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RECAP: Mrs.Meera, see's Jeevan and asks were their daughter jiya is.

TRUTH

Mukti: aunty are you okeay, whats wrong? (she didn't hear anything from the kitchen

manisha comes up and comforts her mom, and takes a carefull look at mukti...
manisha:Jiya didi, is that you? you look soo much different, from your picture as a baby...

Mukti: Baba, what is all this nonsens, our house burned down when i was a baby, it took mama and everything down with it i have no baby pictures...

Meera: Jiya beta plaease i've waited soo long i thought you and jeevan were gonee....

Mukti was getting really tense and stressed out, she couldnt take it anymore...

Mukti: SHUT UP! I HAVE NO MOM ! JUST SHUT UP! IM NOT JIYA IM MRS.MUKTI PREM BAJAJ!LEAVE ME AND MY FAMILY ALONE!JUST GO AWAY!

She had had it she collapsed....

PREM: MUKTI!! nooo he was crying his eyes out..

he picked her up and prerna called the doctor, up in the room Meera trys to touch Mukti's face, but i hand stops her....

Prem: dont touch her...
Meera: beta shes my daughter...
Prem: no shes my wife, and if anything happens to her or my daughter, i swear i will forget you gave birth to the women i love..
He turns around...
Meera: Jiya is soo lucky, she has such a loving husband...
Prem: STOP CALLING HER THAT! HER NAME IS MUKTI! WHAT ARE YOU CRAZY!?

Jeevan: No she's not...Mukti is jiya's middle name (a tear rolled down his face)

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FLASHBACK (jeevan is telling the story)

Meera and i were happy, we were even happier when we had our daughter, me and Meera would always fight over what we should call her....
Meera would say Jiya, and I would call her Mukti, so wee dicided to call her, Jiya Mukti Deshmhk

Everything was perfect Jiya had just turned one, and we were soo happy tell the fire...

Meera: JEEVAN! the NEIGHBORS HOUSE IS ON FIRE!
Jeevan: Meera it's spreeding fast, you go out, i'll take jiya out of her room

But she didnt she went back in to save her little girls baby photos, she could bare losing anything material, becasue those ment nothing to her, but those timless photographs were pricless to her....

BACK TO REALITY

Jeevan: Basically soo many people died they found 50 bodies and 20 people were missing, but we all knew if a person was missing they were probobly dead. So then i took jiya and came to Bombay to start anew, i even droped her first name, and kept it Mukti.

Meera: For two years i searched for these two, but never found them, then i married Sagar, and had Manisha, and raised Shiv.

Doctor came in inturrupting their conversation: Mr.Prem?...
Prem: yes doctor, they're both alright, right?
Doctor: Im afraid im going to have to take your wife and examine her at the hospitle, im not going to lie to you it's pretty serious....
Prem angraly grabs the doctors collar: LOOK! I DONT GIVE A DAMN! YOUR GOING TO SAVE THEM BOTH, I'LL GIVE YOU WHATEVER YOU WANT..ww..hatever...

He broke down crying....he couldnt take it

TO BE CONTINUED

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RECAP: The truth about mukti's parents is reiled, mukti faints..(in hospitial serious condition) Prem has broken down...

HOSPITAL:

Prem is standing right by the examination room,he hadent said a word to anyone for so long, this still silence was killing prerna...

prerna:prem beta come here..
he slowly walks to prerna who sitting in a chair next to meera...He comes and placs he restless head into his mothers comforting lap,and begings to sob...
prem:ma..why me?...i lost you as a kid..I dont want to lose mukti, and my baby...
prerna: No beta everything will be alright,in just a few minutes everything will be alright...

prem feels someone touch his shoulder...it's shiv

Shiv:prem, I am a heart sergoun, and i knoww this has nothing to do with this,but working in a hospitial, i have seen many cases like mukti's improve....
prem smiles, and huges him
Then manisha comes and pulls shiv away to talk to him in the corner..

Manisha: bhayia! why r u giving prem false hope?
shiv:....bu..
Manisha: NO bUTS! you know this is the exact way sapna bhabi died!
Shiv started to,sob...I KNOW, BUT I DIDN'T LOVE SAPNA, SO I MOVED ON EASILY! do you even realise how much prem loves our sister?!?
manisha just stood there, and knew he was right...

THE dOCTOR COMES OUT:

Prem was the one infront of the doctor first...
prem: how r they now?...there fine right?
doctor: Sir sorry but there is no they now...
prem: no..no....no..he was about to cry, but he wipped away his tears and thought: If i breakdown who will take care of mukti?

SUDENNLEY THERE WAS A LOUD SMASH FROM tHE ROOM:

it was mukti she was smashing everything around her...The nurse, had told her that her baby was no more...

MUKTI smashing the water glass: SHUT UP YOU LIER!....PREM! (she see's him at the door)..prem!..prem(she was crying..alot) what kind of sick joke is this?! huh!
He went to touch her face, then he said,:Mukti im sorry but it's true...
Mukti grabs his collar: PREM! how could you let them...HOW COULD U LET THEM KILL MY BABY!
they hold eachother,and cry and cry..till mukti goes to sleep.....

TO BE CONTINUED
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RECAP: Mukti lost her baby... 😭

BAJAJ HOUSE:(one week after mukti's miscarraige)
PM Bed ROOM:

Prem: Eyy jaan, i brought you lunch...
Mukti: No thanks prem..i dont want anything...
Prem: Do you love me?
Mukti:..huh? what kind of stupied question is that...ofcourse i do...
Prem: then why are you doing this to your self? why? Why are you doing this to me? ....Mukti i cant see you like this, you dont talk nonestop, you dont eat, you dont yell at me (at this point he's crying 😭 ) I want my old MUKTI back, the one that would always say... "prem this is no time for romancing..or PREM you jerrrk!"

Mukti (crying): Prem,Why uss? what did we do wrong?... this is ALL her fault...

at this time prerna walks in...

prena: mukti you cant hate her, she's your mother..and ask me how it feels when you see your child after soo many years..and to find that your child hates you...
prem: Ma is right Mukti, dont act stupied like me...dont waste soo much time trying to hate your mom..try to understand her.....

And she did just that.....

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3 MONTHS LATER:
Pm Room:

Prem is in the shower,
Prem: Basanti sweetheart! Can you give me a towel please!!!
Mukti: Prem ur such an idiot! how many times do i have to say get a towl before u go in the shower!
Prem: I wouldn't hold your breath if i were you!

Mukti hands him the towel, and he pulls her in towards him...
Mukti: Prem!!!!!!!!!!! you got my new sari ALL wet!
Prem: But ofcourse, i like you wet... (giving his dreamy smile)
Prem: basanti, you know todays date right?.... and dont act like you forgot okeay!?
Mukti: why somthing special? 😉
Prem (sarcastically): Oh no! theres nothing special about valentines day...nothing at all!
Mukti: your too much Prem..okeay I have to go sneha was calling me...

he holds onto her waist tightly: heyy basanti...your leaving your husband on valentines day...Am i really that unattravtive?
Mukti: No prem your the sexsiest husband in the world but i have .....

Prerna: MUKTII BETA!!!
Mukti: coming Choti ma!

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Prerna and Meera are standing in pm's room...

Prerna: Mukti why are you all wet?
Mukti just blushes 😳
Meera: Mukti beta! how are you?
Mukti: im fine mama...
Sneha: Mukti...how come you arnt readdy yet, did you forget? Me you shiv and prem are going out for valentines day!
Prerena: sure you kids go and have fun, Meera ji, Sagar is coming for dinner too right?
Meera: yess

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BEFORE THE PARTY:

Prem Looked stunning as usual, he wore a white blazer with a hot pink t-shirt, with his wheel midalian, Mukti looked unbeleivable in a hot pink sarri, with her hair open, and losely currled.

Prem: Basanti Darling you look hot ...
Mukti : You dont look too bad yourself pathidev...
Prem grabs her waist (as usual)
Mukti: Prem stopp we have to go...
Prem: Mukti i can't help myself...you look soo pretty today...he kisses her neck..

ehemmmmm someone intrupts...its Shiv: Prem if your done flirting with my sister, it's time for us to leave..

Prem: sheeesh! It's as if its a crime to romance your wife...
mukti laughs....

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AT THE PARTY:

Sneha was all happy, and dancing away with Shiv...and mukti got an idea...

mukti whispers to prem: Prem...what if sneha married shiv?
prem: She will..
mukti: huh? 😕
Prem:shiv's proposing to her tonight
Mukti: how do you know?
Prem: Shiv told me...
Mukti: He's my brother..and he told you?
prem: mukti it's because shiv thinks your annoying 😆 !
Mukti punchs prem: shut up! 😡 ANd i am not ANNOYOING you ARE!

Prem: Jaan would you like to dance with me?
mukti: id love to!

So they start dancing to ...'aap ke pyaar mein' from "raaz." Mukti feels dizzy, and prem notices somthing is wrong he was just about to say something, when she collapsed....

MEANWHILE.....

outside in the garden shiv and sneha were walking...

Shiv: Sneha, do you beleive that a person can re-fall in love?
Sneha: yeah..why?
Shiv: i dont know (he stops and looks at her)...i hope people can..
Sneha:why though? (she knew the answer)
Shiv: See, i really like this girl, but she had already fallen in love, but she's not with that person anymore..do you think she could re-fall in love with me?
Sneha: dont know it might depend on what your intentions are?
Shiv: well...i want to marry her.....
Sneha: then i think she might say yess....

Shiv, right then and there got down on one knee, shiv:Ms.Sneha Bajaj would you like to marry me?
Sneha started to cry: yess.... 😳

shiv: okey lets go
Sneha:but where?
Shiv: to the beach, i arrenged dinner for us there...
Sneha: but what about prem and mukti?
shiv: 😆 Me and prem planned this, he said "after you propose to my sister, and she says yes..then get lost!" So prem and mukti are probubly be too busy romancing!

But boy was shiv wrong.....

At the Hospital:

Mukti was in there for a check, up to see whatt was wrong... and the doctor came out...
Doctor: Mr.Prem?
Prem: yess..she's alright? whats wrong with her?
Doctor: this has happend to her before right?
Prem:...(on the verge of crying) y..e....s she has fainted like this before...but that was because of the mis-carrage...but...why did she faint this time?
Doctor: No Mr.prem i mean..she has been pregnent before right?
Prem didnt answer, he just hugged the doctor and ran into mukti's room..she was sound asleep...
Prem talking aloud: this time things will be different i swear...this time mukti JR will come..i wont let anything happen to you two....

Prerna comes in, and huges prem...
Prerna: Prem Beta! Im going to be a dadi! she was crying tears of joy...
Prem: yess ma and im gonna be the best dad ever....

Mukti finally woke up.... and the first thing she see's is prem holding her hand and looking at her...
Prem: heyy jaann how are you doing?
Mukti: pr..em? what happend..what am i doing here?
Prem: dont lie to me mukti you know everything...
Mukti: w.h..at? 😕
Prem smiling: relaxx... is was just joking...mukti in exactly 8 moinths me and you are gonna be parents... 😃

Mukti starts crying tears of joy..and hugs prem..then punches him
mukti (she was crying and laughing too): prem your a jerk...
prem: i know but im your jerk...

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BAJAJ HOUSE:

Everyone was happy, There were soo many things to be happy about, shiv and sneha were getting married, in six months, and in eight months teh bajaj house with have a mew family member...

meera: Mukti beta, im soo happy for you and prem...last time it was all....
prem: No last time it was no ones fault, what was ment to happen...happend and we cant change it...so lets not cry over somthing that never came to be...

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8 months later:

Pm's room:

Mukti was feeling restless, and it was around 2 in the morning, she would walk from one end of the room to the other...
Prem: mukti jaann are you okeay?
Mukti: NO DOES IT LOOK LIKE IM OKEAY?! I've BEEEN UP SINCE ONE, aDN YOUVE BEEEN SLEEPING LIKE A DOG!
Prem: jaan chill..out..
he gets up, and walks over to mukti, and wispers to her stomach...
Prem: Muti Jr bet, have you been keeping mama awake?...hmmmmmmmmmm I guess your anxsous to meet your papa right?!
Mukti: PREM STOP TALKING AND DO SOMTHING!
Prem: okeay jaans time to go to the hospital...

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THE HOSPITAL:

The whole Bajaj, Basu,a dn Sandhu family was waiting in the waiting room, Prem, was just strolling around, he was getting restless....

prem thinking: she's alright? Ofcourse she's alright! what am i thinking?! Is it a boy or a girl?

The doctor interupted his thoughts: Mr. Prem..congradulation, after 6 hours of labour your a proud father of a baby girl!

He was soo happy he began to cry, the nurse brought out this little girl, in a pink blanket..he looked at his baby girl for the first time...she looked just like mukti, the same big eyes, and large smile, but she had brown hair just like him...
Prem: heyy jaan...me and you are going to have soo much fun together..your going to be daddy's little girl...

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IN the Hospitals Room:

Prera and Meera were sitting byMukti as she looked at her little girl sleeping soundly...

Meera: Mukti beta what are you going to name my grandaughter?
Prerena: Yess mukti have you and prem thought of a name yet..?
Prem comes in: Yes we have
mukti smiles...
they both reply: Jiya Bajaj

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THE END...FOR NOW

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