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Posted: 5 years ago

Very nice...please continue..

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Was searching for your fanfic. Got it.

Wonderfully written! Please continue.

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Was searching for your fanfic. Got it.

Wonderfully written! Please continue.

Nice plotting and character development.

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*NOTE*

Hi guys! I will be posting the next update of the ff(It's pretty long still writing it) within the next 2-3 days.So I will be PMing the link to anyone who has ever liked or commented my ff.If u wish to be PM'ed or don't want to to be PM'ed u can let me know through a comment here or through message

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Part 20 Chapter 1: Fears and Revelations

Mohini Basu nervously paced the hall,her eyes constantly moving towards Anurag's bedroom upstairs.She had taken a huge risk.She only hoped that it didn't backfire and made things worse for her son.This morning when the plumber told them that it would take him two days to fix the main pipe in Tapur's bathroom, a plan had germinated inside Mohini's head-to use this situation to make Prerna stay in Anurag's room,so that they would get closer.And being so close to Anurag and seeing all that Prerna would lose, she'll finally change her mind.But the only problem was that there were other rooms in the house, four of them in the West Wing all freshly painted with no issues with them.No issues with them until Prerna almost vomited at the smell of fresh paint in the wall, that is.Mohini couldn't believe her luck! It's like even Durga Ma was supporting her in her scheme to reunite her son with the love of his life!Her only regret is that she didn't have the time to think through her plan,which was why when Prerna suggested that Anurag move to the west wing while Prerna stayed in HIS bedroom, without a second thought Mohini had lied that Anurag TOO was allergic to the smell of fresh paint.And now, here she was worrying that Anurag, himself might offer to move to the West Wing and then her lie would be caught!

Mohini halted in her steps when she saw Prerna getting down the stairs looking thoughtful.Trying to put up a brave front Mohini asked her, "Prerna, tumhare lunch ka time ho gaya hai, table lag Chuka hai tum aa jao.". Stunned, Prerna looked at Mohini in surprise, as if she was noticing her for the first time, "Jee kakimoni?".Mohini asked curiously,"Kya baat hai?Tum itni khoyi khoyi si kyu ho?Tumhari tabiyat to theek hai?". Recovering herself, Prerna said, "Haan kakimoni, main theek hu. Woh Aap kuch keh rahi thi?".Mohini replied, "Lunch ready hai,tum Jake baith jaao main sabko bulati hu". Prerna said, "Kakimoni, woh Anurag abhi abhi office se lauta hai aap uske liye zara juice bhijwa dengi please?". Surprised at her request, Mohini replied, "haan zaroor,tum jaake baitho main bhijwati hu". Prerna nodded and headed towards the dining table, her mind still occupied with what she heard from Anurag . Mr.Rishabh Bajaj jaisa itna bada investor, Prerna thought, Daily Blitz jaise newspaper mein apna paisa kyu invest kiya hoga?

As Mohini watched her go,she gave a sigh of relief, Thank God, Mohini thought, isse kuch nahi pata chala.I just hope ke Taapur ka kamra theek hone tak yeh baat aise hi chhupi rahe.

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Ved and Mishka were clearing the table after lunch when the phone rang.Picking up , Mishka was about to speak when a sharp voice from the other end answered, "Hello!Sweet sis!Kaisi ho?Tumhara woh fatichar boyfriend kaisa hai?". Shocked Mishka exclaimed,"Komolika?!".Komolika clicked her tongue, "Tumhare manners kaha gaye, Mishka...mujhe dhoka dekar jab uss sanskaari Prerna se tumne dosti Kar hi li thi,toh at least usse kuch manners seekh leti..(sighing)very sad". Angrily,Mishka replied,"Tumne mujhe kyu phone kiya hai, Komolika?". Komolika got straight down to the point, "Mujhe dad ke accountant ka phone aaya tha, woh keh rahe the ki tum unse dad ke locker ke baare mein poochh rahi thi.". Mishka said defensively" Haan,main jaan na chahti thi ki tum sach bol rahi ho ya phirse koi nayi chaal chal rahi ho". Komolika snickered at this," Aur ab toh tumhe pata chal gaya na ki main sach bhi bol rahi hu, aur nayi chaal bhi chal rahi hu.Anyway, let's get to the point, tumhe mom ki aakhri nishaani chahiye aur mujhe meri aazadi, agar hum dono ek saath ho jaaye-" Mishka snapped back, " Aisa kuch nahi Hoga!! Aapne Jo kiya hai aapko uski sazaa milkar hi rahegi!Aapko kya lagta aap mom ki yaadon ka faida uthakar jail se bach jayengi?Aisa bilkul nahi hoga!Main aisa kabhi hone nahi dungi, aur agar mom zinda hoti toh woh bhi yahi kehti!" Komolika lost her cool at this, "Don't you dare tell me Mishka ke mom kya chahti thi!!Agar aaj woh yaha hoti toh mujhe dhoka dene ke liye tumhe disown kar deti!" Mishka shot back,"Bilkul nahi!Mom aapke aur dad ki tarah nahi thi.Agar aaj woh yaha hoti to sach ka saat deti!Mera saath deti!Aur aap-". Annoyed, Komolika interrupted her," Ok, OK fine...(sighing) apna lecture band karo! Seriously Mishka tum loser ki loser hi rahogi. Tumhe seriously lagta hai ki agar tum meri madad nahi karogi to main jail mein sadungi ? Let me tell you something my sweet sissy! Komolika logo se madad nahi leti balki unko mauka deti hai..apni zindagi sudhaarne ka.Maine tumhe mauka diya mom ki aakhri nishaani paane ka, tumne usse kho diya that's on you!!Lekin tum akeli to mom ki jewelry ya humare property ki haqdaar nahi ho Na?".Mishka understood Komolika's implication, "Agar aapka ishaara Ronit ki taraf hai to bhool jaiyye! Woh aapki koi madad nahi kar sakta!Woh toh-".Komolika completed the sentence for her ,"-Delhi mein hai.Tumhari tarah usse koi fark nahi padhta ki main jail mein hu.Lekin..Lekin..lekin my dumb sweet sissy tum yeh baat bhool rahi ho ki unlike you, usse sahi-galat,adarsh, sachchai ki rah pe chalne ka koi shauk nahi hai.Uss department mein woh bilkul mujpe aur dad pe gaya hai!Aur jab woh mera offer sunega tab usse mere liye kaam karne se tum bhi nahi rok Sakti!". "Nonsense!!", Mishka scoffed," Aap khud jail mein hai, aap usko aisa kya dengi? Dad ki property? Woh to government kuch dino mein seize karlegi aur yeh baat to Ronit ko bhi pata hai". Komolika chuckled," Main Ronit ko kya dungi woh to tumhe mere jail se chhootne ke baad hi pata chalega,Mishka. Aur uss waqt main tumse aaj ka badla zaroor lungi!Till then(in a fake cheery voice), sweet sissy bohot khush raho,jo chahiye usse hasil karlo(coldly), taaki jail se nikalne ke baad main tumse woh sab kuch chheen saku jisse tumhe khushi milti hai.Goodbye!!", threatened Komolika slamming the phone.On the other end,Mishka looked at her phone with a worried expression.Ved called her from behind, "Kya baat hai?Kya kaha usne?". Turning around Mishka said worriedly," Ved, I think mujhe ek baar Delhi jaakar Ronit se milna hoga!". Surprised he asked," Kyu?Kya hua?"

Mishka replied,"I think Komolika humare khilaaf Ronit ko use karne wali hai.".Shocked Ved asked,"Kya?Tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai?Mujhe theek theek bataao kya kaha usne?". Hyperventilating,she said,"Kuch zyada to nahi, magar yeh kaha ki ab woh Ronit ke zariye jail se niklegi aur hum sab ko barbaad kardegi.Ved...mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai(panicking)agar usne phirse...". Ved took Mishka in his arms and pacified her,,"Shh..shh..shant.Baby kuch nahi hoga I promise you.Woh Komolika bas khokli dhamkiyaan de rahi hai!Aur kuch nahi!Arre agar usse kuch karna hota toh woh pehle hi kar chuki hoti.Warna woh Ronit ko chhorkar tumse kyu madad maangti, bolo?" Mishka reflected on Ved's words, "Shayad tum sahi keh rahe ho aur woh yeh sab hume pareshaan karne ke liye kar rahi hai, lekin phir bhi main ek baar Delhi jaake Ronit se milna chahti hu, apni tasalli ke liye".Ved understood that the only way to get rid of Mishka's fears was to let her go so he agreed, " Achcha theek hai, hum iss weekend he Delhi jayenge aur Ronit ko milkar ayenge ok?".Mishka nodded and gave him a small smile and hugged him tightly.He understood her fear.For the first time in her life, finally out of her domineering sister's shadow Mishka had felt secured and loved, she was afraid of losing it.And Ved would do everything he could to keep her secure and happy, even if it meant wasting his weekend over a wild speculation that his moronic future brother in law might be stupid enough to help his criminal elder sister out.

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~Lunch at Basu Bari~

Suman beamed at Paro, the Basu's domestic help as she served Suman a generous helping of pulaao.She looked around the large table laden with various dishes for lunch.Humne toh kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki humara plan itna successful hoga,she thought smiling.Kitne dinon baad koi hume khana paros raha hai,naki hum kissi ko paros rahe hai.Suman glanced at Anurag who was serving more rice to Prerna in spite of the latter's protest.Then she saw something strange.Anurag was picking out the fishbone from the fish lying on his plate, and quietly transferring the deboned fish into Prerna's plate.When he didn't listen to Prerna's protest,she quietly mixed the fish with rice and ate.Suman, shook her head and thought, Aur phir Prerna Didi kehti hai ki unhe ab Anurag ke saath nahi rehna. Wakaayi(rolling her eyes) kitne nakhre hai inke. Ishwaar ne sab kuch thaali mein sajaa kar diya hai lekin inhe phir bhi shikayat karni hai.Suman's eyes went to Mohini who was engaged in a conversation with Moloy, Waise humne kakimoni ka itna bada kaam kiya hai, unke bete ki sabse badi khushi ko iss ghar mein lekar aaye iss ke badle mein woh hume koi inaam nahi dengi Kya?Kahi inhe aisa toh nahi lagta ki hume bas ek panne ki anguthi de kar yeh humse apna sara kaam nikaalengi?Agar aisa hai toh hume inki yeh galat fehmi ko dur karni paregi jald se jald!

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Note-Chapter 2 of this part will be updated by Monday.Till then please don't forget to give your feedback and continue reading Game Plan

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Posted: 5 years ago

Feels great to have you back among us. The chapter was as usual realistic and in subtle flow. Excited to see PreRish clash and another intense AnuPre moment. These FFs have become only reason to get attached with a show called Kasauti Zindagi Kay. You are marvellous at this art.

Keeping posting.

PS:Mohini's worry and hesistance is very well portrayed.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Very beautifully written ❤️

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Very beautifully written ❤️

Btw I love ur signature!!!Huge fan!!🤣🤣🤣

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Amazing

Fantastic

Its getting quite interesting with passing chapters 😊😊😊

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You're amazing dear. I'm speechless, and robbed off if adjectives to praise your amazing writing skills. Just brilliant.

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