My 1st FanFic (PM) Updated Part 5 Page 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thz shoo shweeet.. plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
it choo chweet! 😳
cont soon!
nice part!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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choo chweet
cont soon..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tht was totally awesome ......plzz continue s00n
Edited by Ashi91 - 19 years ago
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totally awesome, plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnkz ppl for all those comments.. i ave part 3 ready!! sorrie if i isnt gud im just writin as it cumz to me!!

Part 3

Everyone is at the event. Prem comes over to everyone (except mukti who isnt dere yet) and says...

prem- how are u all!!

Everyone replies back fine. 😊 Prem then shows all dem around. Prem the goes up 2 sneha and asks.....

prem- err sneha.. where's mukti!!

sneha- o' shes just on her way here now!

prem- okay

Prem thinks in his mind has she seen da flowers n da card!!

Mukti den arrives, but prem doesn't reliese. Mukti see's prem talking to sum clients and remembers what he had writen on da card.
Just den prem gets up and gives his speech on the new product their company is launching. His speech is a sucess and people start 2 enjoy da party.

Mukti den goes up to prem who is buzy talkin away and says...

mukti- err prem.. can i talk to u, its important

prem- yeh sure

They walk outside and mukti begins to say.........

mukti- prem, y did u send me those flowers and the card??

prem- err.. because.. because.. mukti i love u ❤️ !!!!

Mukti is speechless hearing this cuming out of prem's mouth

prem- i love u to bits!! i didnt reliese how much u mean to me until now... plz mukti giv me another chance!

mukti has tears in her eyes.....

mukti- no prem i can't trust u with my heart again! As much as i loved u i can't bere 2 go thru dat pain again.. Im scared dat u will hurt me again 💔

prem- mukti ive changed.. I wount hurt u again!! I love u now!!

mukti- nooo prem i don't trust u... I don't love u no more i just h8 u!!

prem- look into my eyes and say dat u dont love me!!!!

mukti couldnt do it.. She couldnt look him in his eyes!! Then wen she finally did she screamed out......

mukti- i love u.. I always did and alwayz will!! and they hug!!!

Mukti then says...

mukti- prem promise me dat u will never hurt me again!

prem- ofcourse i wount.. I love u and i can't bere 2 loose u!!

They make dere way back in just then mukti faints and falls into prem's arms..................

Mukti wakes up a sees prena, prem, rishab, tushar and sneha around her....

she asks wat happend.... prem replies

prem- u fainted, the doctor said he will explain 2 us da reason y u fainted wen u wake up!!!

The doctor then walks in and says 2 mukti..

doctor- mukti how r u feeling now??

mukti- much better now...

doctor- gud.. mukti congratulations u r going 2 be a mother... U r 3 months pregnant!!!

Mukti is shocked............ 😲

Add sum comments plz!! thnx n tell me if it gud or not!!!!!!!

Edited by umz2k3 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😊 Interesting, and very good continue please? 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow its so cool 😛 Plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey! how cum she is pregnant??? anyway plz continue soon..ur fanfic is so cool!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwww cool ff yaar and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon

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