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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
please continue ur ff. we are waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
oi, when u continuing this one huh?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
hullo? where r u @? when u continuing this ff of urs?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
sorry guys ill update as soon as possible sorry once again
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

Prem: Mein usse pyaar kartha hoon!
Prerna: Arre Prem, koi bat nahi ro math, hum usse zaroor dundenge! dont worry hum zarror dundenge!

The next morning.

Prem was still sleeping...

Downstairs the door bell rang.

Prerna:Mein dekh thi hoon.
She opens the door to see the police.
Prerna: inspector ap?
Inspector: Haan, kaal ek body mili hai.
Prerna: Kiski body????
Inspector: hume nahi pata lekin ap mein seh ek ko hare saath jail jana parega thake ap hum bata sake ke voh Miss. Mukti hki body hai a nahi
Prerna: mein chal thi hoon....
"No Mein jauga"
They look back to see Prem.
Prem: Mujhe jana hoga, mein neh uska dil dukaya abh mein jake dekhta hoon,
Prerna: Acha tu ja.
Mr.Bajaj: Inspector, Prem chale ga ap ke sath!

So they go to the Police Station

Insp.:Yeh hai voh body jo hume mili thi.
Prem takes off the blanket off the ody to see none other than Mukti's face. Prem falls to the ground.
Insp.: Ap Theek toh hai na, Mr. Prem.
Prem: Yeh... yeh... yeh meri Mukti hai.
Insp.: ok abh hum formalities puri karenge take ap usse hospital le ja ke death certificate le sake....
Prem:Aih! Mukti nahi mari hai!! Meri mukti nahi mar sakthi!!!!
Insp.: Sorry, Mr. Prem par shes not breathing.
Prem(really angery): mujhe aur mukti ko akela chor do! please mein ap seh mer bani ke sath poochta hoon, please jao!
Inspector leaves.
Prem: Mukti... Mukti please!!! please utho, mein janta hoon ke mien ne tumare saath bohut bura kiya tha par please!! mjhe chor ke maath jao plesse, Mukti open your eyes!!!he grabs her hand, kisses it, but keeps it to his lips. his tears are dripping like a water fall. he soon gives up hope, he hus her,
Prem: Mukti!!!!!!!!! utho please!
Hes screaming so loud the inspector comes running in, along with a few other workers.
Inspector: hey, usse jake le aao yahan.
the hwaladar go and try making him let go of Mukti, but prem, he would listen he kept on holding on to mukti.
Prem: MUKTI! UTHO! MUJHE CHOR KE MATH JAO!
Prem: chor mujhe mujhe akele rehne do mukti ke saath, mujhe marna hai!!!! they get prem to let go of Mukti.
Prem: ya kar rahe ho tm log mujhe marna hai! Mukti! Mukti!
they start pulling prem.
Insp.:Yeh pagal hogeya hai, isse pagal khane le jao.
Mukti starts waking up...: prem....prem...prem....
Prem: Choro mujhe!
Mukti: PREM!!! she gets up so quick, even faster then the tazmainian devil.
They all stop what they're doing and look at Mukti, she looks soo scared.
Prem: Mukti!he runs to her, and pulls her into a hug.
Prem: Mujhe pata tha ke tum mujhe nahi choro gi, na? thank you Mukti, mein janta tha ke tum zaroor aao gi wapas!Mein tum seh bohut pyaar karthi hoon, mein janta tha ke mera pyaar tumhe wapas liyega
Mukti: ap kaun hain?
Prem(confused): Kya baat kar rahi ho tum?
Mukti: Ap... ap...she faints.
Prem picks her up into his arms, and takes her to the hospital.

Hospital.

Doctor: Ap inke pati hain kya?
Prem(in no rush): Haan mein hoon iske pati. kya hua Mukti ko?
Doc: Im sorry but she is in the state of Fugue...
Prem: V..v..vo..Voh k.kya hai?
Doc: State of Fugue when someone for gets their identity along with the memories, personality and other this of their life.
Prem got shocked like a stone.
Doc: Im sorry Mr. Prem but we tried our best. Other then this she could've gone into coma or even died.
Prem fell to the ground
Doc: Agar ap chahein toh ap un se mil sakte hai,
Prem(thinks) Mujhe himat chahiye, mujhe mother india ko batana parega.
Prem: Kya mein ap ka phone use kar sakta hoon?
Doc: ofcourse, come with me.
so Prem calls home and tells them to come immediately
He goes to Mukti's room.
Mukti: Finally koi aya hai, kya ap mujhe bata sakthe hain mere bare mein???
Prem just looks at her.
Mukti: please ap kuch bata toh do, mera naam kya hai please help me.
Prem: Mu..Mukt...Mukti..
Mukti: Mera naam Mukti hai? Please ap mujhe sahi seh bata diye please????
Prem: Tumara naam Mukti hai...
Mukti: Aur ap kaun? mein ap ko janthi nahi... ap hospital mein kaam kar they nhain kya?
Prem: Nahi...
Mukti: Toh phir ap kaun hai?
Prem: Mein... Mujhe tum mili ho... min drive kar raha tha aur phir mujhe mil gaye, tum bohut buri state mein thi is liye mein tumhe hospital leke aya tha.
the doctor comes in.

What is the doctor gonna say???
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
hey great update 😊 ...i luved it 😳 please continue soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
great update. finally continued this ff u did. wonder what the doc will say. continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Part 4

Doc: Mrs. (as he thinks) Mukti, abh ap ki tabiuyat kaisi hai?
Mukti: Theek Hai, lekin mujhe kuch ajeeb sa feel ho raha hai.
Doc: Koi baath nahi, pregnancy ke mahino mein aisa hi hota hai.
Mukti: Kya?
Doc: Ji, ap ma bane wali hai.
Prem gets shocked, so does Mukti
Mukti: Meri shaadi ho chuki hai?
Doc: Ap ko Mr.Prem ne nahi bataya? Ji Ap Ki Shaadi ho chuki hai, aur yeh apke bache ka baap hai.
Mukti smiles,
Doc: Just relax Mrs. Mukti, pehla mahina hai!
Prem: Doctor kya mein ap se kuch baa tar sakta hoon?
Doc: Kya baat hai Mr. Prem?
Prem: bahar ja ke.
They go out side.
Prem: Kya ap mera blood test karwa sakte hai?
Doc: Kyun?
Prem tells him some fake story.
Doc: Toh yeh bat hai, ok chalo mein tumara blood test karwa dunga, chalo mere office mein.
So the doctor takes his blood and tells him to come tomorrow and pick up the reports.
Prem: Thank you doctor.
Prem heads out to see Prerna with the whole family
Prem: Mother India ap?
Prerna: Haan, tu ne hi phone kiya tha, kya hua Mkti ko?
Prem: Voh, voh uski, yaadash…. Chaliy gayi, aur…
Everyone is shocked.
Jevan: Aur? Kya hua meri beti ko batao!
Prem: voh, vo, voh ma bane wali hai…
Everyones faces turn pale form hearing what he had just said.
Jevan: Meri beti… he runs inside to see Mukti reading a babies catalogue.
Mukti looks up.
Mukti: Ap Kaun?
Jevan: Mukti he runs to her and hugs her.
Mukti: Ap Kaun hain? She pushes him back, aur mere pati kahan hai?
Jevan: Pati?
Mukti: Haan, Prem, voh kidar hain?
Jevan: Mukti beta, mein tera baba hoon.
Mukti is shocked: Baba?... she gets blurry flashbacks of her and her baba together.
Jevan: Mukti???
Mukti: Baba?
Jevan looks at her.
Jevan: Haan, mein tera baba hoon, Mukti...
Mukti: Baba... mere pati kidar hein?
Jevan: Tere pati?
Mukti: Haan, Prem, ap ko yad nahi? Mujhe laga ke meri yaadash chali gayi hain ap ki nahi
Jevan: Par teri shaadi toh...
Prem: Mukti?
Prem motions Jevan to go outside as he wants to tell everyone something.
Prem: Hum abhi aaye.

Hope you guys liked my update ill try updating more faster now! Please comment I love comments!

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