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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
Really Nice! šŸ‘
Cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
its really gud!do continue it!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 work!! do continue soon!!! šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
šŸ‘ i love t and especially prem and mukti's cute moments 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HEYY GUYSS! I'm back with a WHOLE NEW UPDATE! I hope you like! (it's 2 years later)....

Bajaj house:

Everyone has been soo happy for the past two years, and the kasautii's in everyones lives are basically no more...Sneha and Shiv just had there daughter Sapna (Sneha chose the name) and prem and mukti were as happy as can be....

PM's Room:

Prem: Jaan where are you?
Mukti: Prem! im in the shower u know that!
Prem: nooo basanti im talking to you...im talking to my first love...
Jiya sweeti!
Jiya: (who can barely speak...she's only 2! and trust me she's really cute!) p...up..pa...
Prem: Awww my baby said papa!
Mukti came out laughing...
mukti: prem...that and mama is the only thing she can say! šŸ˜†
prem: i dont care...my jiya loves more then she loves you..
he picks jiya up and kisses her cute littles chubby cheacks
jiya: can..dy
prem: ohh so my sweetheart wants candy? well what ever my princess wants, she gets...
they go down to the kitchen, and prem gives her a lollipop...mukti comes down in a yellow sari...
mukti:prem ur spoiling her!
prem: jaan you over react too much! she's just a little kid ...its no big deal
jiya:ma..ma n....oooo biv deeels (she was trying to immitate prem)
prerena comes in...
prerena:jiya beta arn't you gonna give dadi a kissi?
jiya graceously walks to prerena and gives her a peck on the check....
jiya: d..adi.....d..addd...oo....ka? (she means where dada..bajaj)
Bajaj:im hear sweeti
jiya comes over and gives him a kiss too...

Prerena: Prem me and Mr.Bajaj are going to go to Panchmeshwer next week to see sneha..for her birthday...but dont tell her it's a suprise!

Prem: ok mom no problem

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It was two days before prerna and bajaj were going to leave....

Mukti: Prem im going to the doctor okeay...
Prem comes out of the bedroom and runs to her at the entrence: WHAT happend..is anything wrong? what happend? huh? tell me! (he had gotten really parenoid over her health ever since her mis-carriage 2 years back)
Mukti: Prem calm down im just going for a regular check up....
Prem in a releived voice: oh...ok..thats okeay...but come back soon..
he kisses her on the cheak

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Dinner time: Jiya was eating with Deepak (doris and Tushars son..he's a year younger) and prerna...bajaj was gone out at the office and thushar and doris out for dinner...

Mukti comes in: Choti ma wheres prem?
Prerna: why what happend?
Mukti: i'll tell weres prem?
Prerna: in his room...

Mukti runs up and see's he's in the washroom taking a shower, she goes into the shower and huges him from the back from behind...

Prem: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Mukti laughs: šŸ˜† it's just meee!
Prem suprised: Basanti im the one usually sneeking up on u in the shower..but you sneeked up on me!.......not that im complaining..i mean jiya can sleep with mom tonight...
mukti inturupts: PREM YOU GONNA BE A DAD AGAIN!
All he did was huge her soo tightly and began to cry...

prem:thanks mukti...thanks

He went down stairs and went to jiya and picked her up...
prem: princess..do you want a sister or a brother?
Preran looks up and tears of happines pour from her eyes..she getsup from her chair and kisses mukti on the for head.....

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Prerna and bajaj were gone to panchmeshwer....it had been 6 hours since they had left...

the phone rings...tring!...tring!

Prem picks it up: Hello!
voice: is this the bajaj residence?
prem: yess
voice: are you mrs.prerena bajaj's relative
prem (kind of freaked out): yess, but why the intreset...?
voice: Prem sir, im calling from the central hospital in panchmeshwer, im sorry but your mother and father just passed away in a serious car crash...

the phone droped out of his hand...and he began to cry...it wasnt till mukti came out of the kitchen and picked up the phone...then she knew why....



TO BE CONTINUED


Kay guys i have to go buit i will continue soon, i noe it was a bit long, and it may have board some of you..just let me knoe if you want me to go on..otherwise i'll stop 😃 alright so remember to post your thoughts..and by the way if any of you guys have a good title in mind do let me know! šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
wat BP no more 😭 😭 😭 cont soon i hope its some misunderstanding
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
hey its so beautifull, continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
nice twist... continue soon!!! luvin ur fan fic!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
omg!!! 😲 prerna and bajaj are gone!!! 😭 😭 continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
Awww thanks guyss your too sweet 😳 Soo here's the next part....

RECAP: Sneha and shiv have a newborn girl (SAPNA), Thushar and doris have a son (DEEPAK) JIYA is 2, prem and mukti are having another kid..prerna and bajaj DEAD!

It was a long and quite drive to the hospital....prem was still in shock and mukti didnt know how to console him..because shee was trying not to break down herself....jiya and deepak were left at anu's house with Mohini (jiya's great grandma) because anu and sam were in singapour for there wedding anniversary....Prem and mukti hadnt told anyone but thushar and doris...they didnt want people breaking down ...espesially if it was a misunderstanding...oh how they wished it were a misunderstanding....

HOSPITAL:
Prem talking to the receptionist: umm...errr..where looking for an accident case...
receptionest: ummm...basment room1
prem and mukti went down..there heart beat got louder and louder with each step..they found a police officer at the door waiting for them....
officer: Mr.Prem bajaj?
prem: yess...
he sharply inturrupted: and who is this with you?
prem: my...wife mukti
officer: alright you may come and identify them...there have been 6 fatalities so far...many of the bodies were to coverd in blood..but i think the doctor has cleaned them up by now...you can come and identify them..the only way we could even reach you was by a mr.bajaj's credit card...there still finding al the other id's....

Prem enterd the room...mukti tightly holding his arm...the nurse slowly lifted the white blanked....
he fell down...bawling like a baby...as if some one had just taken everything away from him..and he knew he wasnt going to get it back...their on the trolly, laid his beutiful mom, laying there peacefully....the mom that loved him soo much..the mom that he had given soo much sorrow tooo....

prem: MA! im sorry MA ....dont goo away...dont give me such a big punishment....you can beat me up all you want..you can yell at me too...just dont leave mee!...he was crying histarically...holding mukti tight...
officer: Mr.Prem im sorry for your loss but you have to come and identify mr baja.. he is still clining on to life...his in critical condition....

They all walk to the thired floor...and the door opens and they see mr.bajaj unconsious...prem and mukti sit by him....
prem: dad....you'll be fine i promise..
just then mr.opens his eyes and says...
mr bajaj: p..re..m ...pr..omise..me th..at you'll...al..ways...keep..mu..ti...ha..pp..y?...
mutki looks up tears streamming down her face...
bajaj: m..uk..ti...ta..ke ..c.are..of ....our...grand ...kids..give..them..ext..ra lo..ve ..from..me and..prerna....and...ta..ke c..are...of. ..your....self...

prem and mukti: we promise dad we promise...
bajaj: tha.... 🤢
it was over...rishab and prerna bajaj..where gone...leaving there children alone.......

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2 months later....

BAJAJ house:
Pm's Room:

Prem: Mukti did you eat breakfast yet?
mukti: i'l eat....
prem: mukti dont lie to me....you have to take care of yourself...
mukti: I DONT WANT TO TAKE CARE OF MYSELF!
prem comes and huges her they both begine to sobb...
prem: mukti you love ma and dad dont you...
mukti: yess...i miss them soo much prem..why did they have too go?
prem: we..all have too...one day or another....but thats not the point...my point is that....you know what dad'd last words were...."keep mukti happy".....
they both cry even more....

jiya comes in...
jiya: puppa?...mamma..crying?
prem picks up jiya and kisses her..and wipes his tears..
prem: no princess papa's not crying...he turns to mukti..
prem: mukti if not for me then atleast stay happy for jiya...and our new little one..imagen how they feel seeing us cry all the time...
mukti: your right..she smiles (well trys too) no more crying..choti maa would be soo mad at us if we cryed anymore...no more....

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4 months later (heehhehe i keep on fast forwerding šŸ˜† )

PARTY:
It was a buisness party...celebrating bajaj group winning over another contract...prem was wearing a blakc suit with baby blue shirt, and had a medaline with the word "jiya" on it...mukti was looking pregnant as ever (8 months to be exact)but still pretty in a light blue sarri...

mukti: prem no drinking okeay...
prem: okeay.... šŸ¤”
mukti: dont roll your eyes at me....promise you wont drink
prem:promise....
mukti: swear it by jiya?!
prem: AWWW BASANTI why do you ALWAYS HAVE TO DO THAT! (thats what she does to make sure he dosent break the promise...and she always wins šŸ˜† )
prem: fine i swear on my jaan...jaan...
mukti smiles: good....

the party carried on soo many ladies all surrounded mukti..all too busy asking her about her prenacy....
lady 1: is it a girl or boy...
lady 2: what are you thinking of nameing it...
lady 3 :any comlications...
and blah...blah.....prem just got board and sat at their table while mukti was getting harassed....then a waiter comes up....

waiter: drink sir?
prem: no ...ummm but i'll have a fanta (hheheh in canada we have crush....my mom told me about the fanta.... šŸ˜† )
Prem drank it down...it tasted pretty good...then again he rarly drank pop....he had gottn used to milk...casue jiys always liked coppying him...so thats the only way shed drink her milk...
prem: waiter another please...
that went on till he was at his tenth...for some strange reason he felf woozy...and walked off he didnt know were.....

Mukti notices prem walking up the hotles stairs.....she wonders wheres he gone...after an hour..she gose to see where he is....
She slowly walks up the stairs..and see's a door open and hears the sound of prem talking.....

prem: no.....haha idont love her........... i love you.......hahaha jiya...new baby ? i dont care! PSHHHHH why should i? WHAT theree probly not even mine!

mukti ran down the stairs crying her eyes out........and drove home..and took jiya and held her daughter as she wept..and finally cried herself to sleep........

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It us morning...prem woke up with a huge headace...as if someone wass pounding him a gainst a wall.....he tried to remember what he did last night but could only reacal going to the party.....nothing after that....finally he realised he was sleeping on the couch.......opps he thought i must have done somthing stupied to be sleeping on the couch?.........
he walked up the stairs...he checked on jiya..she was sleeping in her room (mukti put her back in the middle of the night)...then he went into his room...he saw mukti sitting at the vanity...she looked soo angry...he wonderd what he had done.........

Mukti: probubly not yours...eyy?
prem: huh? šŸ˜•
mukti: DONT LIE TO ME...I HAVE HAD ENOUGH OF YOUR LIES!
prem: What happend?
Mukti: TELL ME TELL ME HOW LONG YOUVE BEEN CHEATING ON ME AND MY DOUGHTER!...HOW LONG HAVE YOU BEEN LYING TO US! ALL THOSE PROMISES ALL THOSE EMOTIONS MENT NOTHING TO YOU!
PREM: mukti WHAT haPPEND!?
MUKTI:OHHH SO NOW YOU DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPEND HUH? PREM WHY MEEE?....why did you have to ruin myyy life.....why ? was it because i loved you...thats why
(seriously guys she's crying as if it's the end of the world!)
Prem goes up to mukti and tries to touch her face..but she smacks is hand away..
mukti: KEEP OUR BLOODY HANDS AWAY FROM MEE AND MY KI....AHHHHHHHHH (hear come the labour pains)
even though mukti was still yelling and she really didnt want him to touch her...prem picked her up and took her to the hospital....

TO BE CONTIUED

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OK guys this is verrrry long..and you guys may think the storrys annoying...but any howw..i hoppe you enjoy it...i'll update sooon...AND REMEMBER TO POST YOU THOUGHTS 😃 ...and if you have and idea for the tile pleaseee lettt me know šŸ˜‰
Edited by reeha...k - 19 years ago

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