PreRish TS- Yahi Hota Pyaar A/N PAGE 28 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Tera banega woh jo tera nahin hai

Aye dil bata kyun tujhko itna yakeen hai

First of all, I love the title selection. This song is love...the whole album is incredibly beautiful. ❤️

The first chapter was damn good but it was so short. 🥺

I hope sanu doesn't edit any of the scenes told to her by me 😆

Wonderful.... Chalo no baby in the picture... And uske saath saath no baby's father... At least peecha toh choota usse.... And once outside that influence she realized her feelings for her husband.... So nice... But confess karegi tabhi toh Baath badhegi aage... Ab yeh maasi haddi kyun bani baithi hai...

Humein Itnaa suspense mein rakh kar Itna chota sa update diya.... Jaldi second part post Karo please....

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

next chapter and the last chapter toh isse bhi better hai

I hope sanu doesn't edit any of the scenes told to her by me 😆

very nice darling , but miscarriage 😭🥺

itna chota kyu ?😡

and nice title

iska saga banaou ...

This is awesome Sanu🤗

Wow. She is already in love. Let her share her feeling with him soon and vice versa. Maasi, what should I feel about her now, is she a positive character or a negative one, an over protective mother figure for Bajaj or a evil relative who wants his money.

Her miscarriage😭. His guilt😭. A's accusition and his crap🤬. Coming out of this trauma is a very big thing and I am glad that he is helping her to come out of it with therapy.

This is a lovely. We need the next update now.

Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww what a wonderful part 👍🏼👍🏼👏👏👏👏 I want more more 😭😭😭 please update next part soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn can’t wait 😊

Hai that's a very cool story u write. Thanks update soon.

really nice, very organic story. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Aap pehle se padh kar baithe ho. 🤪

Yea updated mereko bar bar aise feel karwa raha hai mano jaise you have updated the next part 🤣