago

it was a fantastic part..... waiting to read what will happen to raunak...... pls update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

it was a fantastic part..... waiting to read what will happen to raunak...... pls update soon thanks for your comment, will do asap 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Thanx for the PM no prob.😊

Urghh hate Raunak so much in this! me too, but I wanted him 2 be as terrible as ppssible to emphasies how perfect Robbie is 😳
So glad that Rpbbie stood by Katuri and is helping her remove Raunak from her life 😊 me too
Hope Kasturi tells the polce everything yeah Raunak needs to reap what he sowed 😔
Cant wait for the next part 😊 thanks
Thank you! aw thanks 2 u 4 reading n commenting

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi everyone 😊
Thanks for your comments šŸ˜›
Heres the next part šŸ˜‰
Hope you enjoy šŸ˜›
Please comment 😊
Chapter 19 - Aisa Kyun Hota Hai Baar Baar...
"Meine sirf ek galati kiya, Raunak se shaadi karke. Par ab mein issi galati ki saaye mein nahi rehsakti. Mein hamesha sochti thi, ke kisi tumhare saath bhura kare, toh jawab nahi dena. Par ab bahut hogaya. Mein kehti hoon, ke Raunak mera goonegar hain. Usne mujhe maara, ek baar nahi, do baar nahi, kahi baar. Mujh par zulm karte rahe, aur mein chup rahi. Haan, meine use maara, shayad woh marsakta tha. Par meine jaan buch kar aisa nahi kiya. Haan, mein baagh gayi. Par mein aur kya karsakti? Phir, mein kismat se ek aise aadmi se mili, jo mujhse sacha pyaar karta hain, jisse mein sacha pyaar karti hoon. Par mein abhi bhi azaad nahi hoon. Kyun ki is aadmi ko sakoon nahi mila. Woh abhi bhi mujh par haq lagarare hain. Inspector saab, bahut hogaya. Mein takgayi hoon. Mein usse maaf nahi karsakti. Mujhe uske sazaa dehna hain. Bas."

"Soono. Jab isne aisi goona kiya hain, who toh maafi ke laayak hi nahi hain. Gabrao mat. Mein tujhe insaaf dilaaonga. Mera vishwaas karo, mein vaada karta hoon, ke usko iski kiye ki sazaa zaroor milengi. Aur tumhe tumhari khushiyaan. Isne tumhare pati hone ke haq koh chuka hain. Chinta mat kar. Tumhe sirf divorce paper par sign karna hain. Bas."

"Shukriya, inspector saab. Shukriya."

"Yeh toh mera farz tha," he responded. He gently patted her head, then turned sternly to Raunak. "Chalo."

She averted her eyes as he walked past, trembling. Robbie walked over to her and she buried her face in his chest. He squeezed her close protectively.

***

"Robbie, yeh kya hain. Tumne phir se is larki ko leh aayo? Ab toh tumhe saara such bata hain'"

"Jee, mom, ab mujhe saara sach bata hain. Is sab mein Kasturi ki koi kasoor nahi. Aap isse apnalijye."

"Mein use nahi apnaasakti. Bas."

"Mom, please. Aap Kasturi ko itni nafrat kyun karti ho? Aapne dekha hain, jabse woh meri zindagi mein aayi, meri zindagi sawar gayi, sambhal gayi. Aapko khabar hain ke mein use kitna pyaar karta hoon. Toh aap kyun apna aashirwaad nahi dehsakti? Aapka beta tumse kuch mangraha hain, aap use itna bhi nahi dehsakti? Please, mom. Meri khushi ke liye. Please, mom. Kasturi ko apnaao."

She paused, biting back her sharp remark and considered. All she wanted was Robbie's haapiness. Then practicality overrode her maternal sensitivity. How could she let Robbie ruin his life for the sake of this'infatuation? She had worked so hard to establish this empire. She wouldn't let this temptress of a girl single-handedly crumble her efforts.

"Toh ab yeh tumhari maa se zyaadi maiyne rakhti hain?"

"Mein isko nahi chunraha hoon, mein sahi raha ko chunraha hoon. Meine Kasturi se vaada kiya tha. Aur aap...mom, aap ki bewaja nafrat ke liye mein usse mooh nahi phersakta. Aakhir Kasturi mein karaabi kya hain?"

"Karaabi yeh hai uski janam ka. Socho, Robbie, aisi larki hamari bahu kaise bansakti? Kuch toh khayal kar, kaha tum, itne bhara empire ka malik, hazaaron larki marti hain tum par...aur kaha woh...?"

"Par mein sirf Kasturi pe marta hoon, mom. Aur daulat sab kuch nahi hota. Sacha mann, sanskaar, yeh sab kuch zaroori nahi hain?"

"Sanskaar? Izzat? Shayad tum bhoolrahe ho, Robbie, ke yeh koi bholi bhali kumari nahi hain. Iski shaadi ho chuki hain. Meri baton ka parwa nahi, kam se kam, log ki baaton ko socho."

"Majboori, mein, mom. Kasturi ne aisi raha choona toh nahi na. Aur log ka kya? Sab se zaroori hain hamari marzi, tera beta ka marzi? Mere liye aap apna guroor nahi chorsakti?"

"Robbie..."

"Please mom, mujhe yakeen hain, sirf Kasturi sahi hain mere liye. Please, mom'"

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Posted: 16 years ago

Chapter 19 - Aisa Kyun Hota Hain Baar Baar (english)

"I made only one mistake, marrying Raunak. But now I can't live under the shadow of this mistake anymore. I always though, that if someone did bad to you, not to retaliate. But it's enough now. I say that, Raunka is my wrongdoer. He beat me, not once, not twice, but many times. He kept being cruel towards me, and I kept quiet. Yes, I hit him, he could have died. But I didn't do so on purpose. Yes, I ran away. But what could I do? Then, fortune favoured me and I met this man, who truly loves me, and who I truly love. But I'm not free yet. Because this man wasn't content." She jabbed her finger angrily towards Raunak. " He is still claiming his rights over me. Inspector sir, it's enough. I'm tired. I can't forgive him. I want to punish him. That's all."

"Listen. When he's committed such a crime, he doesn't deserve forgiveness. Don't be scared. I'll get you justice. Believe me, I promise you, that he will definitely get punishment for his deeds. And you will get your happiness. He has lost the rights of being your husband. Don't worry. You just have to sign the divorce papers. That's all."

"Thank you, inspector sir. Thank you."

"It was my duty," he responded. He gently patted her head, then turned sternly to Raunak. "Come on."

She averted her eyes as he walked past, trembling. Robbie walked over to her and she buried her face in his chest. He squeezed her close protectively.

***

"Robbie, what is this? Again, you've brough this girl with you? Now you know the whole truth…"

"Yes, mom, now I know the whole truth. In all of this is no fault of Kasturi's. Accept her."

"I can't accept her. That's it."

"Mom, please. Why do you hate Kasturi so much? You've seen, since she's come into my life, my life's flourished, moved onto the right track. You know how much I love her. So why can't you give us your blessing? Your son's asking you for one thing, you can't even give him that much? Please, mom. For my happiness. Please, mom. Accept Kasturi."

She paused, biting back her sharp remark and considered. All she wanted was Robbie's haapiness. Then practicality overrode her maternal sensitivity. How could she let Robbie ruin his life for the sake of this…infatuation? She had worked so hard to establish this empire. She wouldn't let this temptress of a girl single-handedly crumble her efforts.

"So now she has more importance than your mother?"

"I'm not choosing my love, I'm choosing the right path. I amde a promise to Kasturi. And you...mom, for your unreasonable hatred, I can't turn away from her. After all what flaws are in Kasturi?"

"The flaw's in her birth. Think, Robbie, how can such a girl be my daughter-in-law? At least think a bit, where's you, the boss of such a big empire, thousands of girls would die for you…and where's she...?"

"But I would die for just Kasturi, mom. And money's not everything. A true heart, values, aren't all these important?"

"Values? Honour? Perhaps you're forgetting, Robbie, that she's not some innocent unmarried maid. She is already married. If you don't care about what I say, at least think about what people will say."

"Compulsion, mom. Kasturi didn't choose such a path. And what about people? Isn't the most imortant thing waht I want, what your son wants? For me can't you forget your arrogance?"

"Robbie..."

"Please mom, I believe only Kasturi is right for me. Please, mom…"

Thanks fore reading :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey TJ!! šŸ˜›
once again fabtastic part yaar!! šŸ‘
seriously your scenes are soo deep and very well written šŸ‘šŸ¼
im sure yu'l smash yur english lit xams šŸ˜‰
so glad dat raunak got taken away by the police!!
but now ek aur 'kebab mein hadi' 😔...hope devika accepts kasturi 4 robbie's sake!!
great going sweety!!
update soon! me waiting 4 next part!
Hinna
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow raunak is arrested, but devika is creating problems..... nice part, pls update soon.....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey great part

Glad Raunak is going to be punished for all his misdeeds
Hope Devika now accepts Kasturi even if it is just for Robbie
Cant wait for the next part
Edited by Aaliyah01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hmughal1

hey TJ!! šŸ˜› hi Hinna 😊

once again fabtastic part yaar!! šŸ‘thank you lol šŸ˜†
seriously your scenes are soo deep and very well written šŸ‘šŸ¼thanks so much 😊
im sure yu'l smash yur english lit xams šŸ˜‰thanks i hope so...those pre-1900 love poems are giving me a headache, and 8 pgs writing.... handache šŸ˜•
so glad dat raunak got taken away by the police!! yeah whoo 😊
but now ek aur 'kebab mein hadi' 😔...hope devika accepts kasturi 4 robbie's sake!! lol too true should have made that the title, šŸ˜‰ yeah i hope so too
great going sweety!! aw thanks šŸ˜›
update soon! me waiting 4 next part! asap 😊
Hinna

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