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RECAPE: The lady introduces herself as Meera Sandhu

In the House:
Mukti: Prem stop it! Okeay i'll change and u can change then i'll go help aunty okeay!
Prem gives a mischivious smile: okeay...but this is not over. 😃

Mukti is changing inside and prem in the bedroom, he takes off his shirt, and feels someone touching his back, he grabs the hands and says...

PREM:see Mrs Basanti even u cant resist ur Hott husband!
Prem: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Mukti comes out in a towel: PREM WHATS WRONG!!!

She see's prem shirt less and see's and girl by him laughing wildly, she looked younger probobly 19 or 20.

Girl: hahah! Omg! i just came to get a book!, and to my suprise i see a hot guy taking off his shirt! And by the way mister im not some basanti ok, im Manisha Sandhu,your soon to be wife.....

Mukti cuts in: Sorry he's taken, this is prem, and im his wife Mukti. 😡

Prem laughs: See basanti i told you im hott
mukti punches prem: shut up ididot!

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AT DINNER:

manisha couldnt stop smiling, and mukti couldnt stop giving her the dirrtist of looks, prem was just pigging out, and Ms. Meera was oblivious to the whole thing!

Mrs. Meera: is there somthing funny that i missed out on?

Manisha: No mama...but how come u didnt tell me that were having guests?
Mrs. Meera: Welll Prem mukti dropped in ananced..but i enjoy it this house felt soo empty, now atleast there some people in it!

Prem: 😆 our house never fells empty, it feels over crowded!
Mukti: prem shut up! Did u call choti ma?
Prem: I tried but the phones out
Manisha: choti ma? whats a choti ma?

Prem: haha, mukti calls my mom choti ma
Mrs. Meera: I think thats sweet
Manisha: soo who else is in your family prem?
Mukti answereing 4 him: Prems Dad, Mr Bajaj, his mom, Prena Bajaj, his brother Tushar and his wife Doris, his sister Sneha....anything else?
Prem was just grinning, he could see mukti's face burning with envy.

Manisha: prem is your sister older or younger then you?

Prem: which one?
Manisha: Ohh u have twoo?
Prem: yupee, Kasak is younger by about 1 or two years, and Sneha is older by about five.
Manisha: Is your sister Sneha pretty, smart, intelligent and nice?
Prem: laughing...yess she's better then that ...but why the concen?
Mrs.Meera knew what her daughter was getting at..and gave her a dirty look to shut up.

Prem: it's okeay aunty she can ask, no need to get mad...

Manisha: wow how did you know mom was getting mad?
Prem: my mom does the same thing!

Mukti was getting up from the table to leave she had had enough of manisha talking soo sweetly to her husband , when all of a sudden prem grabs her wrist infront of everyone.

Prem: Basanti....no need to get jelouse, you know i love you and only you...

Mrs.Meera&Manisha both: AWWWWWWWWW you two are tooo cute!

Mukti was just blushing, and kind of embaressed...thinking to her self: is it really that obvious that i was jelous?

Mukti sits down, and eats...
Manisha: sooo Mukti why does prem call you basanti?
Prem: Because my lovly wife talks none stop, is bossy and very sweet just like basanti in sholey! he smiles
Manisha: thats sooo sweet! he calls you basanti out of love! soo then what do you call him?
Mukti: A duffer! 😆
she laughs prem laughs to see her laughing
Mukti: no just kidding i call him prem
Manisha: but why prem, isnt that his real name, i mean what do you call him out of love?
Mukti: prem
Manisha: why?
Mukti: because prem means 'love'
Prem: OHHH GODD! Manisha you talk just like basanti! none stop! It's as though your her sister or somthing... From now on your basantii JR! okeay...


TO BE CONTINUED

K guys i hope my storry is going alright soo far, i hope u guys arnt getting board..i know its slow pace but its all about to lead some where!
and remember to post your replys!!! 😉

how cute......! conunue, it's really sweet! 😊 👏

ALRIGHTYY GUYSS! Im back with the up date!

RECAP: Prem and Mukti are introduced to Manisha.. (mukti isn't a big fan of her)

MORNING:

The sun is shineing brightly through the room and mukti is up bright and early, she gets restless so she goes and walks in the hall of the sandhu house. In the center of the hall there is an unbeleiveabley large family portrait of the sandhu family.

there was a Tall intelligent looking man, kind of like mr.bajaj, but younger. Then there was Mrs.Meera, and Manisha, then Mukti's eyes rolled toward this boy he looked around the age of sneha, or maybe a year or two older. But the thing thta was interesting about him, was his apperance, he had such a light tone of skin, and ppale blue eyes, with light brown hair, yet he still managed to look indian, and on the other hand it look as though that were his naturall apperance!

Mukti didnt realise how long she had been looking at the photo till..
Mrs. Meera said: Mukti what are you looking at?
Mukti in a startled tone: Oh! nothing just your family portraite...umm aunty if you dont mind me asking but who else is in here?
Mrs.Meera: Well, thats my husband Sagar, and then me and Manisha, and thats my son Shiv.
Mukti: he looks soo different....
Mrs. Meera: I know he looks like his mom
Mukti starts looking at Mrs.Meera with a confused face, who looked nothing like shiv
Mrs.Meera: OH! i must have gotten you confused, but shiv isnt my biological son, but i love him as my own, he looks so different because his mother was cocasian..im sorry about the confusion.
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TIME TO GO:

Prem: Thank you very much aunty and if your ever in Bombay please stay over at our house, its the least we can do.
Mukti: yess, and you have to come to prem's birthday party next week...otherwise i will get verrrrrry mad...OK!
Mrs.Meera laughs: ok beta no problem
Manisha:Well...if mama dosent come..dont't worry prem i'll be there 😉

Mukti gives her another dirrty look 😡
prem sees it and laughs 😆

Prem picks her up, and walks down the driveway to there car.....


TO BE CONTINUED

PRECAP:

Prem: Where's my Birthday gift?
Mukti: you'll get it but not now
Prem: When?
Mukti:in .........

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k guys ill update soon...and remember to post your, feedback, thoughts, ideas, critizim ecttt..I HOPE you enjoyed! 😉

That is really good plz update soon= ) Your soooooo fast at updating plz continue with the fast updates= )

Sooo i hope you guys have been enjoying my fanfic sooo far...im going to make this entry really long, so bare with me...(my mom says im on the computer tooo long 😳 ...and the sad part is she's right 😆 so i wont be posting 4 a while)

RECAP:Prem and mukti leave the Sandhu house,and go home, the sandhus are invited to prems birthday party next week.

ONE WEEK LATER
BAJAJ HOUSE:

Everyone is running around trying to get all the decorations perfict mean while prem and mukti are in their room...

Prem: Basanti Darling when will you be giving your sexy husband his gift?
Mukti: soon
Prem: You've been saying that all week long wheres my gift man!
mukti: first of i am not a MAN..second your not getting your gift now, but you will get it!
Prem:WHEN?
Mukti:.... in around 7 months
Prem: HUH? 😕 are you building me somthing? cuz i really dont need anything that big, even a kiss is great!
Mukti laughing: Duffer!
Prem still confused:what?
Mukti: in exactly 7 months from now, you'll be playing with our little son or daughter!
Prem: REALLYYY OMG this isss SOOO amazing!

He lifts her up and spins her aroung the room..laughing and laughing...
prem:mukti how can i thank you?
mukti: huh?
prem: i mean i dont deserve you, and the whole world knows that, but why do you always make me feel soo happy and great?
Mukti:because i love you
Prem: But i dont love you soo much any more 😲
Mukti: WHAT?
Prem: Obviously....dads always like there daughter better then their wives 😆
Mukti: Prem!!!!!!! you JERK! 😡
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The whole family was soo happy and re-joiced, and prem was on top of the world, he was more excited about becoming a dad then helping mukti with the party.

prem: Mukti what did the doctor say about your pregnancy?
Mukti: he said that i shouldn't take any stree, eat well..blah blah blah
Prem: eyy look here basanti you better take care of mukti jr OKEAY! so no blah, blah blahs
Mukti: 😆 okeay soon to bee daddy

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the guests were poring in and the party was going to start soon, Sneha is hanging a banner, with kuki, when a loud and obnocsious girl, kocked her down by accident, but luckly the guys behind her saved her.
There was a moment, that sneha was entranced in and the guy felt the same way..... when allof a sudden the guy feels atape on his shoulder...

Mr bajaj: would you mind placing my daughter on the ground now please.

guy: oh Im sooo sorry sir....
Sneha: pappa actually, i fell and he caught mee...
Mr.Bajaj:By the way who are you i haven't seen you before...
guy: sorry, i forgot to introduce myself, im Shiv Sandhu, i came to the party with my mom and sister, Mr.Prem and his wife invited us.
Mr.Bajaj: Oh ok, enjoy the party then.. Ithink your mom is Mrs. Meera right?
Shiv: yupe thats her alright.

UPSTAIRS:
prem:Mukti...
Mukti:yess
Prem: let me finish my scentence! So i was saying Mukti JR, beta, what do you think your papa would look better in? Black suit red tie, or white suite blue tie?
Mukti: hmmmm....Well mukti JR says: Papa scince mama is wearing a white sari with a red desingn, you should weare a white suite with a red tie!
Prem: thanks jaans!
He kiss's mukti then her stomach

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THE PARTY:

Mukti Sees Mrs. Meera

Mukti: AUNTY!!! you made it! where's manisha?
Mrs.Meera: She's talking to your bahbi Doris
mukti:Did you bring uncle and shiv?
Mrs.Meera: yess shiv is talking you prems sister sneha, but sagar couldnt come.

Mukti looks towards sneha, she see's her laughing and gigling, it was as though, the happy go lucky sneha five years ago, was back.
Suddenly someone grabs mukti's waist...
Mukti: AHHH!
Prem: HAHAH that never gets old!
Mrs Meera: See you still love eachother just as much...
Prem: uh ah...your wrong i love her more..(he kisses her on the cheek).......

Manisha: Prem if your romancing is over i would like you too meet my big brother Shiv.
Prem:Oh manisha! nice to see you! Shiv!? Oh yess Mukti told me.
Prem extends his hand and says: Hello i am Prem Shar...Bajaj, my lovly wife mukti, and our soon to bee baby girl.
Shiv: huh? OH I GET IT! CONGRADULATIONS! by the way Im Shiv
Mrs.Meera still didnt get it: huh?
Prem: oh aunty your soo oblivious, your going to be a great aunty, and manisha an aunty!
Manisha: hahaha...no im not that old to be an aunty.

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the party was carrying on and Mrs.Meera was enjoying the fun til somthing caught her eye...... she ran towards a man.. turnd him around and looked in disbelife...

Mrs.Meera: APE?
she was crying her eyes out as if her world had collapsed.
Everyone in the party turned there head's towards, Mrs.Meera and Jeevan...
Mrs.Meera: JEEVAN! YOUR ALIEVE...if your alive where's JIYA! JEEVAN ANSWER ME WHERE'S MY DAUGHTER I WANT AN ANSWER, JEEVAN WHERE'S OUR DAUGHTER!

then at that moment Mukti can out from the kitchen and said..
MUKTI: BABA! you came back from Dehli, she runs up and hugs him.....
Mrs.Meera looks in disbelife, reaches her hand and touches Muktis face and says: Jiya Beti

TO BE CONTINUED
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kay guys thats all for now i hope you enjoy, and PLEASE do comment, i love reading them. I'll up date soon (hopefully!) 😃

omg is Mrs.Meera mukti's mom i can't believe it dat would be an awesome twist n who is sagar? continue soon will be waitin 4 ur next udpate

Sagar, is Mrs.Meera's crrent husband,and Manisha and Shiv's father

Omg... itz awsome.. i luv the Pm parts.. they are soo sweet 😳

It was great
lol my mom says tht i spend too much time on the comp too lol anyways cont soon