It was amazingly beautiful to start with. Don't know why you thought it was a bakwaas in the intro.
I liked it very much
The detail description, the thoughts and emotions that prerna went through, you described them so well.
And the last one I.e union of saasu maa and her damad was the most beautifully written by you.
It's sad we didn't got such scenes in the show but at least you fulfilled that dream in your OS.
Please write such one shorts more in the future too.
thank you so much 🤗Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi
Unres
This was truly amazing. Prerna's feelings her change of heart realizing she was wrong about him Her care
Viewers would need something like this
Bajaj is papa and Damaad no1 he will also prove to be the best husband koi mauka toh de
Cookie Rishabh are adorable I am in love with this family
Cookie is protecting her dad from her bua
Loved it.
thank you so much. Indeed even I noticed and even after 8yrs it's still the same. Too bad they haven't explored that angle and instead made the Sharma's super ungrateful and hateful. 🙄Originally posted by: sparkling_gems
Wooohooooo...it was really heart touching.
First, the big applause for the picture, everytime Rishabh hand folded in front of Prerna's mother in namastey mode, I noticed a kid in him who wanted to ask apology of his mother for his unintentional mistake.
Will be back after rest of the feedback.
he is, and he always will be. He is a coconut. Only prerna can unravel that side and she knows it now 🤗Originally posted by: siarocks007
I wish this really happens in the serial. Behind the cold demeanor Mr Bajaj is a softy and has a very big heart.
aww thank you so much 🤗how are you? Kaash ab bhi aisa kuch dekhne ko mile ☹️Originally posted by: sparkling_gems
First of all I m truly truly sorry Ankie for being this late in giving my feedback but its not entirely my fault either. IF is to be blamed too. Everytime I tried posting a comment, it says error.
Anyways...story is undoubtedly an amazing read. Glad to see Prerna and Mrs. Sharma realizing the worth of Mr. Bajaj. And about the time when Prerna thought that whoever she is closed to, she has to lose him/ her and even a thought of losing Mr. Bajaj, how it scared her, was really heart touching.
And later how saasu ma took care of damad ji bass mera toh dil hee aa gaya iss scene par..
Kash hum aisa kuch seria mein bhi dekhen.
😆 hey mayur I guess he was genuinely happy for Veena and seeing happy faces of Sharma family. Which is why.Originally posted by: MayurChan
Just for a reference i was watching that court wala epi ....in that around 18:02 when B falls on P and A comes running in to the court....u actually see Anupam giving him a casual and little smiling welcome....hahahaha don't know it was in the scene yaa shooting ka part tha..😆
EK has more Chemistry with KSG 😍Originally posted by: MayurChan
One more thing SRK and EK had more chemistry in that promo...😆
Originally posted by: MayurChan
Finally Read this one too...
One thing is for Sure....this series of OSes of yours can be turned into a series like a sequel to one and another like interlinking the story lines yet like a OS..i hope so you are getting my point...
i liked the writing very much...
B getting all emotional with Veena Ji is still a little bit too much for me as even the show one is not helping to imagine these things....the only good thing i can remember is her telling that " Bajaj ne bahut bure kaam kiya hai kai burai bhi hai par uska Dil sahi jagah pe hai "
very good OS..👏
Par uske liye likhna padega woh kaun karega 😔😭
Thank you for the suggestions but I am better at prompts you know 🤗thank you dear t&&ti 😆
thank you so much niya 🤗 🤗sach mein kaash kuki se kuch mil jata 🙄 ab sneha hai but let's see 😔Originally posted by: Niyati_T
Aww this was so beautiful ❤️
Prerna caring for Rishabh and realising her mistakes❤️
Kukki ka reaction toh kabhi dekhne hi nahi mila show main 🤔
Veena realised that he was not wrong and she forgives him, saath main gajar ka hawla bhi leke aai
Kukki playing Imitating her Dad 😎
Prerna, Kukki and Rishabh on the same bed
Yeh read karne ke baad aur stories read karna hai, Abhi jaldi jaldi likho
Haha. Pavan has said once he is done reading all three I will have to write another one 🙄☹️ itna sara prompts kaun lata phir ☹️
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