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Posted: 18 years ago
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soz couldn't continue today i was busy but right after school tomorrow i will right the next part ok

Luv ya
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks guys. Here's the next part.

Part 2

The Guy on the Bike appeared again. Mukti felt a gush of joy.
GonB(still on the Bike with Helmet and Bike Gloves): hey i told u this is private property.. why dont u just listen.
Mukti:sorry(she couldn't c his face because o f the helmet)i didn't noe but who r u ?
GonB:im not gonna say first tell me whats ur name and how did u come here?
Mukti: my name is Mukti Deshmukh i live on the other side of this forest.
GonB gets off his bike and walks to Mukti(well her horse)
GonB motions his hand to tell her to get off the Horse
Mukti gets down but she was a little smaller than him.
He takes off his helmet and Mukti was out of breath
Mukti:who r u?
GonB:Prem Bajaj
Mukti:Prem Bajaj?...Mr.Bajaj's son?....omg i never realised that i've actually met a...OMG
Prem put his hand over Mukti's mouth: shhhhhh dont scream ok
Mukti motioned her head as "yes"
Prem:i never reallty thought there were youngsters here i only thought there were oldies here well guess im wrong.
Mukti:i can show u alot of people who arn't oldies there thousands of people.
Prem:care to show me?
Mukti:well i have to get home and take a shower.
Prem:ill wait.
Mukti shows Prem the way to her house.

and im so sorry but ill have to stop here.

Luv ya

Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
great update....continue soon 😳 love it! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part3

Mukti quikly takes a shower and gets ready.
When she goes downstairs she notices that Prem wasn;t there but he went home to get the car.
5 mins later she heard a "Vrooooooom" and wentshe turned she saw a car speeding up into the driveway.
Muktis mouth went in "AWWW"
Prem got out of the car.
Mukti:U have a black mercedes convertable?

Prem:is it too much sorry im just to much in to driving
Mukti went closer to c the inside and it was manual.
Mukti:manual i can only drive automatic.
prem:ok can we go now.
Mukti: sure
Prem runs to the other side and opens the door for Mukti
then prem runs to the other side and jumps in and they leave to a restraunt.
Mukti:here i noe a bunch of people and in fact me and my friends always hang around here.
Prem: ok
They go in side and Mukti only c's the people who work there but she noes who they r too.
Mukti:hey Atul hey Surma
Atul&Surma:hey Mukti whatz new
Surma:whose the fello with u?
Mukti: he a (whispers)invader
Surma(whispers);bajajs?
Mukti:yes.
Prem:what?
Mukti:ok ill order
Prem: ok ill be back(he heads towards the washrooms)
Mukti orders coffee for both of them and just then muktis friends Devki enters.
Devki:Mukti u well not beleive this
Mukti:wat?
Devki: the Bajaj's r back there here for the summer!
Mukti:urmmm umm cool
Devki: i wonder how prerna Bajaj might luk after all these years they never came back and now she thinks of coming back....think of wat she did to ur mom Mukti...she soo mean i cant beleive she actually came back....Shes such a.....
Mukti knew y she stopped she must have seen Premand thought such a gorgeus fello is stnading here and why r'nt i luking.
Mukti turns around and c's Prem and he lukks pretty Mad.
Mukti:Devki that is Prem..Prem Bajaj.
Devki's face went pale.
Prems hand fisted up and he headed out the door
Mukti:Prem...
but before mukti finished her sentance Prem slammed the door closed.
Mukti:Devki u had to ditch this opertunity i had right.
Devki:sorry but i found this out and i didn't noe u were here with him...
Everyone at the place were staring at Muktiand Devki/.

and i got to go so ill try to update tom ok sorry about the delay ok byeee
Luv ya
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow umam...fantastic...great update continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part4
Mukti and Devki leave
Mukti keeps yelling at Devki because she ruinded her chance with a hot guy.

For a week Mukti had not seen Prem and she'd always been day dreaming about him.
Mukti kept think y am i thinking about him.

ok soz i thought of starting part 4 but i have to leave to my other school now im really soz so ill continue this part after i get back ok bye
Luv Ya
Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
plz continue soon

luv
tina 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz cont soon its great
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks guys
Rest of Part 4
Mukti was out the other day and found a couple of friends they said they were going to Canada for a few weeks and told her to invite a couple of friends along with them so as soon as Mukti got home she phoned Devki and Dilip. She told them about the Cannda thing as they were okay with it. But who Mukti really wanted to invite was Prem.
Mukti(thought):Is Prem really that upset he never came over to my house he noes where i live then y????

a week later.

Mukti woke up by hearing a car zoom up the drive way with loud Music. Mukti got up and looked out hte window and the person in the car turned the car off and got off.
Mukti:YUPEEEEE!...umm i mean he finally got the curage to come here... let me go c y has he come here.
Outside:
Mukti:Prem tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Prem:dekho Mukti...im sorry i shouldn't have left like that the other day....umm wanna make a plan wanna come with me for breakfast?
Mukti:im sorry but i have to go to Canada today with a couple of friends umm wanna come with us?
Prem:Canada....why not America?
Mukti:u wanna come or not?
Prem:sure but ill have to quikly order a seat for me online.
Mukti:ok well meet at the Airport ok....Bye!
Prem:bye.
Prem left and that evening everyone met at the Airport.

Canada:

Prem:holy cow this place is....different...Muk..
Before Prem could finish his sentance Mukti left cause she saw a place to eat..she was hungry..
Prem:GOD!(he runs after her)
finally when Prem caught up to Mukti:Mukti why did u leave me u noe i dont noe neone here.
Mukti:sorry Prem i was hungry after that long flight...
?:excuse me miss?
Mukti:yes...
?: u dropped ur bag...
Mukti:thank u.....mr...
?:just call me Tim my names Timothy Ferris.
Mukti:ok thanks Tim
Tim:ummm miss could i noe ur name?
Mukti:sorry my names Mukti
Tim:Muktay?
Mukti:no Mukti Deshmukh im from India.
Tim:i c...wanna be friends?
Mukti:sure...ok(thinks)complete stranger Mukti dont be friends....well y am i saying this i already said yes...darn it!
Tim:well i shuld go bye..my cars pulled up right here u guys need a lift.
Mukti:prem kya hum iske saath jayen ya nahi?
Prem:chalo chalte hain..
Mukti:Prem mein tumse kyon pooche rahi hoon....chalo well come.
Tim:great!

Tim drops them off at there hotel and asks for Mukti's cell number. Mukti gives it to him and he gives Mukti his.

At the Reception desk;
Mukti:WHAT!
Sir:yes we have that u only book 3 rooms.
Mukti:but there is 6 of us.
Sir:then pair up
Devki:im with Dilip.
Mukti's friend Janki:im with Manoj(hehehe 😆 )
Mukti:Yessssss mein aur Prem ek kamre main...
Mukti said that so fast......
Prem:what did u say?
Mukti:nothing me and u have to share a room okay?
Prem :i dont care because i only noe u so its okay with me.
Everyone went to there rooms and all the girls took the shower first..as all boys waited outside.(like in the room but like sitting on the bed.)
Dilip came to Mukti and Prem room.
Dilip:umm prem could u open the door?
Prem opened the door.
Prem:oh.....come inside...
Dilip: im Dilip
Prem:ok
Dilip:ummmm can i ask u a question?
Prem:sure
Dilip:do u like Mukti?
Prem:ummm i cant really say we just met.
Dilip:i noe that but do u or do u not?
Prem:ummm why should i tell u ur not like her brother.
Dilip:im just concerned.
Prem:umm ill tell u once i find out.
Dilip: what?
Prem: if i like her or not.
Dilip:ok well.....make sure....never mine bye
Prem:good night.
Dilip walked out and headed back to his room
mukti came out of the shower right as he left.
prem:hh guess wat ur friend Dilip just came about a few secs ago.
mukti:cool
Prem:were well u sleep?
Mukti:i dont care
Prem, as being a gentlemen,:u can have the bed ill sleep on the couch.
Mukti:r u sure...um u do noe i could.
Prem:noo its okay.
Prem left inside the shower.
And Mukti fell asleep.

Well im really tireed cause i hada really tough day soo i have to sleep sooner or ill sleep right here bye
Luv ya
Umam


Goodnight??
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
great as always 😳
plz continue soon 😊
Love
Aisha 😳

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