PM ke Prem Kahanni prt4pg.7- Mukti..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Is it ok if i start a fan fic called Prem aur Mukti ke Prem Kahanni, if u guy do want me to then i wont...

but i was thinking to start it when Debo tells Mukti she loves Prem so if u guys are ok if i write a fanfinc then do tell and i will start after 5 people tell me, i should.

Edited by Manoj&Tina#1fan - 17 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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yah go ahead and start ill be glad too hear it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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pls go aheah and write the fic....we all love prem and mukti.....and miss tina alot on the show.....the show is really boring without her.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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go ahead sis thats a great idea!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Go Ahead.... I Luv FanFicz....Espically Prem Mukti Ones!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok so here is the first part

Part 1

Mukti is stunned to hear this from Debo.
Mukti:umm i will be right back...
Debo:ok Mukti leaves and debo smiles and says:My plan is working.hehehehe

Mukti is walking down the hall weeping while Prem is coming from the other end.

Prem:mukti?
Mukti looks up and see Prem looking at her so she quickly goes out of the office building.

Prem follows.

we see mukti walking to the door.while prem is walking as fast as he can to catch up to her.
Mukti is out of the building and prem gets to the door.
Mukti is waiting for cars to stop when prem is behind her.

Prem:Mukti where are u going?What happened?
Mukti:i cant tell u sorry.
Mukti is walking acroos the street cause she doesnt want to be close to Prem. She isnt looking where she is going and BOOM!

A car hits her and she falls in the water(like under the bridge there is water, u noe what i mean dont u)

Prem:MUKTI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
All cars stop and Prem runs to the rail(what keeps the cars from going in to the water)Prem sees Muktis body SPLASH into the water.
Prem:oh My God now what Mother india, what am i going to tell her, wait i should call the police first.So he calls

Debo is watching this from inside the building and smiles to herself
Police come and the go down to the hill beside the sea.

Prem:did u find her?
Police:sorry sir we cant, we beleive she is dead because noone can stay alive from this much of a length.
Prem:U CANT SAY THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!MOTHER INDIA, SHE WILL GET MAD AND SHE WILL BLAME ME, MUKTI CANT DIE SHE CANT!!!!
Police:Please calm down sir.
Prem: WHY! WHY SHOULD I CALM DOWN WHEN I LOVE HER(HER echos)
Police:we are very sorry.and the police leave.

Prem sits on the ground crying.

thats where im ending it is it ok?Should i continue? dont worry Muktis going nowhere she will be back.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I hope Mukti survived

not as in Ektas story happened

plz continue 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, good stuff hun! please do continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 stuff.. plz cont soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was a great part! 👏 i hope mukti is ok. cont. soon plzzzz.... 😃
Edited by spring92 - 18 years ago

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