PreRish OS : Fikar Thi Unhe 22/8/19 - Page 7

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Originally posted by: Niyati_T

Read it again

Can we have Bajju-Veena relationship 2.0 in the show?!

He has done so much for her daughter in the last eight years! He deserves some love from Pre as well as her mother 😒


Ps: reading the part where she pampers him and caresses his head makes me so emotional 😭

what will she do? When he was caught in fire she was busy eating without caring about him! Kya relationship 2.0 she will only bad mouth him ☹️
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: SehLengeThoda

It was amazingly beautiful to start with. Don't know why you thought it was a bakwaas in the intro.

I liked it very much


The detail description, the thoughts and emotions that prerna went through, you described them so well.


And the last one I.e union of saasu maa and her damad was the most beautifully written by you.

It's sad we didn't got such scenes in the show but at least you fulfilled that dream in your OS.


Please write such one shorts more in the future too.

thank you so much for your comment Pavan. You reading my OS haiyee mera OS likhna safal hogaya it was bakwas like iwasnt satisfied. Which is why 😆 especially the ending. It could have been something else not this. But I didn't know how to end it so whatever I managed issi se kaam chalana padega 😆 it's not flowery or ornamental which is also why I am not pleased with the work 😆 it's so sad knowing we won't get something as that. It's sad and hurting. 😔 Because Bajaj wanted to own her as his mom but she never reciprocated and was so hostile and will always be. 😔 Their loss not his. 😏
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

what will she do? When he was caught in fire she was busy eating without caring about him! Kya relationship 2.0 she will only bad mouth him ☹️

They don’t deserve Bajju, but he deserves their love na

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Posted: 5 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

thank you so much niya 🤗 🤗sach mein kaash kuki se kuch mil jata 🙄 ab sneha hai but let's see 😔

Haha. Pavan has said once he is done reading all three I will have to write another one 🙄☹️ itna sara prompts kaun lata phir ☹️

Likho na 🥺

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Posted: 5 years ago
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why am I getting these replies now .....🤣


itni late 🙃

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Originally posted by: MayurChan

why am I getting these replies now .....🤣


itni late 🙃

mila tumko replies yehi bahut hau 🤣 jokes aside they went deep inside the posts & threads and now IF locks all the threads with Last comment done in 3rd months. So when it got opened i replied
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😆 ek idea hai. Let's see.
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Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

mila tumko replies yehi bahut hau 🤣 jokes aside they went deep inside the posts & threads and now IF locks all the threads with Last comment done in 3rd months. So when it got opened i replied


tumhari khudki story Quarantine mein thi....socho ...its a dark connection

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