FF-Prem and Mukti-Ehsaas Part 6- PG:7 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey cutest update 👏 👏 .Awesome.Please do continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwww so sweet.....luved it .....its kinda cute prem taking care of Mukti!!!

cont. sooooon!
Love,
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cute ff! BUT ya got to start updating!!..im hoping sometime this month? or year? 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OK im soo sorry i havent updated in a long time but now im back and ll try writing my next part looooong! But for now here is my...

Part 6!!!

First of all NEW characters...
the new charaters are

Imran Khan playing as Mukti's older brother... you could say that.

Harshad Chopra playing as the person who will fall in love with Mukti... but the fall in love with someone else.

Aaditi Gupta playing as the girl who will fall in love with Harshad and she 'will be' Mukti's best friend, and she will have her curly hair in this fan fic i like her curly hair better!

Ohhh and their names are their real names so thats all the characters...

Im making thisfanfic kind of like a movie well not the exact sceens but itll have the all the songs from one movie and that movie is...

Kismat Konnection

So ill be using the songs from that movie in my fan fic

ok now ill start,

Part 6!

8 years later,

Dear Diary,

Prem's coming back today from his studies in Canada. Oh my god, I can't wait! Today at 12:30 he'll be here, but I don't know why I feel something bad is going to happen. Has he changed, would he be tall and handsome kind of like prince charming? Ha, I know that's never going to happen. Or would he be all gangster... we haven't seen each other since i don't know 5 years, i want to see him he probably misses me, i really miss him, well i gotta go now im going to make all of his favorite foods, bye!

Mukti closes her diary and runs downstairs and starts cooking.

Prerna: Mukti! Mukti!
Mukti: Choti ma mein yaha hoon.
Prerna: Living room mein a, mein ne tujhe kuch batana hai!
Mukti: abhi ayi.
Mukti cleans her hands and is leaving when she sees Prem, well what she thinks Prem's going to look like.

Prem: Mukti... dont go stay with me.
Mukti: magar choti ma mujhe bula rahi hai.
Prem: Choti ma, ko toh choro, he walks up to her and holds her by the waist, tum mere sath raho...
Mukti looks down, she is too shy,
Mukti: Prem choro mujhe,
Prem: Nahi chorunga.
Mukti was about to run out of the kitchen when Prem holds her hand.
Mukti turns too look at him, but hes gone.
Mukti: oh my god.
"Abh tu ayegi ya Prem ke bare mein sochti reh jayegi"
Mukti quickly turns around and gets embarrassed.
Mukti: kya ap ne saab kuch dekha tha ya nahi?
Prerna: Saab kuch!
Mukti just runs out of the room in to her room.
Prerna: aree Mukti!
Prerna goes up to her room.
Prerna: mukti mujhe tujhe kuch batana hai.
Mukti: ap mujhe aur embarrass karengi right?
Prerna: No, today i have to tell you something i havent told you for years.
Mukti: Aur voh kya hai?
Prerna sat her self beside Mukti.
Prerna: Tumhe pata hai jab Prem tumhe mere paas le ke aya tha toh mein ne kya pucha tha...
*Flash*
Prem:Ma, This is my friend, the 1 i was talking about.
Prerna:WOW, kitne cute lagh thi hai.
Mukti:Mera naam Mukti hai.
Prerna got suspicious to this name.
Prerna:Last name?
Mukti:Deshmukh, paar mere mommy aur daddy dono is doniya seh dhoor chalege.
*Flash ends*
Mukti: Haan mujhe yaad hai paar kyun?
Prerna: Mein ne tumse voh isliye pucha tha kyun tumare maa baap mere aur Mr. Bajaj ke dost the aur jaab tum dono chote the, humne aur tumare maa baap ne decide kiya tha ke jaab tum aur Prem bare ho jao ge hum tum dono ki shaadi karwayenge,
Mukti: Toh ap mere maa baap ko pehle se janti the? Ap ne mujhe bataya kyun nahi, aur abh humare families door kyun ho gayi hain?
Prerna: We had a big fight we didnt want to have any relations.
Mukti: Toh phir mein ap ke saath kyun reh rahi hoon.
Prerna: Kyun ki jab mein tumse mili thi toh phir mujhe ehsaas hua tha ke mein ne bari ghalati ki thi tum aur Prem ko paanch saal door karke. Mien tum dono ko paas le akar tum dono ki shaadi karwana chati thi magar tumari baathon ko sun kar mujhe lag raha hai ke tum Prem se shaadi nahi karna chati abh, kyun ki mein ne tumhe saab bataya hai.
Mukti: Kya Prem saab kuch janta hai?
Prerna: Nahi paar mein usse bataungi jaab voh wapas ayega.
Prerna: Im sorry Mukti, she walks up towards the picture of Mukti in Mukti's room, i really am, i didnt want to upset you.
Mukti: Koi baath nahi.
Prerna: but you dont sound fine mukti are you ok.... she turns around to see no one there.

Prerna: Mukti! Mukti!
She runs down stairs to see the door just closed.
Prerna: Mukti!
She runs down the stairs and goes through the doors.
She then see the car just going out of the gates of the house.
Prerna quickly gets in her car and speeds up to Mukti.
Prerna tries calling Mukti but she couldnt.
Prerna looked at the time it was 12:00 they had to leave for the airport.
Prerna tried to catch up to Mukti but she couldnt as there was a truck in front of her. She honked and honked but the truck didnt move. Finally Prerna got past the truck and stop her car right in front of Mukti's. Mukti didnt take notice of that and right when she was about to hit Prerna's car she turned the steering wheel to the left and the whole car went flying into the river!
Prerna came running out of her car screaming: Mukti Mukti!!!!! but it was too late.
Prerna: Quickly called the police.
She even phone Mr. Bajaj telling him to pick up Prem and come straight to the accident area.

The Police got there very fast but when the inspector sent some people in the water the found everything in the car EXCEPT... Mukti.

Ill be ending it here today hope you liked it... please comment i love reading them!
Edited by Manoj&Tina#1fan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
wow! great update!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳
😕 mukti couldn't possible be dead
soooo cant wait for the next parttsss
thanx! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
hey great update!!! can't wait to read the next part!!!!

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