kmph updated pg65....lovers apart! - Page 30

haha..i luved it! plz cont soon!!! 😃

😆 that last part was sooo funny! i can NOT imagine prerna saying that! lol she would sound like such a geek. awsome part, im sooo glad to see that prem is getting jealous, just hope the plan doesnt back fire on mukti! sanya looks like your exams are done now, does that mean you will be updating regularly? i hope so! cuz i just loooooove all 3 of your fanfics! and what do you mean the story is turning to crap????!!!! 😡 dont say that yaar, i think its still rocking! and i dont have to be psychic to tell you your story is gonna turn out great no matter what! because your a great writter! soooo please keep up the good work 😊

awesome part n also very funny!continue sn!!

dat was great 👏 could totally imagine prem gettin jealous 😳 😆 n da last bit with prerna was hilarious 😆 still can't believe she said dat 😕 😆 lukin 4ward 2 sum more scenes with prem gettin jealous 😆 boy do mukti/anju no how 2 drive a guy crazy 😆 update soon 😉

dat waz gud!! plz cont soon!!!!!!

awww poor prem lol
that was really good plz conrinue soon
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awesum fanfic! gr8 job!! 😛
do cont soon 😉

Originally posted by: Robin_M

😆 that last part was sooo funny! i can NOT imagine prerna saying that! lol she would sound like such a geek. awsome part, im sooo glad to see that prem is getting jealous, just hope the plan doesnt back fire on mukti! sanya looks like your exams are done now, does that mean you will be updating regularly? i hope so! cuz i just loooooove all 3 of your fanfics! and what do you mean the story is turning to crap????!!!! 😡 dont say that yaar, i think its still rocking! and i dont have to be psychic to tell you your story is gonna turn out great no matter what! because your a great writter! soooo please keep up the good work 😊

no i don't think the plan is going to back fire on mukti and yes i will be updating or trying to update regularly and i don't mean my story iss turning crap i mena kzk is it is getting really boring well it got boring the minute mukti died that was so sad hopefully deviki would turn out to be mukti but the chances r very less!

Originally posted by: mandy07

dat was great 👏 could totally imagine prem gettin jealous 😳 😆 n da last bit with prerna was hilarious 😆 still can't believe she said dat 😕 😆 lukin 4ward 2 sum more scenes with prem gettin jealous 😆 boy do mukti/anju no how 2 drive a guy crazy 😆 update soon 😉

same here i mean i am use to saying that so i guess the time i was typing it i was either very sleepy or just not paying attention to what i am writing becuase i mean prena and omg!😆 anywyas i know anju and mukti do no howe to drive guys crazy but hey it all runs in the blood!😆

Mukti- hi kasak
Kasak- hi mukti
Mukti- whats wrong why r so upset
Anju- did u forget mukti dev is not in town
Mukti- oh yeah
Kasak- and he is coming back next week
Mukti- oh I am sorry but cheer up at least u r getting to talk 2 him
Kasak – true
Anju- ok kasak I just needed your notes
Mukti- there u go again man u both r schoolaholics
Kasak- is that even a word
Anju- if mukti said it then no because she is use to making up words
Kasak- great so is prem
Anu- man both of u r so similar but still u fight
Mukti- shut up ok I ma not staying in this room where two people just know how to talk about school I am going to talk to someone else
Kasak- prem
Mukti- uhh!
Mukti was standing by the stairs thinking of how prem and she met and all the cute moments together
Prem- hello
Mukti- huh...hi
Prem- where r u lost
Mukti- no where anyways prem I wanted to talk 2 u
Prem- sure want to go out for coffee
Mukti- r u asking me out on a date
Prem- maybe
Mukti- what I my boyfriend finds out
Prem- he will be really glad he would say jan chute!
Mukti- u……..
Prem- ok k I was kidding so r u coming
Mukti- yep lets go
Coffee house
Mukti- prem I wanted to first of all say sorry
Prem- why?
Mukti- because I broke your trust u thought of me as a person who doesn't care about what people say but I don't know why that rumor affected me so much
Prem- its ok I understand at first I was really mad at u because I thought I lost a wonderful friend
Mukti- don't worry no noe can ever break our friendship
Prem "do u think of our relation is just based on friendship"
Mukti "do u think our relation is just of friends nothing else?"
Prem- ok well lets go back home
Mukti- can u do me a favor drop me home because I told anju to take the car since she wanted to go home
Prem- k
Prem dropped mukti home
Mukti- thanks
Prem- u r welcome
Home
Anju- so what happened?
Mukti- nothing I just told him sorry for being mad at him for no reason
Anju- that's it
Mukti- yep
Anju- god u both r boring
Mukti- what did u want me to tell him "sweetheart I missed u I luv u do u luv me"
And he would say "I missed u to honey u r the best"
Anju started laughing
Mukti- don't laugh because those r your expectations
Anju- no I meant like u should have tried to find out if he luvs u or not
Mukti- I think so I mean the way he said I thought I lost a wonderful friend was so cute that made me think he has feelings for me
Anju- he said that
Mukti- yep
Anju- ok now I am 75% sure he luvs u
Mukti- I want it to be 100%
Anju- it soon will be ok now since plan b is completed plan c
Mukti- yes
Next day
In car
Mukti was remembering what anju said
Anju- mukti whenever u talk to prem just talk about sameer nothing else make sure u make him so jealous that he will confess to u I think this plan will work and prem will confess his luv for u
Mukti- but how do u know 4 sure he luvs me
Anju- we think he does but not sue so if nothing happens today then maybe he doesn't luv u or maybe he still didn't figure out he luvs u
Mukti- I don't know what I am going to do if he doesn't luv me
Anju- u will have to forget him
Anju- then my first luv will be incomplete
Mukti reached college
Mukti was wearing a white skirt and a pink blouse long earrings and high heels
Kasak- hi mukti
Mukti- hi kasak
Kasak- where is anjali
Mukti- she was sick so she could not make it
Kasak- oh ok lets go to class
Mukti- sure
After school mukti was walking to her car when she heard something she went to the place which was making noise and she was shocked!
It was prem with kripa
Prem- kripa u know I have never seen anyone more prettier than u
Kripa- oh really how many girls have u said that 2
Prem- a lot
Kripa- u…
Prem- I am kidding
Kripa- do u like me
Prem- what do u think
Kripa- I don't know
Prem- do u want to hear the truth
Kripa- yes
Prem- I like u
Kripa- so am I officially your girlfriend
Prem- yep
Mukti was heart broken her friend kripa was going out with prem she couldn't believe it she left from there
Home mukti entered her mansion and quickly ran upstairs to her room she jumped on her bed and started crying
Mukti cried a lot
The song suna suna was playing:
Soona soona lamha lamha
Meri rahein tanha tanha
Aakar mujhe tum tham lo
Manzil teri dekhe rasta
Mud ke zara ab dekh lo
Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi to ho
Bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
O bapanah pyaar hai aaja
tera intezaar hai aaja
Soona soona lamha lamha
Meri rahein tanha tanha


Bichhde bhi ham jo kabhi raston main
To sang sang rahungi sada
Kadmon ki aawaaz sun ke chalungi
Tumhe dhoond loongi sada
Bhooli mohabbat ki yeh khushbuye hain
Hawaon main phaili hui
Chhu kar mujhe aaj mahsoon kar lo
vo yadein meri unchhui
Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi to ho
Bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
O bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
Soona soona lamha lamha
Meri rahein tanha tanha

Aaa... Aaa...
Vadon ke dhagon main hum tum bandhe hain
Zara dor tum tham lo
Bahon main aise pighal jane do mujhko
Aise mera naam lo
Main vo shama hoon jo roshan tumhe karke
khud to pighal jaungi
Subah ka sooraj tumhare liye hai
Main hoon raat dhal jaungi
Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi to ho
Bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
O bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
Soona soona lamha lamha
Meri rahein tanha tanha
Mud ke zara ab dekh lo
Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi to ho
Bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
O bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
Soona soona lamha lamha
Meri rahein tanha tanha

Anju came inside
Mukti wiped her tears
Anju- mukti whats wrong I heard u came back but why didn't u come see me
Mukti- wo…actually…I….was really sleepy…that's…why
Anju- oh so what happened
Mukti- I don't feel good can we talk later
Anju- yeah what happened?
Mukti- nothing just a headache
Anju- k tell me if u need anything
Mukti- k
Mukti- can u close the door on your way out
Anju- k
Mukti- bye
Mukti still cried a lot
Prem was in his room and the song suna suna was playing again
Bichhde bhi ham jo kabhi raston main
To sang sang rahungi sada
Kadmon ki aawaaz sun ke chalungi
Tumhe dhoond loongi sada
Bhooli mohabbat ki yeh khushbuye hain
Hawaon main phaili hui
Chhu kar mujhe aaj mahsoon kar lo
vo yadein meri unchhui
Aisa milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi to ho
Bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
O bapanah pyaar hai aaja
Tera intezaar hai aaja
Soona soona lamha lamha
Meri rahein tanha tanha
The next day
Anju- mukti open the door
No reply
Anju- mukti open the door
Mukti opened the door
Mukti- sorry actually I don't feel good
Anju- so u r not coming to college
Mukti- yeah I am not coming
Anju- k well I am also staying home then
Mukti- no I don't want u to miss it because of me u go I will be fine
Anju- sure
Mukti- 100%
Mukti was in her room thinking about her good moments with prem
College
Kasak- hi anjali
Anju- hi
Kasak- where is mukti
Anju- mukti is sick
Prem- oh really
Anju- yeah
Prem- lucky her no college for a day
Anju "if only u knew how desperate she must be to come and see u"
Home
Mukti- hi kavya
Kavya- hey mukti
Mukti- how r u?
Kavya- fine how come you aren't in college?
Mukti- I am sick
Kavya- what! Did u show the doctor what did he say?
Mukti- relax I just have a bad headache
Kavya- oh
Mukti- anyways where is angad I am very mad at him for not calling me
Kavya- he is right here
Angad- hi mukti
Mukti- why the hell didn't u call me?
Angad- when
Mukti- when all those media people were spreading rumors
Angad- oh really were they really rumors
Mukti- of course they were
Angad- kavya I will be back
Kavya- k
Angad went to his room and closed the door
Angad- mukti come on u can tell me
Mukti- well I do like him a little
Angad- a little
Mukti- ok fine I luv him!
Mukti- oops
Angad- caught u
Mukti- well I don't think he luvs me
Angad- why
Mukti- because he is going out with someone else
Angad- ok let me guess he is a big time flirt
Mukti- yes
Angad- wow what a choice
Mukti- ok well don't tell anyone
Angad- u can trust me
Mukti- r u sure
Angad- yes
Mukti- bye
Angad- bye
Mukti- I guess I should relax for a day and have fun
Sameer called her
Mukti- hello
Sameer- hey mukti heard u r sick
Mukti- yeah headache
Sameer- oh so sorry I was thinking of going to the disc
Mukti- yea…
Sameer- even prem was going to come with kripa
Mukti- oh really well I do feel ok so want to go
Sameer- k pick u up at 9
Mukti- k bye!
Mukti decided what she was going to wear a brown sleeveless dress
Mukti wears high heels and light make up and long brown earrings
Its 9 and sameer picks mukti up
Mukti sits in the car
On the way
Sameer- u look pretty
Mukti- thank u
Sameer- why didn't anjali come
Mukti- because she didn't feel like going alone plus she didn't want to spoil our plans because if she came we would not get time alone
Sameer- how sweet
Mukti thinks "how can I tell u duffer that she wants me to make prem jealous when I know he is not going to get jealous because he luvs kripa"
She also thinks "plus I am the one who is going to get jealous"
Disc
Sameer and mukti entered the disc
Prem- hi sameer hi mukti
Mukti- hi
Kripa –hi mukti
Mukti- hey
Sameer- want to dance
Mukti- sure
Mukti and sameer r dancing and prem is getting jealous
Prem- want to dance kripa
Kripa- sure
Prem and kripa were dancing and mukti and sameer were dancing
Prem was getting really jealous and so was mukti
Then the song finished
Mukti- lets get a drink I am hot
Then a slow song came on
And sameer pulled mukti towards him and started dancing closely with her
Prem was getting jealous of seeing mukti dance with sameer so closely and was imagining him instead of sameer with mukti and mukti was also thinking of sameer as prem and was dancing with him
They finished dancing and enjoyed for a while and left
Outside
Sameer- prem I have to go somewhere so will u drop mukti home
Prem- sure where r u going
Sameer- oh I have to pick my friend up from the airport
Prem- k
Mukti was sitting in the back and kripa and prem were sitting in the front they were laughing and talking and making mukti jealous!
Prem dropped kripa off she hugged him
Mukti got really jealous now
Prem- ok mukti kripa left will u come in the front now
Mukti- why
Prem- because I don't want to look like a driver
Mukti- u do already
Prem- what!
Mukti- what at least i said the truth
Prem- so I look like a driver 2 u?
Mukti sat in the front
Mukti- u got your answer
Prem started driving and he was smiling because mukti said that
Mukti- where r u going
Prem- it's a short cut
Mukti- we better not get lost
Prem- don't worry we won't
They were lost
Mukti- I told u not to get lost
Prem- well sorry I was trying to save time
Mukti- and r we
Prem stayed quite
Mukti- now what r we suppose to do
Prem- lets try to find a way
Mukti- umm…if u forgot the car also broke
Prem- oh yeah
Mukti- god!
Prem- k I will call moth….
Mukti- what no network
Prem- yes!
Mukti- k how about we walk and try to find a mechanic
Prem- k
They were walking when it started to rain
Mukti- oh snap
Prem- there is a cottage there lets go
Mukti nods
They go inside the cottage it's like a hut prem lights a fire
Mukti sits in front of it and warms her self she is drying her hair the water splashes on prem's face
Mukti- I want to go home
Prem- well we r stuck
Mukti- well I am sleepy
Prem- then go to sleep
Mukti- excuse me
Prem- what?
Mukti- nothing I am cold
Prem takes out beer from his pocket
Prem- want some
Mukti- no!
Prem- it helps!
Mukti- prem u r such a duffer didn't anyone teach u don't ever ask a girl if she would like a drink
Prem- that goes to ideal India woman I don't think u r or r u?
Mukti- no I am not!
Prem- oh really then here
He handed her the beer
Mukti stared at the beer with a worried face
Prem had a huge grin on his face
Mukti drank the whole think
After a while
Mukti- prem!
Prem- huh…what
Mukti- u r so stupid
Prem- what!
Mukti- yes I said u r stupid
Prem- what the hell did I do to u?
Mukti- u stole my heart!
Prem was shocked
Mukti- u stole my heart then u date kripa
Prem thinks "oh so she is jealous"
Mukti- and I am jealous because I luv u!
Prem was really shocked now
Mukti- yes I luv u
Mukti was getting dizzy she was about to fall when prem caught her
Prem put mukti down and someone was taking pictures while then
Next day
Mukti woke up with a hang over her head was hurting
Prem- mukti the car is here
Mukti- k
In the car
There was a very weird silence between them mukti was trying to remember if she said something to him after she was drunk then prem broke the silence
Prem- u know u said so many things yesterday night when u were drunk
Mukti got scared she was thinking did I say something bad?
Prem saw that mukti was scared so he said
Prem- nothing serious just stupid things like u called me an idiot
Mukti- wow I never knew that when u r drunk u tell the truth
Prem- u also said u r the hottest person in college
Mukti- what? I did?
Prem- nah u just said stupid things to me
Mukti- oh
Prem- there your house is here
Mukti- thank u for making me reach home I thought I would come home after 3 years
Prem- very funny
Mukti- bye
Prem- bye
Prem reached home he saw that mukti forgot her books in his car and one of them was her diary which said
"Do not touch"
Prem took it inside
Prem's room
Prem- should I read it
Prem thought and then finally he opened the dairy
On the first page was information about her and then the next page
Day 1
Today is my first day in India and I met this very stupid guy I mean just because I thought he was my driver he got mad
Prem flipped some more pages
Day 1 in college
I saw the same guy again god he is so mean he made me go around the whole college but I also met a nice person kasak
He flipped some more pages
Today was the dance when I was dancing with dev kasak was getting so jealous I wonder if I would ever get jealous if I was in luv but I doubt it
He flipped some more pages
Today I got stuck with prem in the elevator and then the lights went off then I saw a cockroach I got so scared I hugged prem but I felt so good when I hugged him I felt safe in his arms I don't know but there was a weird feeling inside me
He flipped some more pages
When we came back mom and dad anju and kavya were here because of a misunderstanding the media created but I wonder why the hell would the media follow me around I think a specific person is doing this
He flipped some more pages
Today prem wanted to know why I was behaving so weirdly but I also didn't know then I thought about it but still couldn't figure out
Then the next day I found out I was in luv with "prem" I mean I never thought I would be in luv at least not with prem but they do say luv is blind but seriously I am very happy that I luv prem because he is cute, hot, and really nice I luv him a lot but I am also scared that maybe he might not luv me
He flipped some more pages
Today anju taught me how to find out if a guy likes u she told me to follow the plan first make him jealous I did by saying that I want to know sameer better than I on purpose went out with his brother than I took sameers cell phone and text myself because I knew that prem would get really jealous but then I saw him with kripa saying he likes her I was heartbroken I mean I somewhere inside me thought he loved me but…..now we were going to the disc tonight anju told me to try to make prem jealous but how could I tell her that I am the one who is going to be jealous seeing him with kripa I wish I had never fallen in luv it gives u so much pain!
Prem thinks "well she luvs me but the question now is that do I luv her or is this an attraction?"
Prem is standing on the video remembering his times with mukti and the song kya muja pyaar hai is playing in the background
Kyu aj kal need kam khwab zada hai
Lakta khuda ka koi nek irada hai
Kal ka faker aj dil shazada hai
Lakta khuda ka koi nek irada hai
Kya muja pyaar hai
Kaisa kumar hai
Kya muja pyaar hai
Kaisa kumar hai
Prem thinks "yes I luv her I luv her I luv her"
The next day
Mukti wakes up
Mukti goes downstairs
Anju- good afternoon
Mukti- what time is it?
Anju- 2
Mukti- wow I woke up early
Anju- mukti u r 2 much!
Mukti- anyways it is Sunday lets do something fun I am so bored"
Anju- we can go shopping
Mukti- yeah that would be fun
Anju- and lets invite kripa 2
Mukti- wait a minute how do u know kripa
Anju- well she is in one of my classes' very sweet girl
Mukti- yeah very sweet! (Sarcastic)
Anju- and sameer and prem
Mukti- wait a minute why don't we also invite the whole college!
Anju- ok k but don't u want to make prem jealous
Mukti- well…….
Anju- ok it is decided I am calling sameer, prem, and kripa
Mukti- k I will go get ready
Anju- k
Mall
Mukti wore-

Anju is wearing-

Kripa was wearing


Prem- ok so let's shop
Mukti- yeah lets shop
Sameer- how about this u girls shop and we will wait here
Prem- nah we will see the outfits they buy and help them select
Sameer- k
Mukti under her breath "if prem does that then oh god I hope I don't get jealous seeing him with kripa"
Mukti was shopping when someone came
Mukti- oh sameer
Sameer- hey
Mukti- hi
Sameer- what r u looking for
Mukti- nothing specific
Sameer- well I think there is something u should look for
Mukti- what
Sameer- Indian clothes I have never seen u wear them
Mukti- um I never wear Indian clothes if my parents couldn't get me to wear them then no one can
Sameer- ok but u can wear kurti's right at least they r not Indian Indian
Mukti- yeah but I don't care right now I am looking for something
Sameer- k
Mukti thinks "well I know I am being a little rude but I don't want sameer to get the feeling that I really like him when I don't"
Outside
Mukti- I had so much fun
Anju- u always have fun when u shop mukti
Mukti- of course I will
Prem- anyways lets go home I am tired
Mukti- ok guys see u tomorrow bye sameer
Sameer- bye mukti
And he hugged her
Prem got so jealous
Prem- bye kripa
And he gave kripa a hug
Kripa- bye
Home
Anju- ok let e see what u got
Mukti- ok k first let me get everything
Mukti went upstairs and looked through her bags to remember what she bought then she saw a different bag
She opened it and inside it was a letter and a clothes box
The letter said
Dear mukti,
I think that even though u hate Indian clothes I think u should try them on at least once so just a request i bought this dress for u because I thought it would look good on u it is Indian but I am sure u can wear it for me just once after all u r a great friend
Luv,
Prem
Mukti thinks "omg prem said luv omg does he luv me"

i hope u liked it!
i know it was quite long but that was to make up for not updating since a long time!
anywyas please leave comments! 😃