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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
😆 soory count reply 🤢 but caught i love ur FF plz cont soon...... 😳 👏 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
awwww...no don't stop....please do continue...i'm really anxious to kno wht happens next 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
OMG😲
ITS SOOO AWSOME!!!
plz continue soon as posibble 😊

Love
Aisha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
sorry guys haven't been on I-F for a while sooo sooooo sorry but here's my update!

Part 6

Mukti: Prem
Prem: yea?
Mukti: I have to say something
Prem: sure go ahead
Mukti: I….I…. I lo
Devki: MUKTI!
Mukti: Devki?
Devki: sorry agar tum dono ke beech kuch ho raha tha lekin humhe Shopping jana hain
Mukti: acha hum aa rahe hain
Devki: quickly na humhe dair ho rahi hain
Mukti: ok baba hum aa rahe hain
Devki: bye meet u down stairs
Prem: sooo what were u gonna say?
Mukti: ummm nothing.
Prem: ok cool
Mukti changes into a flurry mini skirt and a tank top. Prem wears baggy shorts and a Black shirt.
Downstairs:
Devki: c'mon hurry were late.
Mukti: ok(she runs to Devki and they take off to the car)
Mall in Canada "Polo Park"
Devki: ahhhhhhhh this is sooo cool!!!!
Mukti: god ur so stupid
Prem: so Mukti wat do u want to get?
Mukti: im not sure…maybe a shirt or 2
Dilip: do u have Canadain cash?
Mukti: of course I do….luk(she took out a bunch of cash from her purse.
They all go upstairs to the food court to eat. They eat New York Fries.
Later they go to Garage and luk for clothes for Mukti and Devki
They ended up buying for only Mukti, Prem and Devki, Dilip didn't like nething. Mukti: got a Flurry Skirt and a shirt, Prem bought a shirt that said "Go Hard or Go Home" and Devki bought a Shirt. Then they went to Sports Check and bought Shorts and a t-shirt for Dilip and Prem. Then they went to Sears and Mukti and Devki luked for perfume and handed all there bag to Dilip and Prem. Mukti and Devki sneakily laughed at them. They bought some perfume for girls and boys. Then they put all there bags in the car and headed upstairs to eat again. Mukti and Prem bought Subway and Devki and Dilip bought Pizza. Then they went to Star Bucks and bought Frappachino's for everyone. Then after some more shopping they went to the car.
Prem and Dilip started fighting over whom shud drive then they all picked Prem. Once they got on the roads Prem blasted the music on and the song was Party Like a Rock Star by Shop Boyz. Mukti and Devki didn't mind it but Dilip did. Dilip turned down the music and Prem turned it up and that kept going until they got to there Hotel. They all entered fighting.
Prem: Why do u always find everything annoying!
Dilip: I don't find everything annoying I find nething annoying that deals with u!
Prem: well fine im never talking to u again.
Dilip: me neither.
Prem & Dilip go to there own rooms.
Mukti and Devki Follow.
Prem goes into the bath room and slams the door.
Then Mukti goes on the bed and lies down and almost falls asleep when Prem comes out of the bathroom
Prem: Mukti!
Mukti: haan….
Prem: wat if two people were jut friends and the guy started to like the girl?
Mukti: umm I don't noe who r u talking about ?
Prem: someone just tell me wat would be the answer?
Mukti: well if the guys likes the girl and the girls likes the guy they shud go out…. But if ur talking about love then I don't noe.
Prem: oh well do u ?
Mukti: do I wat?
Prem: like ne one?
Mukti: yes im actually feeling like I love them too.
Prem: oh…. Welll tell me if everything works out.
Mukti: Prem do u noe whom Im talking about…
Prem: wat do u mean?
Mukti: do u noe whom I like or might actually love…
Prem: noo and I don't plan on noeing either.
Mukti: okokokok don't be too upset.
Prem: im not upset.
Mukti: by the tone of ur voice it sure sounds like it.
Prem: well im not! Ok bye!
Mukti: were r u gonna go this is ur bedroom
Prem: oh yea! Well GOOD NIGHT!
He goes on the couch and turns the other way.
Mukti goes to the bathroom and brushes her teeth and comes out and c's Prem sleeping peacefully . She smiles and goes to bed.
During The Night:
Mukti was tossing and turning about in her dreams she hadn't realized she fell off the bed and knocked over a couple of things. Prem woke up to the sound of this. He goes to Mukti
Prem: Mukti r u okay…..
Mukti: pizzazz stay away from me! Help…prem….
Prem: yes Mukti im here.
Mukti grabs his arm then all of a sudden wakes up. Mukti luks at Prem breathing hard and gets up and hugs him very tight.
Mukti: Prem….don't ever leave me again…I love you!
Prem: umm wat???
Then Mukti all of a sudden falls asleep.
Prem picks Mukti up and puts her on her bed and then was about to leave when Mukti grabs his hand he turns around.
Mukti: plzzz don't leave me
Prem: im not leaving im right in this room.
Mukti: plzzz turn the light on im very scared right now ….plzzz
Prem: ok hold on
Prem goes and turns the light on and goes back to Mukti she was asleep. Prem was sooo sleepy when he walked his foot tripped and he fell on the bed right next to Mukti.

That's all for now Good Night

Luv ya Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
awww tahts cuteee i love it so far!!!!!!! plz continue soon i wonder what happens next cant wait! 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
That was just sooooo good! 😳 😳 😳 ( as well as sweet!)


plz continue soon!!! 👏 👏 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
thanks i well continue oncei get the chance really busy soon-EXAMS 🤢 🤢 - so yea but until after 23 but i might get some time before too soo ill try ok

Luv ya Umam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
23 🤢 its sooo long 😭
but yhea yhea 😭

anyways LOVED you ff
MIND BLOWING as always 😊

Love
Aisha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
that was wonderfull cute sweet and funny

luv
tina

ps cont soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part7

Next Morning

The sun came through the window. It landed on the two in the bed cuddled up in each others arms.
Mukti shifted a little and tried to toss and turn but couldn't so she just lay there. Prem's eyes opened. He noticed Mukti. Prem thought it was an illusion and he went back to sleep. Later like @ 10 pm Mukti woke up. She noticed Prem and screamed. Prem jumped out of the bed.
Mukti: what r u doing???? Here in my bed???? OMG!!!
Prem: woah wat happened?
Mukti: get off….get off!!!!
Prem gets off the bed.
Mukti: how dare u why'd u come on my bed?? And sleep!!!?
Prem: I tripped and was tired so I fell asleep I didn't think I was right next to u!
Mukti: soo ewwww u actually slept in my bed!!!
Prem: sorryyyyyyy im sooo sorry!
Mukti: if u don't say nething I wont say nething then im ok!
Prem: fine!

Downstairs:

Devki: Mukti!!!!
Mukti: Devki?
Devki: Mukti don't u noe what today is???
Mukti: no… why do u all have suitcases?
Devki: ummmm our plane is leaving in an hour soo pake ur things too were going backt to India .
Mukti: ohh today is wen all the fun ends….ok ill be back.
Mukti and Prem go back upstairs.
Prem: Mukti do u noe wat u said to me last night.
Mukti: no….wat did I say?
Prem: remember yesterday when I asked u about the like and love thing…
Mukti: yes..
Prem: and u told me that u like someone yet think u love him…
Mukti: yes…
Prem: last night u said something tat told me who u love…
Mukti(thinks):did I actually tell him?
Prem: u said that u….love….me.
Mukti: no I….don't.
Prem: then who do u mean by the "I love you"?
Mukti: maybe I like u but I love someone else…
Prem: ok

The room:

Prem and Mukti start packing but its all quiet.
Prem and Mukti finish.
Mukti heads to the bathroom but Prem goes behind her and grabs her hand, grabs her hand, and turns her around.
Prem: u noe when I said that line yesterday….that wat if…
Mukti: yea…
Prem: im in love with u
Mukti: www…..aaaa wat?
Prem: yes…..I love you.
Mukti: Prem….I love u too.
Prem: really!!! omg…(he hugs her)
Mukti and Prem finish upstairs and then go downstairs.

2 years later

Prem and Mukti's Wedding

Sneha: PREM!!!!! PREM KAHAN HO TUM?
Prem: mein tayar ho raha hoon
Sneha: jaldi karo dulhan aa rahi hain
Prem: wat omg ill be there in a min…
Sneha: ok
Prem comes down the stairs all dressed up.
Sneha: wow bohot ache lag rahe ho.
Prem: voh toh hoon…Mein Duhla ke tarah toh dekh ta hoon na
Sneha: haan baba
Prem: omg hide me
Sneha: kyon
Prem: Mukti
Sneha: oh vaise aaj raat ke baad tum uske hi hoge tumhe pata hain
Prem: haha very funny!
Later Prem and Mukti get married, Prem puts the sindoor and mangalsutra around her neck and they do the saath phere.

The next day

Mukti wakes up and realizes she was in Prem's arms
Mukti: Prem
Prem: haan
Mutki: uthe ve ho?
Prem: haan
Mukti: hmmm
She falls asleep, Prem also falls asleep.
Prem wakes up and he smiles to c Mukti sitting in front of the mirror getting her mangalutura , she doesn't notice Prem get up and grab the sindoor box. Then Prem puts it in her mang
Mukti gets up and hugs Prem
Prerna: PREM! MUKTI!
Mukti: choti maa…ok tum tayar ho aur mein choti maa ke paas jati hoon.
Prem: nope tum idhar he raho gi..
Mukti: choti maa intezaar kar rahi hain
Prem: toh….?
Mukti goes to leave but Prem grabs her hand.
Mukti: Prem….
Prem: Mukti ur soo boring… fine jao maine tumhara haath chod diya .
Mukti runs out to Prerna

Kitchen:

Prerna: Mukti beta… tum itne der kyon…
Mukti: ummm… voh kya hain na…P
Prem: Maa….
Prerna: Prem…ao hum natshta tayar karte hain…
Prem: nahi mein tayar nahi hoon…office jana hain…
Prerna: nahi aaj office nahi jaa rahe ho tumhari abhi toh shaadi hui hain…
Prem: meri shaadi hui hain aur mujhe koi fark nahi parta ke mein ghar pe rahoon ya office jaoon.
Mukti: lekin mujhe fark parta hain.
Prem: ok agar tumhe fark parta hain toh mein ghar pe rehta hoon.
Mukti and Prerna smile.

The end of Part 7

luv ya Umam
Edited by Umam_Paracha_13 - 18 years ago

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