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Posted: 6 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: PrincessRitz29


Loved the interior monologue so much! One of my favorite chapters after the last one.
Eagerly awaiting for protective and righteous Anurag. Words can't express how beautiful and sophisticated your writing is.
IF is acting odd took me so long to type my comment 😆

Love you and awaiting for an update
Keep shining 👏⭐️

Aw thank you sweetie! Omg sameee
Aw thats such a sweet thing to say
Haha how annoying!
Love you! Thanks lovely⭐️
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5~ Hating The If
Anurag had been driving for what felt like hours trying to figure out what road they had taken, his heart was seemingly beating a hundred miles per hour, his mind racing with too many horrific imaginations of what he'd find when he finally found her-if he found her. It was the if that scared him the most, he hated working on a probability scale, but he had always been a statistical man and he knew the numbers well enough to know that every minute that ticked by was precious, every moment longer made for a higher percentage that she'd be dead when he found her. But, he couldn't think like that or he'd never find her, he had to be smart. Then it finally clicked, whoever had made the deal with Rodriguez would probably try and play dirty, meaning they'd want to sell her off, so they had the better gain. Lifting his phone to his ear as he drove he waited "Hello, my name is Anurag Basu from the LAPD, you can check my credentials".

"Detective, this is officer Andrews, how can I help you?" He seemed young, new on the job, a part of him wanted to warn the young man to run as far as possible from the job and to never look back, but he reminded himself that not everyone's experience would mirror his.

"I've followed a suspect all the way here and I have reasonable belief that a woman will be sold tonight, what are the places in which women are sold in Las Vegas?" Noting down the list in his head, he nodded "Uh huh, okay great, I'll contact you again if I find anything".

"Not to be disrespectful, but I have to remind you that you cannot make an active arrest in this jurisdiction, your badge means nothing here".

"No arrest, just saving a woman, thank you" cutting off, he rolled his eyes. He wasn't exactly a stickler for the rules, often he had to take the back alley in order to get information, he didn't like it at first, but rules alone didn't always get the job done. His way meant lives were saved and that thought helped him sleep at night.

Prerna massaged her upper arm as she was finally released, blinking through her tears she stepped away from the many women lined up "What, what am I doing here?"

"This little lady, is a brothel, tonight you will be sold to the highest bidder" smiling sheepishly at her, his yellow and silver teeth gleamed beneath the wobbly light "Wipe your tears, save that for when you're sold" winking, he walked away as she was dragged forward by another man.

"Please, I don't want this, this is illegal and, and".

"And, and" he mimicked, eyes wide and bottom lip jutting out "Your husband is in the mafia, you know all about illegal, don't be a pest, get in line" shoving her forward he watched as the curtain fell down, then took his place beside the podium "Ladies and gentleman, we have collected the finest women we could find for you to select for your own personal wants and needs, decide your bids and with the slam of the hammer the auction will begin".

Prerna couldn't move, her body was frozen in place, mouth dry and back stiff, she wanted to scream but no sound left her lips, the beady eyes of the many bidders made her feel both ill and dizzy, she knew her life wasn't great on any account, but she had fooled herself that Rodriguez was the only bad man she'd have to face in her life, it had never occurred to her that she'd have to survive a tornado of them.
Anurag pulled up in a car park, got out of his car and glanced around. Getting in wasn't going to be easy, but he wasn't the kind of man who gave up the first time. "Excuse me" rubbing his stubble he let out a brief chuckle, looked around then eyed the tall guard "My wife is at home and I wasn't going to come, but you know how it is, women, all they do is whine, whine, whine and it's like I'm slaving away all day at work and she is never grateful, tonight I just need a woman who is thankful for me, need to work it all off if you get me?" He hoped his act would work.

"I'm afraid I need the password sir".

"I know they tell you not to write it down, but I'm forgetful, my wife found it and asked all these questions, so I threw it in the trash, I'm not even from here, I'm sure you can do a man a favour, you know how it is, don't you?"

"I really shouldn't".

"Oh, forget it" pushing his fist into the man's stomach, he bashed his head onto his knee, then elbowed him in the eye "Unbelievable, all you had to do was let me in" pulling at the lapels of his jacket he pushed open the door and made his way to the darkest corner.

Prerna bit hard down onto her tongue as she was prodded in the back with a bony finger to move forward, her ears rung, mind swirling with far too many bad endings to this night, looking to the door she crossed her fingers, maybe Rodriguez would come, maybe he would see the err of his ways and rescue her.
"We have fifty thousand, do we have fifty-five? Fifty-five there, do we have sixty? Sixty, do we have seventy?"

Squeezing her eyes shut, she held her hands together tightly in a lame effort to stop her legs from shaking and giving way.
"One hundred thousand".

Prerna's eyes flung open at the amount, her jaw dropped suddenly as her breath hitched in her throat. She had no time to ask herself why Anurag was here or why he was willing to pay so much to save her, all she knew was that he was here, and he was saving her and within that moment that was all that mattered. Jumping from the stage she ran straight for him, clashing into his chest she brought her arms up and around his shoulders while burying her face into his chest "Thank you, thank you" sobbing loudly into his warm hold, she shivered at the chill down her spine at what could have happened. As soon as the man shouted out sold, she began to relax, still unwilling to let him go yet, his heart quickened beneath her ear, matching her breathing as he lifted a hand to her back she stretched out her fingers over his muscular shoulders, cheek firm against his toned chest "Take me away, please" her voice cracked "I want to go home", though she had no idea where that was anymore.

Anurag turned his head to the side to look at her, she hadn't said much since leaving the den, she had just looked down and awkwardly pulled herself away from him, he found he missed the warmth of her body as soon as it was gone. "You're probably wondering why I'm here" he thought it best to address the issue at hand before she brought it up.

"I know why: she whispered "You're after my husband" she seemed the furthest thing away from shocked "And you wanted to use me to do it, don't worry, I'm not offended, you're not the first and you won't be the last" relaxing back against the seat, she let out a tearful sigh "I'm a pawn in this game, never an important part on the chess board" turning her head so she was looking out the window, she swiped away a tear "Just drop me off at a hotel please".

This was the make or break moment, reveal his cover or pull her in even more? "You're married? I didn't know, your husband doesn't seem great if he's letting a woman as beautiful as you be sold to other men, I mean no disrespect but it's not hard for me to guess why so many people are" he made bunny ears with two fingers "After your husband".

Prerna looked back at him "Please don't try and play me for a fool, I'm used to this".

Slamming his foot down on the break, they both flung forward "No, honest, I don't want you to think that way of me Prerna, I really do just want to get to know you, you're a very attractive woman, can't a man just want to take an interest for you?" He knew if the situation was different, he'd definitely want to get to know her, sure lying wasn't great but she was as expected, still covering for her husband, and that could only mean that the events of tonight were planned by them both, they just so happened to get blindsided by the other party trying to sell her again.

"Really? You really just want to be my friend?" Prerna had wanted a friend for as long as she could remember, of course she had people at the centre, but this seemed different somehow.

"Would I lie to you?" Grinning, he started up the car again "Of course I wanted to get to know you as more than a friend" he watched pink tinge her cheeks as she looked down again, she was such a nervous person "But knowing you have a husband kind of foils that plan".

"Promise" stretching out her hand, she wrapped her pinkie around his as he repeated the one word that would go on to build the foundation of a bond neither of them would ever expect.

"Are you hungry? I know a great place just north of here".

"I have about three dollars" holding up the cash he had previously given to her, she smiled softly "But I can't spend this".

"Is that the?" Anurag was taken back by the fact she had kept the money "Why didn't you spend it?"

"You'll laugh at me if I say".

"I won't, promise" he squeezed her pinkie again, not too bothered by the fact neither of them had pulled their hands away.

"It meant a lot to me, so I don't see this as money, but as kindness and I can't spend it until I can repay the favour, I mean you bought me food, gave me your coat, saved my life, I'm not even half way" Prerna wasn't sure how he'd react, she was sure it sounded stupid to him, but kindness wasn't an experience she felt often.

"You don't have to repay me, but if you really want to, then allow me to buy you food tonight, you haven't had the best night" it seemed so easy to be fooled by her act, her innocence was alluring, but he wasn't keen on giving her the benefit of the doubt.

"Oh, I couldn't do that" Prerna dropped her hand, then crossed her arms "You're too kind, thank you, but no thank you".

"See now you've hurt my feelings" he joked, unrealising of the effect his words had on her.

"Now you've hurt my feelings" Rodriguez snarled into her ear, hand so tight around her throat that she began to see stars.

Snapping herself out of it, she backed away "I'm not hungry, I just want to sleep, please" glancing to the side, she readied herself to pull open the door if need be, she was stupid to have trusted him, to have thought he was different. He'd hurt her too, she just knew it.

Anurag was baffled at the way she suddenly shut down "Did I say something wrong?" His brows furrowed as his hand reached out for hers only to have her move them back "Prerna, I was only joking".

"You know what, I'll find my way from here, thank you" holding the handle of the door, she swallowed back a scream when the doors clicked close "Anurag, I want to leave, please let me out".

"You have three dollars, no phone, you don't know your way around and you're in a dangerous part of town, you're NOT getting out of the car" he hadn't meant to order her around, but it seemed as if she had an attraction to danger and he didn't want to be the reason she got herself hurt, not when he could prevent it.

"I'll be fine" her hands were shaking now.

"Prerna, you're safe here, I'm not going to hurt you" this made her head whip around fast, eyes as wide as a deer caught in headlights, was he onto something or was she just fearful after the events of the night?

The last thing she wanted was for him to make a promise he couldn't keep, it was the early hours of the morning and she was tired, dreary and hungry. "Actually, I'd love a bite to eat if it's not too much to ask" she knew he knew she wanted to change the topic, she was thankful that he allowed it without questioning.

"I promise this will be the best burger you've ever ate" he hoped to cheer her up slightly, he didn't like to see her frown.

"I'm sure you're right" closing her eyes, she allowed her body to float away into the darkness, sleep had evaded her for so long, this truly felt like heaven.




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Posted: 6 years ago
#23
Another beautiful update.
I really loved the part where Prerna literally clutches Anurag for her dear life! So beautifully written.
The emotions, the turmoil, and little details makes it such a wonderful read.
Update soon,
Eagerly waiting
:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
Amazing just beautiful!
Loved Anurag's anxiety, the beginning of their friendship scene was beautiful and natural.
I loved the bit where Anurag convinces Prerna about how he wants to be friends with her.
Loved the ending, thank you for giving an enriching update. Waiting for more 😊👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: HARSHTA

Another beautiful update.
I really loved the part where Prerna literally clutches Anurag for her dear life! So beautifully written.
The emotions, the turmoil, and little details makes it such a wonderful read.
Update soon,
Eagerly waiting
:)

Aw! Thank you love
Oh my, same! It was adorable
Thank you, you're so kind
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: PrincessRitz29

Amazing just beautiful!

Loved Anurag's anxiety, the beginning of their friendship scene was beautiful and natural.
I loved the bit where Anurag convinces Prerna about how he wants to be friends with her.
Loved the ending, thank you for giving an enriching update. Waiting for more 😊👏

Aw thanks sweetie!
Oh same!
I know, she's going to be so hurt
You're a darling
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 6~ Ignoring Temptation

Anurag glanced over the table at Prerna who chewed slowly on her food, in the dimly lit restaurant she seemed to glow, holding a light of her own that shone onto his dark and dismal life. She was a quiet woman, didn't speak unless spoken to and didn't tend to react to a lot of situations in the normal way, for a woman who had nearly been sold, she should have been more fearful, either she was used to this type of situation or she was capable of getting out of it herself, if that was the case then the way she had clung onto him for dear life was nothing more than an act.

Looking up, she smiled politely "You're staring Anurag" she hadn't wanted to call him out on it, but his gaze made her feel nervous, especially after he had told her that he had wanted to be more than friends, she wasn't quite sure how to react.

"Can't help it" his tone was gruff as he winked making her gasp "I'm only joking, don't worry I know my boundaries, but" making sure she was looking directly at her, his voice dropped "If you ever stretch out those boundaries so I can get closer, I wouldn't mind" it was important to mess with her when she was somewhat vulnerable, that was the only way he'd ever get information.

"I am married, you know that" her voice cracked.

"If you don't care, neither do I" his answer was maybe a bit too fast for his liking, this was an act, not reality, the words seemed a tad too honest "Do you care?" He leant over the table, this answer was important, he'd find out how loyal she was to her husband and how far he had to go to break that loyalty.

Prerna knew her husband hurt her, she knew he probably didn't love her, and she questioned often if she loved him but, dreaming of moving on with another man and moving on with another man were two completely different things "Marriage is a sacred bond, my marriage isn't at it's strongest at the moment, but I made a vow to stay faithful, regardless of temptation, I won't break that vow".

Anurag raised a brow "So my offer is tempting then?" Her answer had given him more to think on than he had bargained on, if their marriage wasn't doing well, breaking it further would be easier, but she clearly wished to stick to being faithful, yet he found himself wondering how long she'd stay on that path if he tried harder, problem was that, that thought was more his own than the thought of a detective trying to finish a case.

"Temptation is everywhere, a kind man who saves my life isn't the norm, if I was another woman who was single, then yes I'd be tempted, but I am Prerna and I am married, so your offer" she paused for affect, his offer had intrigued her, but she didn't trust him completely and she definitely wasn't going to live her life on a whim and a silly belief that a man like him would ever look at a woman like her and see something special. "Wouldn't be one I'd accept".

Before he could respond, the bell atop the door rung as the door opened and three men entered who he recognised from when he had rescued Prerna, he hadn't really thought out the fact that he didn't have the money to pay for the sale. "Prerna, don't be alarmed, just stay calm, but when I stand up, walk around the table and stand behind me". If he got his gun out, not only would she be suspicious, he'd also be arrested, he had no power over this city. Rising to his feet, he waited for her to stand behind him then spread out his legs "Gentlemen" nodding briefly he turned his head to the side "If I say run, go straight out the back, find a dumpster and hide by it, do NOT go to the car".

Peering round his arm, she inhaled his musky scent, stepped closer and placed a hand on his elbow, it wasn't fair for him to get hurt because of her, no one else could die because of her, she wouldn't accept that the nicest man she had ever met would risk his life for her, she had to do something, she just had no idea what.

"Money, now and you can both go free" one stepped forward, hand on his gun that was tucked into his waist, Anurag had to clench his fist in order to not grab onto his, it was a pattern he was used to, a pattern he would have to break.

"I already paid" he shrugged.

"We are not fools, one last chance, give us the money or we kill you and your girl" he watched Prerna cover her mouth with her hands when he drew his gun, two other customers screamed and ran to the back.

Gripping Prerna's hand tightly, he spun on his foot and toward the back door, allowing her to get out first, he ran as fast as his legs could possibly allow, feet skidding across the autumn leaves that crackled beneath his boots, wind making its way into his throat, tightening his airways. Pain shoots up from his ankles, right shoulder twisting in an unfortunate way as he pulls her to his chest and places his hand over her mouth "Shh, not a sound".

Tears burnt her eyes, dripping over his fingers as she let out a muffled response, she was terrified, not so much for herself, but for him, she had dealt with worse, death was a welcomed escape, but he deserved to live. Flinching when his other arm wrapped around her waist as he pulled her closer, her eyes followed his face as he looked over her shoulder, squeezing her eyes shut at the gun shot, she missed the way his face paled significantly, and he breathed harder against her neck.

It was difficult for Anurag not to coil away from the bloody images in his head, the explosions that rung in his ears, he had to remind himself that he was not there anymore but running from the enemy was something he was far too used to, he knew all too well that the enemy always caught up. "Run that way, I'll distract them".

"No" she whimpered "I'm not leaving you alone" she couldn't even think of doing it "Together" she squeezed his hand that he had dropped from her mouth "Together or not at all".

His brows furrowed as he nodded, many questions burnt his lips, but now was neither the time nor the place to ask. Leading her out of the alley, he jumped back when he saw the gun facing him from a few steps away, pushed himself against the wall and shook his head "If we both go out there, one of us will get hurt, let me go".

"No, together" she repeated, did he have some kind of death wish? He was one man against three men who had weapons and the ability to call for back up, with knowledge of a city he was new to, if he was alone he had no chance.

Anurag had, had enough, rushing forward he grabbed the butt of one gun, pushed it to the side, lifted his knee and jammed it into the man's stomach, pushing him back into a car he forced him to drop the gun, kicked it away then pushed his head down onto the boot, turning he raised his fist and smashed it into the other's face, the crack of his nose echoed in the empty car park. The sound of a scream, made his blood run cold, looking over his shoulder he watched the other man place his greasy hands on Prerna's waist to hold her in place while raising his weapon to her head, distracted by that, he missed the large pole coming down on his head, tripping forward he held his head in agony.

Prerna's eyes widened, bloodshot from all the crying "Anurag" wriggling in the man's hold, she stretched out her hand "Anurag, Anurag get up" she was sobbing now, falling silent at the click of the gun beside her ear "Please, please don't hurt him".

Rising to his feet once more, he held his arm up to stop the pole from hitting him again, held it then hit the man with it causing him to fall to the ground in a heap, blinking through the blood down his forehead he continued his assault, halting only when the sound of a gunshot resounded in his ears, turning to face her, he looked for any marks of blood "Prerna, where are you?"

"Your arm" she panted as she was shoved forward and the assailant ran the other way "Anu-" she was cut off when he fell to his knees.

Looking down at his left arm, he saw the familiar mark of a gunshot wound dug into his bicep, digging his nails into his arm he blinked fast, eyes faltering over her as she rushed to him, then before he could say anymore, he fell forward, eyes rolling back till all she could see was the whites of his pupils as he began to convulse.





Edited by -Rehanna- - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
Wow!
It was so intense
I was literally biting my cheek in anticipation of what would happen, will they be able to escape or not?
I really hope that they are not caught into anymore trouble
Poor Anurag, and oh dear! Prerna, can't see her go trough anymore pain
Update soon
:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: HARSHTA

Wow!
It was so intense
I was literally biting my cheek in anticipation of what would happen, will they be able to escape or not?
I really hope that they are not caught into anymore trouble
Poor Anurag, and oh dear! Prerna, can't see her go trough anymore pain
Update soon

:)

Aw thanks love! It's only going to get more intense!
But things will get more interesting soon:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
The intensity of the characters are on point.
Loved the title 👏
I hope Anurag survives abhi toh he needs to fight all the upcoming Kasautii's in the chapters 😛
I can't wait for the upcoming chapters and twists.
Loving how their bond is growing.
Keep it up 👏👏👏
Yas! gonna read the other fic now 😊

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