Prerish FF|King's Queen| Update on Pg 18 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi guys I am in double mind about the story line of the OS. should I turn it into a TS or should I turn it into a FF

if I turn it into FF I will make Nivedita and Anupam positive and even punish Tanvi and Maasi for their deeds

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

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Hi guys I am in double mind about the story line of the OS. should I turn it into a TS or should I turn it into a FF

if I turn it into FF I will make Nivedita and Anupam positive and even punish Tanvi and Maasi for their deeds

If you have sufficient material to turn the story in to an FF...please go ahead....there is nothing more a PreRish fan wants than a goof FF to read and appreciate...and your suggestions are already looking interesting...

I vote for FF😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

An amazing start to something that could be a wonderful FF

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Posted: 6 years ago
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My vote 🗳 goes to FF ❤️😛

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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

Chapter 2:Target the Queen and be targeted

After those few calls, he called his PA Mehra who picked up his call at one ring’ “Mehra” he started. “Yes, Sir any problem?” Mehra immediately asked. “listen…….”and the conversation is muted. “Are you sure sir? If this gets released in media Basu Publications will be completely destroyed. The Basus will never ever be given any respect in the society” Mehra asked apprehensively.” I wasn’t this sure for any deal as I am for this. They have hurt one of my closed ones (maybe the closest after Kukki he thought) and they have to pay for it” he said or rather stated. “Ok sir it will be done ASAP”. Mehra replied curious to know who was that close one. “Good”saying this he cut the call. He went towards her sleeping figure. Calm and full of content. He always wanted her to be happy not only for their child but alsofor his happiness. If she was sad his heart would break. If she cried his heart bled. He remembered the initial stage of their relationship where she started opening up to him. How much she sacrificed for these vile people. But these people never appreciated her sacrifices. Her ex who claims to love her doesn’t even trust her. Their relation started with respect and trust and moved on to friendship.He had started liking her but maybe was in denial because of his past relationship with Kukki’s biological mother and also because she was still in love with her ex-lover. He sat next to her on the bed taking her hand in his large one gently caressing it. He sighed, he who never cared for anyone except Kukki was affected by her upset face. She was something, something different,something unique. Even when they weren’t close, he was always drawn to her innocence,her naivety most importantly her loyalty. With these thoughts the king sleeps besides his queen her hand clasped in his as sign that that even in unconsciousness he was there with her.

Next morning

The rays of the sun disturb the king who wakes up from his slumber greeted with the second most beautiful scene in HIS world his queen sleeping peacefully holding his hand tightly as baby. (First is obviously no doubt of his queen and his princess sleeping peacefully with each other) he was mesmerised with her cuteness. But it got disturbed as she woke due to the sun rays falling on her. Seeing him so close to her she got up and sat on the bed. He was caught off guard due this sudden reaction so couldn’t comprehend anything. She was confused and he was embarrassed at getting caught staring at her. “Mr Bajaj you are sitting here. What happened? and why aren’t you in your nightsuit.” She asked curious about this action. “Um…. I…. I was keeping the pillows and the comforter here. yes, I was here for that reason. “he muttered nervously.“if you are here to keep the comforter then why have you held my hand? “she questioned him pointing at their clasped hands. He immediately removes hi hand “I need to freshen up. Bye” he says ignoring her question literally running towards the bathroom. All the while Prerna was amused at the cute antics of her husband. He was always a reserved person who never expressed himself. She started liking him but wasn’t accepting it because she loves Anurag or rather loved Anurag. But not anymore, she won’t cry and be guilty of ruining Anurag’s life because he didn’t deserve her tears after what he did to her. She would start her life afresh with Kukki and Mr Bajaj. Speaking of which she had to wake Kukki up for her school. Prerna realising this quickly got up from the bed straightaway went towards Kukki’s room to be witness to the cutest scene she had ever seen. Kukki was cuddling her teddy with a pout on her lips and sleeping peacefully. Prerna didn’t have the heart to wake Kukki up but she had to go to school so unwillingly she went up to her bed sat there tried to wake Kukki up. Keyword tried. Kukki was stubborn not to get up and kept her head on her mother’s lap. After half anhour or so when Prerna couldn’t wake Kukki up she saw Mr Bajaj standing their smiling at both of them. “I quit you only wake your daughter up”. Prerna exclaimed frustratedly. Rishabh chuckled and went up to his daughter he whispered something due to which Kukki woke up at the speed of lightening kissed her papa and mama giving a playful smile to Prerna who shocked at this scene and ran to the bathroom. “careful“both the king and his queen said to their princess who blissfully ignored their advice and ran inside the bathroom. “what did you say to her that she got at that very moment while I was trying to make her get up from past half an hour?“she asked curiously. “she’s my daughter so she’ll listen to me only.” He said proudly flaunting on Prerna’s face. “yes, now I get it from where she has got this stubbornness from.” Prerna gave back. “excuse me I am not stubborn ok”. He said. “even I never said that you are “she reverted. “anyways I wanted to talk about yesterday night”. He said gently. Listening to the word yesterday her face fell and her eyes got wet. “listen dear calm down I told you na don’t shed these pearls for those who don’t deserve it. love calm down “he consoled ever so gently cupping her face in his hands. “they…they……que…questioned…. ou…our…….relationship “she in between her hiccups. “I know sweetheart and the have to pay for it “he stated calmly but only he knew how he’s keeping his anger in check.“what will you do “she confused. He sighed “you have to trust me my dear that whatever I will do in these few days directly or indirectly I will do it for your happiness. You have to understand that they aren’t worthy of……..”he was cut off by her “I trust you Mr Bajaj I trust you to do anything for only Kukki and my benefit and for that I won’t question your actions because I know my husband can never be wrong for his loved ones . he knew she trusted him but hearing it openly from here mouth was way to different thing. He was overwhelmed at her trust on him and hugged her which even she reciprocated fully. “now whatever I will do in these few days to the Basus you wont question me and let me do whatever I have to do to them. “he said softly still hugging her while she snuggled more into him giving her consent. After maybe a forever he broke the hug and kissed her forehead “come down after you are freshened up and after Kukki is ready. “he said “but….” she got cut off by him “I told you don’t question me. Just comedown with Kukki and you will see. “he stated firmly but with gentleness while she nodded. “come fast ok” “yes”. When he went out of the room and from above,he saw the Basu family eating the food his blood boiled. Making his queen upset they are eating their food blissfully wasn’t something he could digest but just a few minutes more then he will achieve his first step in destructing the Basus for their vileness. Thank God Tanvi and Maasi had went to a wedding of Tanvi’s friend, if they would have been here, they would have created obstacles in his revenge plan against the Basus. He won’t destroy the Basus at one go because he wanted them to suffer, he wanted them to be insulted for their deeds which only he was aware of. And they have to suffer. Because they have woken up the king’s beast while making the queen upset. And when the beast is unleashed no one is spared. He doesn’t listen to anyone except obviously his queen and his princess. They will die a thousand of death but he won’t give any mercy. They will regret even looking at the queen. Hope that Mehra has brought all the information required for Basus destruction. But first he will reveal the pregnancy secret of Prerna to the Basus because even he didn’t care what other people thought about him but he did care when it was about his queen. Even if they don’t believe it doesn’t matter because that child will always have only one father, Rishabh Bajaj. just a few minutes then time for some action. He thought smirking looking over the Basu family blissfully unaware of the storm which will destroy the whole (maybe not the whole) family.

Edited by Alexia_Wilson - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Very well written..Intriguing update..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#27

I like this savage Bajaj😈....he's uber cool😎....just keep him this way for his enemies please....but then its a tough contest with that romantic Bajaj that he becomes for his Queen...the two sides of this Bajaj are equally endearing.....very very interesting update...now really curious to see the storm bursting on Basus....continue soon....

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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Aah!!! This is so perfect.

The perfect balance of Savage Bajju and Romantic Bajju... Please keep it like this...

Waiting for ur next update.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Lovely update.

Now that beast is ready to get back at the people who insulted his Queen, I am so eager to read. They both started to like each other but didn't conveyed it to each other. They are having these assumptions. Hopefully, they would realise this soon. He slept holding her hand. He is speechless when she asked about the same😆. I loved Kukki scene, she is love❤️. The trust she has on her husband that he would only do good for hours loved ones. Now waiting for the first attack from the King. Please do continue soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

Thanks to all of you for such lovely compliments for this ff🤗😃

Will update the teaser in half an hour's time

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