updated pg.177: FINALLY FINISHED :D! - Page 19

that was reallllly gud ur so gud at writin storys i love readi nthem continue soonn 👏

Originally posted by: amber0802

...but....MUKTi..she's soo fertile yoo..u got to give this baby up mannn....she already has 4...mannn..lol..good nice job...keep it up

lol...read the first part..the firt three arnt hers...lol but thats still funnnyy😆

i just love this fanfic, continue soon please. 👏

AWWWW!!! thankss for all your great feedback! and thanks for not being mad with me for not updating fast too!!! soo i guess you guys deserve another update right?...so hear i goo....

RECAP: prem and mukti are having another kid ( if you look at it from a technical point of view...thius would only be there 3rd child if the first time they werent triplets 😆 ) and Neal finds out prem is his brother....

Prems eyes grew in confusion not knowing what to do or say...as neal held him and cryed...neal was soo happy...he had a family...he wasnt alone...he belonged somewhere he had an identity...prem finally spoke...he got out of neals embrace and walked up to prerna...angry was in his eyes..he finally exploded...

Prem: WHAT KIND OF SICK JOKE IS THIS!!!
Prerna stode up and touched prems face she knew what he ment: prem....
Prem:DONT TOUCH ME!!! HOW MANY FREAKEN KIDS DO YOU HAVE FOR GOD DAMN SAKE!!! FIRST BIG BRO..THEN SNEHA...ME ...KASAK..HIM? HOW MANNY MORE 'UKNOWN' 'LOST' BROTHERS AND SISTERS DO I HAVE!!!!!

Mukti got up and came downstairs to see what all the comostion was about...nisha came with her...they saw prem sitting on the sofa with his head in his heads....neal was stading watching prerna trying to explain somthing to prem...but he wouldnt listen...mukti and nisha went downstairs...nisha to neal and mukti to prem....mukti went and sat by im and stroked her fingers through his hair....
mukti: prem?....whats wrong...?
Prerna: mukti...prems alive.....
mukti didnt understand: choti maa...i know that? what do you mean?
Prerna: NO. the first prem is alive....
Mukti didnt know what to do or say...her eyes grew in confusion....
Mukit: really? WOW! thats great....now the family will be compleat.....where is he....
Prem grabbed muktis hand and pulled her too the corner to talk privatly...but i wqouldnt consider it privater...since everone could hear...
Mukti: whats wrong prem...why are you soo down...? arnt you happy?
Prem: THATS NOt BIG BRO!! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH yOU PPL HE IS DEAD!!!
Mukti: prem how can you be soo closed minded? if im alive...your alvie...why cant he be?.....
Prem: HOW MANY KIDS DOSE MY MOM HAVE !!!!
Mukti: prem calm down think about it...were are the reports..?
Prem walked over to the doctor adn gabbed him by the shirt...raag in his eyes...
Prem: THIS BETTER NOT BEE SOME SICK JOKE!!! I SWEAN IF ITS SOME KIND OF PRANK I WONT LEAVE YOU ALIVE...AND I STICK TO MY WORD...THE LAST THING MY MOM NEEDS IS FALSE HOPE!
doctor: no Prem Sir...the roports are a 100% accurate i cheacked them my self...around a dozen times.....i even matched your mothers DNA to Mr.Neals....its perfect....other then that i dont know how your brother was absent fot such a long periode of time....
prem walked up to neal he was nervous he didnt know what to do or say.....tears were rolling down his face...of joy regreat..and happines for the future...
Prem: your ...my ...brother...?....how...how...old are you again.....
Prerna:...he should be 37 by now right...beta...( i think thats how old the first prem would be or around that...4 when he died..another 4/5 years for the 'little sneha' leap..then 20 years..then five....and then the leap i did in the fanfic for about 4 years...37 or 38 right?...)
Neal: yes....
Prerna just smiled as tears streamed dcown her face..she went and hugged her son...the son she thought she had lost....
Neal: i have a'ma'...nisha...i have a ma....
Nisha: went and touched prerna's feet...she was confused but happy for neal....
Prerna took off her gold kangana's and gave them to nisha and kissed her forhead..today prerna's family was compleate...

Prem just stod there....after prerna went to go call anurag...and tell him...prem went to neal and hugged him....
Prem: im sorry.....bu..bu..how...?....can you be 'alive...
Neal: i dont know lil bro....but...we'll find out....
Mukti laughed: prem...now this is gonna be confusing..how on earth will we know which prem to call?....
Neal smiled: noo it's okeay mukti...prem can have this name...he has soo much of a right on it....you can stil call me neal.....
Prem smiled: sooo big brother....? you owe mee alot of birthday gifts!!!
Neal laughed: you owe me some too.....

NEXT DAY;

Mr.Mehra and Anu had come over to Bajah house..to figure out this whole story...was this the 1st prem?.....

Mr.Mehra: neal could be...if the DNA tests say soo...
ANU: but Mr.Mehra you live in Canada...how did you ge3t neal....?
Mr.M: well....i lived in Dehli...my and my wife Asha couldnt have any kids soo we dicided to adopt a new born boy...but when we got to the orphanage in Dehli we say a cute little boy on a streacher aound 4...he had been injured pretty badly...he looked soo innocent...Asha's heart was set on him...soo we adopted him. He couldnt talk...doctors said he had lost the ability to....but he regained it when he was 10..after Asha gave birth to Ankita she died.....We never knew were neal actually came from....
Neal:....how did i get injured....
PREM/Prerna both: KOMOLIKA......

Neal didnt get it...prerna explained the whole storry ...her and anurage...love...bajaj...prem 1's kidnapping...death....sneha her deisease ...prem.....everthing.

At the end of this all Neal's head was spinning in disbelieef...but he was happy...his parents loved him...he wasnt somthing that was left to die....he had an identity....

Prerna: prem...do you want to keep you name?...
Neal: noo ma...prem can have the name....its his identtity now...but i will change my last name if thats okeay with you dad...?
MR.M:sure......you deserve to hae the name that you were born with....
Anurags face fadad...he knew htat Prem 1 would be Neal Sharama or Bajaj...never 'Basu'....
Neal: form now on Im Neal Basu.....
Prerna smiled and anu did too.....

TO BE CONTINUED.....

Im sooo sorry that this whole update was a bit borring...but i have a little activity for you guys...you know how prem and mukti are having another kid right?...well PM me and tell me if you want it too be a girl or bo...and the name! sorry about the short update...do pst your thoughts and comments!

Love
Reeha 😛

Its great Reeha!!!
Maybe you should give some advice in Kekta's way... Because she sure needs it.
Looking forward to your next installment...

I love the fact that prem 1 is back! 👏

lololololol.....
amber0802 wrote:
...but....MUKTi..she's soo fertile yoo..u got to give this baby up mannn....she already has 4...mannn..lol..good nice job...keep it up




lol...read the first part..the firt three arnt hers...lol but thats still funnnyy

thats so guddddddd im happy that the family now complete and prem one gave his last name as basu instead of bajaj 😃 gud job

OMG continue soon..i m soo into ittt.... 😉 😉 thts happy moment........lol...ahh i wish i wud me sneha... 😉 soo we will b complete familyy...eheh

Originally posted by: reeha...k

lol...read the first part..the firt three arnt hers...lol but thats still funnnyy😆

yeaa i got tht now...hehe stilll..its kind of funny tht...prerna...with...

SNEHA, KASAK, KUKI, MUKTI, PREM, NEW prem, and w/e the doris's husband nae is...4got out of no whr..lol...ya...7 kids...i think in 1920's pplz used to give birth too lot kids not nemore..ehehehe

but no offense i love this fanfic soo muchaaa....muahahaha...luv ya alll😊