PreRish One-Shot: Deluded Insecurities - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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You know sometimes you realize a person's importance in your life only when you are away from them..And the same thing happened here..Prerna was away from Rishabh's eyes, but it was not out of sight out of mind for him..Rather she occupied his mind...Distance made his heart understand what he needed the most in his life...Rishabh's fear of losing Prerna forever was put forth bang on with the right mixture of guilt, fear and love..On the other hand Prerna though was angry but her yearning to reconcile with Rishabh was presented well in words...And all it took was one phone call and everything was put behind and Prerna rushed to meet Bajaj...Now when she is going out of her way for him, how can he stay behind..He arrived despite being hurt and embracing each other they buried and burned the demon of insecurities to ground...Finally they were at peace as the heart got what it was looking for and without a doubt their peace was comforting...Lost in each other's arms PreRish found a whole new world, where even in crowd they were alone but they were enough for each other and they completed one another's world..Superb..Awesome OS..👍🏼

Edited by MysticRiver - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Advaymerijaan

Wow! Never thought I will be in the first page.. 😆 First thing fist: I looovvveee the OS and the conflicting emotions of Mr. Bajaj and Prerna u have portrayed.. Mr. Bajaj is back to his wife and Mrs. Bajaj is within the warmth of her husband’s arm. They both have lots of issues to solve, feelings to confess but everything can wait for the time being . What matters is they are with each other ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thanks a lot! 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

Whoaaa😳

I LOVE the choice of words here! Like seriously the descriptions are so on point.

I can see it in front of my eyes, play like a scene.

Mesmerizing and ravishing.

The fear, scare and insecurities. All so amazing.

Wooooooow.


This was so extraordinarily heart warming and splendid Wist!🤗

Cheers!

Thanks a lot Maahi! 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: najma123

How painful. 💔 Nice man. The dream bit was so eerie, I thought you are gonna show her dead or something.

The dream sequence indeed makes one feel that. 😆

Thanks a lot! 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: mitras

Wow it was really beautiful piece of work. While reading the bajaj part i actually imagined ksg when he was shedding tears in Alone and the combination was so so perfect

Thank you so much! 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

You know sometimes you realize a person's importance in your life only when you are away from them..And the same thing happened here..Prerna was away from Rishabh's eyes, but it was not out of sight out of mind for him..Rather she occupied his mind...Distance made his heart understand what he needed the most in his life...Rishabh's fear of losing Prerna forever was put forth bang on with the right mixture of guilt, fear and love..On the other hand Prerna though was angry but her yearning to reconcile with Rishabh was presented well in words...And all it took was one phone call and everything was put behind and Prerna rushed to meet Bajaj...Now when she is going out of her way for him, how can he stay behind..He arrived despite being hurt and embracing each other they buried and burned the demon of insecurities to ground...Finally they were at peace as the heart got what it was looking for and without a doubt their peace was comforting...Lost in each other's arms PreRish found a whole new world, where even in crowd they were alone but they were enough for each other and they completed one another's world..Superb..Awesome OS..👍🏼

You summarized the whole OS really well. Thanks a lot! 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

I love to read about prerish.and loved this specially first part about rishab feeling his fear a life devoid of prerna and his strong desire to live with her.do write more on prerish plz.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Moushumi

I love to read about prerish.and loved this specially first part about rishab feeling his fear a life devoid of prerna and his strong desire to live with her.do write more on prerish plz.

Thanks a lot! 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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gonna read this now 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

The dream was really bad but it made bajaj realise his feelings 😳 no amount of anger can overcome the love she has for him ❤️ beautiful choice of words shruti 🤗 loved it

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