kmph updated pg65....lovers apart!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys its me again kyahoganimmoka/sania with another fan fic I will be continuing my other fan fics tomorrow and 1 of them is going to be finished the fan fic is kaisa yeh pyaar ka safar its supposed to be a short story But the best one kuchh toh hua hai

Is still going to last for a long time!

Intro-

Kapoor family

Jai (played by ram kapoor)

A big business man owns all the 5-star hotels in u.s. and loves his kids a lot especially mukti

Gauri (played by ram's wife)

A fashion designer and loves her kids a lot

Dadi (baa from ksbkbt)

A very funny dadi loves to dress up and does not miss out a single movie at times she can be funny and sometimes she can be very serious

Kavya (played by ejaz khan)

A very funny guy loves his family a lot a big flirt and loves his sister a lot

Angad (played by iqbal khan)

A big time flirt a Casanova type one year older than his sister though he wonders sometimes who is older because mukti always bosses him around but sill he loves her a lot

Mukti (played by Tina parekh)

A very sweet girl she talks a lot but everyone loves her like that she is very hot and she does not have any sanskars (a shock isn't it) hates to attend poja's loves to play tennis, football (soccer), and basketball she is the most popular girl in college everyone wants to be her friend she loves to be flattered flirts with boys but has never been in a serious relationship

Mukti was born in America never been to India before she is in college and she wants to be a fashion designer like her mom and she knows that the best college for fashion designers is in Bombay India so she applied to go there and got accepted her family is very upset that she I going away from them but mukti is not she loves to have her own space and freedom so she convinced Angad to go to the same college as her so her family would let her go and they finally agreed

Bajaj family-

Rishab (played by Ronit Roy)

A very big business man he owns all the news channels aired in India he loves his family a lot

Prena (played by shweta tiwari)

A house wife a very sweet mother and loves her kids a lot

Sneha (played by Jennifer)

A very sweet girl is going to college it's her first year she is going to do mba (same college as mukti)

Kasak (played by surveen)

A very sanskari girl she is also in college

Prem (played by manoj bohra)

A very big flirt changes girlfriends every week he lives with his parents' money a very spoiled by his dad because he loves him lots and is in college

Other important characters

Anjali (played by anita)- Mukti's best friend

Kripa (played by neha bamb)-girl who studies in the same college as Kasak, sneha, and prem (will be introduced later)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice ronit is in it too! 👏 😉
continnue soon, so far love all the characters 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Garv_Kumud_4eva

nice ronit is in it too! 👏 😉
continnue soon, so far love all the characters 😛

thank u i will post the first part later on the day!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great job hun!!! continue soon!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u and i am working on the part now it will be up in an hour!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: umz2k3

cont soon!!!!!! 👏 👏

sure it will be up in an hour and i hope u liked it!😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: reeha...k

great job hun!!! continue soon!!!!!!! 😊

thanks reeha i will cont soon!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome FF hon!👏

cont. soon!😉

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Its 1 in the night in U.S. mukti is still not home as her parents know she is with her friends in the disc drinking and dancing mukti never drinked her friends did but not her but she loved to go to the disc the one reason she did not drink was because she knew she would die early if she drinked and she loved her life
Its 5 in the morning and mukti returns home
Mukti calls someone
Mukti- hello bro please open the door for me
Angad- sorry sis but mom was waiting for you and she slept on the sofa so I don't think you want to enter from the front door
Mukti- damn what should I do now?
Angad- how about okay come in front of your room
Mukti- are you crazy we have a very tall house and my room is in the 4th story which only belongs to me by the way
Angad- okay stop bragging
Mukti- hey its not my fault mom and dad don't think you are capable enough
Angad- only because they don't know your realty if they did they would never let you have your own floor
Mukti- ok now get to the point
Angad- I mean stand right in front of the room which on top of it has your room
Mukti- this is confusing
Angad- god you drive me crazy
Mukti- ok ok I get it so what do I do know I am standing right in front of the room
Angad- I am in your room so I will throw a rope down and pull you up
Mukti- ok that's simple
So Angad pulled mukti up and mukti hugged him
Angad- ok now whats the excuse you are going to make up
Mukti- you'll find out till then good night and make sure nobody wakes me up
Angad- you know they wont they love u princess
Mukti- I know I am loved and you are not
Angad- yeah I kn... Wait a minute mukti you are so dead

In India its 3 in the afternoon and prem is still not up
Prena - prena where is prem
Rishab - he is sleeping he came late from a party
Prena - why have you spoiled him?
Rishab - its his time to live life and when its time to act serious he will
Prena - do you know one thing?
Rishab - what?
Prena - no one can win from you in a fight
Rishab - you are impossible
In Prem's bedroom sneha tip toes into his bedroom with a bucket full of water so does Kasak
Sneha- on the count of three
1...2...3
They throw water on prem and run out of his room laughing their heads off
Prem- aah just wait and watch sis I will kill you both
Sneha- first catch us then kill us
Prem comes downstairs
Prena- good morning
Prem- good morning mother India
Prena - where were you last night?
Prem- umm my friend threw a party and I went there sorry I was late
Rishab - that's ok
Prem- mother India
Prena - yes
Prem- umm well since there is only 2 weeks left till college starts again my friends and I decided we should have fun so we decided to go on a mini vacation to goa if you don't mind
Prena - no no why the hell would I mind after all the money you are using is not mine its yours right we grow money on trees so of course I don't mind
Prem thinks "ek mera maa kitna khubasurat aur ek mera budha baap god kya Jodi banaya hai"
Rishab – relax prena prem you can go
Prem- thank you thank you thank u daddy cool I luv u
Prena- where are you going?
Prem- I have to pack I am leaving tonight
Prena- what tonight
Rishab- its ok
Edited by prem-mukti#1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW! Very nice! Plz go on soon! 👏 👏

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