My 1st FanFic (PM) Updated Part 5 Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
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After readin people's fan fics i've decided to create my own!!(this is my 1st fan fic btw)

This fanfic is based on prem and mukti's love. It is jus after mukti's rape case, prem as relieased his love 4 mukti. He tells mukti how he feels about her but she rejects him thinkin dat she will be hurt again by prem.(sorrie for ny spelling mistakes)

Part 1

At the bajaj house, prem is sleeping in his room, prena enters!

prena- prem! wake up ur gonna be late 4 for work

prem- 5 more minz plz mother india!!!

prena- beta.. 2day is the big event u organised weeks ago. U must be at da office on time..

prem- oo damn!!! how could i forget.

He rushes out of bed takes a shower and gets ready. Meanwhile at the breakfast table prena is preparing da breakfast, rishab is reading the morning paper, tushar, sneha and mukti are in a deep conversation jus as prem enters and says...

prem- Goodmorning everybody!!

mukti looks up at prem and prems looks back at her. she has small tears in her eyes 😭 remembering all the gud and bad tymes she had with prem. prem on the other hand as a angry look on his face 😡 remembering the tyme wen mukti rejected his proposal infront of everyone!

Prem takes his seat at the table and has his breakfast. He's fished his breakfast and just as hes about to leave prena stops him and says....

prena- prem beta.. u and mukti work in da same office, its raining heavy outside so could u take mukti along with u.

prem- do i have 2 mother india...

mukti- chotima! its okay... i can take da bus

prena- no beta.. da weather isnt gud, so u have 2 go with prem and thats final

prem- fine il take her

mukti- okay il go

Mukti then remembers the tymes she spent driving with prem in his car and is lost in her thoughts just as prem yells rudly....

prem- eerrrr. ms basanti r u cuming or wat!!

mukti- yes UD im cuming!!

End of part one..

plz add sum comments and tell me if u lyke it or not!!

Edited by umz2k3 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8...continue soon!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its a great start to continue soon
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if you would like me to put this up in the prem sticky do let me knoow by pm and gimme the link 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its gr8 .. plz continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thats really gud plz continue 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks for da comments!! ok so erez da next part!

Part 2

Prem and mukti are driving to work. The dnt speak 2 each other for sumtime. Prem then decides 2 play sum musik!!

prem- o dis is my fav track!! 😃

mukti- UD plz turn it down, its to loud

Prem first thinks to himself "why should i lisen 2 dat basanti" but then he sees mukti is enoyed and decides 2 turn it down. They arrive at the office.. without sayin another word they both go to their cabins.

Mukti gets on with somework whereas prem is thinkin of what jus happend in da car.. Prem says to himself "why do i think about her so much she rejected me!! is it possible that i love her so much.. Nooo im UD i cnt love no one!

Prem gets himself buzy in organising the event. Him and mukti are watching the dance performers practising. Prem couldnt help but look at mukti throughout the whole practice session!!! He kept on sayin in his mind "she is so beautiful"!!

Prem then goes up 2 mukti and says...

prem- mukti you go home and get ready for the event, il sort out everytin here.

mukti- okay.. she leaves!!

At the bajaj house everyone is getting ready for the event. Meanwhile mukti arrives home and goes 2 her room.. When she enters she sees a bunch of beautiful red roses and a card on her bed.

She picks up the card and reads.. "Mukti u are a very sweet beautiful girl, your smart, funny and pretty. Mukti i am sorry for all da tymes i have hurt and betrayed u..💔 but now i ave releasied how much i love u! mukti u have changed me... u are my love and i cant live without u!! please forgive me and give me another chance!! Mother india once said dat love can never be wrong!!! Love from prem!!!! ❤️

Mukti had tears cuming from her eyes!! 😭

2 be continued!!

Add sum comments plz!! thnx
Edited by umz2k3 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww so chweet plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwww..so cute!!!! how nice of prem...plz continue soon..i cant wait..ur fan fic is amazing and awesome
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!! cho chweet!! 😆

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