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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys i really wanted to write a fan fic about Prem and Mukti there was a story coming up in my mind and i wanted to write it soo here's in troduction:

Bajaj Family:

Prem Bajaj:He comes in a bit later but he's an only son and he's from America. His father has a heart attack so they go to India For A While
Mr.Bajaj:Father of Prem
Prerna: Mother of Prem

Deshmukh Family:

Mukti Deshmukh: only daughter. She has to Best Friends and tehre Twins. 1 boy and 1 girl. She meets a guy and falls in love.
Jeevan Deshmikh: Father of Mukti
Aamna Deshmukh: Mother of Mukti

Khan Family:

Dilip Khan: Muktis Best friend and he has a twin sis.

Devki Khan: Mukti's other best freind and is the twin of Dilip(not luk alike)

Mr and Mrs. Khan: Parents of Dilip and Devki

Prem is 19 years old
Mukti, Dilip and Devki r 18

ill post part 1 later right bow i have to go to school bye:)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow...that's cool....great update continue soon
and umam go to the topic that says manoj's permanent pati/bhaiya and read it 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks but cant update right now well as soon as i get home after school

Luv ya

Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Alright we are all set for a good story :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good start 👏 👏 thats sounds interesting continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok guys this is

Part 1

Mukti Dilip and Devkiare at Mukti's house.
Devki: soo Mukti... are you going to the dance?
Mukti:no... dont have ne one to go with.
Devki: well find someonewe should go...why dont u go with Dilip?
Dilip: no way were just friends and if we go to the dance together people will think were going out.
Mukti:okay guys im really tired im sleeping.
Devki: bu Muk..
Mukti:Good Night.

Next Day

Mukti: bye guys c ya tomorrow at school.
Dilip and Devki:BYE
After waving good bye Mukti went to the backyard.
She saw her Horse..Liala. Mukti takes her for a ride everyday so she went on her usual route.
She goes through this forest which is private property.
But hte people whose house is in front of the forest dont really live there.
Mukti(thinks): if the Bajaj family doesn't live here then why did they buy a HUGE househere.
So later she continues her ride. Later that day Mukti goes to meet Devki and Dilip.

Next day early in the morning Mukti does her chores and heads out to take Liala for her usual ride.
She keeps going on until she reaches the back of the Bajaj house( like the private property.)
She stops there for like 5 mins when she hears a dirt bike. Mukti turns Lialaaround with the reins.But she doesn't c ne body.
Mukti: HELLO! ne one there?
Mukti hears it again but closer. She hears the engine stop.
GuyontheBike:What r u doing on Private Property?
Mukti: umm( she luks at her watch She was late for her Graduation.)Ohmiigod im totally late..ummm...sorry but i have tog og bye.
She quikly rode off disappearing out of sight.
Guy:Gud now i hope she doesn't come back.

Mukti Graduated. She was sooo Happy.
Her friends also graduated.
She was finally going to go to University.
She came back home and went for a ride again hoping the Guy was still there

thats were ill end it and guesss who the guy was on the Bike i think u noe.
Luv ya
umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Lol.. could the guy on the bike be Prem!!! 😆 😆 😉 Haha! Continue soon!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Maybe Maybe Not u'll find out tomorrow lol ne

Luv ya Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi! you first part is just great 😃
plz continue soon 😊
Love
Aisha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow finaaly some1 got a pm fanfic started seriously i was bored a really nice one keep it up

luv
tina 😳

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