FF-Prem and Mukti-Ehsaas Part 6- PG:7 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

5 years later after Prem and Mukti were born which meant Prem was 8 and Mukti was 5.

In the 5 years Mukti parents die while rock climbing where 9/11 happened in a Explosion and Bajaj and Basu familyu broke up, which meant Prem and Mukti didnt even know eachother.

Mukti lived in a orphanag and Prem doesnt even know how Mukti looks. Before Prerna had decided to get Prem and Mukti married when they grew up, but because their familyies got in a fight, htey never talked, Prerna doesnt even know that Mukti's parents died.

Mukti and Prem go to hte same school.

Mukti was running with her friends when someone from grade 3 came and pushed her, she started crying when a hand came her way, she took it and got up.

Mukti:thanks
Boy: No Problem.
Mukti: Whats ur name?
Boy: Prem whats urs?
Mukti:Mukti, Mukti Deshmukh.
Prem and Mukti talked a little when the buzzer rang.
Mukti:Im sorry i have to go, Bye. see u after school, by the way what grade are u in?
Prem:Im in grade 3 what about u?
Mukti:Kindergarthen
Prem smiles sooooooooo cutely:KINDERGARTEN
Mukti tries to say but cant so she just leaves.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

The Next day

There was a feild trip for the kindergatens to grade 3's.

Mrs. Sharma:Hurry up kiddies today sour feild trip.
Mukti:Is it going to be fun there?
Mrs. Sharma:Ofcourse.
Mukti smiled and leaves toward the line of kids.
Mrs.Sharma:You will be buddies up on the bus, lets go!

In the Bus.

Mrs. Sharma:Ok,
Kiran with Karan,
Pooja with Arjun,
Harry with Khushi,
Tina with Prem, no sorry Mukti with Prem,
Devki with Shahid,
Kareena with Anil...
She says till the end of the list.

Prem:Remember me, Mukti?
Mukti:Yeah, Hi mister.
Prem:WHAT, your not going to call me Prem?
Mukti:N because i like saying mister.
Prem:Ok, whatever, Missy! ill call u that!
Mukti:FINE!
They look the opposite ways.

Once they reach their camp, Prem and Mkti go to their room. In the evening, it was raining really fast, Prem loved it and grabbed Mukti's hand and ran in the rain with her.
He started dancing and spinning but fell, hit his knee and started crying and crying like a baby.

Mukti quickly called the teacher, Mrs. Sharma brought Prem inside and put a bandage on him.
Mukti walked upto Prem and wiped his tears.
Mukti:U know what?
Prem:What?
Mukti:My mommy and daddy left me when i was just a babby.
Prem:NO! why didnt u tell me?
Mukti:Well because we just meet.
Prem:Well ok but, i feel sooo sad for u.
Mukti:Its ok im ok being an orpanage.
Prem:Maybe u could live with me and my family?
Mukti:That would be great!!!
SO 2 days of camping, they went home, well back to school and their parents would meet them there.

Mukti saw everyone with their parents except her, only her parents died. Mukti still smiled like an angel in fornt of everyone hiding her sadness.Prem sees Mukti and takes her hand, brings her to his Parents.

Prem:Ma, This is my friend, the 1 i was talking about.
Prerna:WOW, kitne cute lagh thi hai.
Mukti:Mera naam Mukti hai.
Prerna got suspicious to this name.
Prerna:Last name?
Mukti:Deshmukh, paar mere mommy aur daddy dono is doniya seh dhoor chalege.
Prena feels erally heart broken to this : Toh tum neh hamare sath rehna hai?
Mukti:Please aunty, i dont like where i live right now!
Prerna:I dont know what do u say Prem(being sarcastic)
Prem: PLEASE MA PLEASE!
Prerna: Ok then, tum reh sakti ho, paar tum neh mujhe Chotte Maa bulana hoga, promise?
Mukti:PROMISE! thanks Aunty!. Opps i mean Chotte Maa!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwww pm r so cute 😳 update soon can't wait 2 read da next part 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok i will be doing a short update soon so wait for it!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4

Its been 6 years since Mukti has been living with Bajaj parivaar.

Mukti (12) has a crush on Prem and to find out if he likes her she's trying her very best.

Prem (14) likes Mukti sooo much but just as a friend, he always hangs out with her every lunch but he likes bugging Mukti all the time and he and Mukti walk to every class together.

Now...

Mukti came running down the stairs with a book in her hand and with Prem running after her.
Mukti: Chotti Maa!!! Chotti Maa!!! HELP!!!

While running down the stairs (she's off the stairs now) she tripped on the carpet but Prem caught her that very second, but they both fall Mukti on top of Prem. She was soo happy.

Mukti: Sorry... she quickly gets up and runs.
Prem: Mukti!!! get back here!

Mukti gets to Prerna and goes behind her.

Mukti: Chotti Ma Help...Prem....Prem gets there.
Prem: Maa tell her to give me back my book! I need it its important.
Prerna: What kind of book is it?

Mukti shows her
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Prerna: Then don't give it, if it was his diary or something then i would have told u to give it but don't.
Prem: Maaa tell her to give it back (he whines)
Prerna: Ok theek Hai. Mukti give it.

Mukti makes a sad face and is handing it to him. Prem's about to grab it when Mukti goes running again with it.

Prem: Hey!!!! Mukti!!!! He starts chasing her again.

Mukti runs outside in the backyard, she goes toward the pool... she stops at the edge

Mukti: Prem, here your book, come and get it. She's waving it in the air

Prem comes running in that direction and right when he's right near the pool, Mukti moves the book and Prem falls in the pool. SPLASH!
Prerna hears this inside and runs outside seeing Prem in the pool all wet (and boy he's looking sooooooooooooooooooooo cute all wet!)

Prerna: Ha Ha Ha Ha! laughs

Mukti is giving Prem a hand to get out but that was her bad luck and he pulled her in the water. The book fell on the edge on the pool, it was half wet.

Prerna was laughing even more she couldn't even stop.

They both get out of the pool and got get changed in to nice clothes for school because they were getting late.

Once they were changed they left for school
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Posted: 17 years ago
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how sweet. hope prem falls for her too
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww.. ur ff is shoo cute..lookin forward to it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww its sooo cuteee!!
Prem and Mukti as kids 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks ill be updating soon wait for it!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 continue soon plzzzzzzzzz 😭 😭

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