|Deception|- PreRish SS (Part 4 PG 13)(Updated 11OCT) - Page 8

Nish!

Your FF gives me so much of pleasure as it deals with Prerna's unapologetic craving for Rishabh despite being another man's wife. It reduces the ill effect of the shallow and trashy EMA being shoved by the show.

I loved this update. ❤️

I could totally visualise the kiss and its aftermath. Frankly I expected much more but I guess certain things are reserved for the next part. 😎

Please update soon.

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Interesting update👏

Loved this Prerna she is not guilty about the kiss & knew that she is craving for Rishabh😊

She throw out Sam & her reaction on condom & the word of rishabh shall we was epic🤣

Rishabh knows that Prerna is his

His reaction on sleeping pill was nice

PreRish will be together paying chess all night

Waiting for next

Plz update soon, can’t wait to read the next part , after all only pre rish is makin sense and the tele series is becoming so cringe with Anuraag lost puppy I love Prerna track irrelevant of even being able to stand up for Prerna when ppl insult her and her family. Anurag is becoming extremely lame and annoying now like that character is losing its integrity while Bajaj hmmmm dreamy as always

Originally posted by: oa2019

nice update I'm glad you didn't go with the crying thing, this makes her more interesting.

A lil bit of stud pre rocks!

i guess RB knows now that P does want him & not A. can't wait for the next chapter.

Something like that. That's why he was rejoicing!

Originally posted by: MR21

DAMN!! The KISS☺️. Why she needs to push him when she also regrets pushing him. She accepted she doesn't regret kissing him. And she made sure the lady leaves them alone😆

Becoz the said lady was riding on her nerves big time!😆.

Ohh this Prerna is something. So she wants to talk to him, play a game of chess while her husband is unconscious in their room on their first night.

Chess ka idea rishabh ka tha! Pre just wanted to talk.....and kiss maybe

This is interesting. Looking forward to seeing how the night plays along. Please continue soon.

Aha!😆don't expect too much...slow nd steady wins the lambe wali marathon..you know!

Originally posted by: SanzBarbie

Amazing update.. Loved their hot encounter 😁

Thanks😆

1 part I didn't get why was she addressing herself his mistress when all the time she was married to him... And all that time Prerna and RB maintained absolute celibacy or what.. How come Prerna resisted herself 😜

Serial main bhi toh they are maintaining celibacy. Pre ka true wala love jo tha Onu se

Eagerly waiting for the next update...

Will try to update soon!

Originally posted by: ShumiM

Mai kuch vi nehi soch rahi hu,plz Sab kuch details me batau 😜.

Naughty kid😆 details bhi bataenge...just exercise patience🤪

Thanks for the wonderful update. Plz plz update soon.loved it.

Thanks for the kind views!

Originally posted by: najma123

I AM SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED. It was AMAZING. Your version of Prerna is awesome. 😎 Rishabh was always awesome. I LOVED the kiss, I loved how sassy she was while throwing Sam out. 🤣

This sassiness i've learned from the brilliant writers of this forum. The straight poker face is

And how she cringed at the packet of condoms. 😆 And when he was like, Shall we? 🤣🤣 Her reaction.

And he said it intentionally, you know🤣he was testing the waters and her reaction gave away all!

Okay, so here's the thing. I LOVED the fact that she's practically having an affair, coz I love it. Idk why. I must be immoral or whatever, but screw morals.

Atleast fiction main toh we can read what we like, i agree too! Real and reel ka yahi toh difference hai, living your thoughts😃 And i think this immorality is tantalizing solely coz the other man's The Rishabh Bajaj😎...otherwise maybe i wouldn't have found it in me to write this.

I'd rather she not cry her heart out. And what I loved even more, you expressed pretty clearly that she has no regrets and she's just going with the flow. I hope they do more than just play chess.

😆wild, huh?! Kinda like they do in west?!(thats my prejudice)

And I loved how he took her into his arms as soon as he realised the medicines thing, idk I found it tender and sweet. Just that.

He was happy, when he realized that prerna anurag ko behosh karke uske paas aayi. He was happy that maybe prerna ko apna banane ka khwab sach ho skta hai.

Secondly, I am guessing you'll show a graph of Prerna's feelings, coz only those are in question, and I anticipating that to be awesome, coz that's what is missing right now. And here, she's clear and she's craving for RB. And I love that even more. All in all, I LOVE your story. And, I know the show isn't appealing now, but I hope you continue the story and let it reach the end without losing inspiration. ❤️

I'll try my best to take this story all the way to end. Becoz i just love hearing from you all, and i just love the plot of story i'm writing😆

Loads of love

Naj

UPDATE SOON.

Thanks for your detailed reply! 🤗 When are you updating? I really want you to complete your story before the story takes a nosedive in the serial and people lose inspiration. ❤️