Rishabh and Prerna Bajaj ff updated pg 22 - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks guys, i am so happy that u guys liked it. u know what i have been out of town for the weekend and still my family is here in atlanta with me. I won't be able to continue till tomorrow, and i have to think some dhassu dialogues for mr. bajaj yaar.

i will write more later, i gotta go. love yall

bajaj rocks 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks sooo much!! i mean i really wanted someone to write one n u did. its really goood! :D they are so cute together n they deserve a fan fic. i wrote one cuz i saw someone else had done one. mines okay, but urs is GREAT!! keep on writing. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Garv_Kumud_4eva

thanks guys, i am so happy that u guys liked it. u know what i have been out of town for the weekend and still my family is here in atlanta with me. I won't be able to continue till tomorrow, and i have to think some dhassu dialogues for mr. bajaj yaar.

i will write more later, i gotta go. love yall

bajaj rocks 😊



Take your time buddy,
but dont take too long!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Prerna runs out without saying anything because she doesn't want to cause him anymore pain. Basu is just standing there, looking angrily at Bajaj. Bajaj's eyes are shut with tears coming out of them. Rishabh knows he has hurt his Prerna but he feels that his comment was justified because of the last words Prerna said to Anurag before going to jail.

Anurag just leaves the room too, to comfort Prerna, with the usual mein tumhare saath hoon, and u didn't do anything wrong.

Prerna thinks that her Rishabh's attitude was right, because she didn't tell him the truth, and Anurag on the other hand did. She thinks that if she would have told him the truth then he wouldn't have misunderstood her. But she is thinking the wrong thing coz Rishabh is mad at her for a totally different reason.

The doctor asks Prerna to take good care of Rishabh, who is now sleeping.

Prerna: Dr. he is my life, and I will take care of him, even if he hates it.

Doctor was confused, he says well then he is all yours, we are gonna discharge him soon as he recovers, about 2-3 days.

The doctor starts walking away.

Then suddenly there is this tall, handsome guy that walks into the hallway, asking "where is my dad"

The doctor asks who is your dad

Dr: Dekhiye yahaan bahut saare dads hain, aapke dad kaun hai?

Kunal: Mr. Rishabh Bajaj.

Dr: Hello Mr. Bajaj, don't worry your dad is out of danger now, he is in the first room on your right.

K: Thank you doctor! Can I go see him

Dr: Of course, go right in.

Kunal gives a sigh of relief and goes running to the door.

He shakes his hand with the doctor, just like a gentleman.

Apparently Prerna and Anurag did not hear the conversation between the doctor and Kunal. They just see him go in to Rishabh's room and are surprised to see him, as they have never seen him in their life.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ooh! i musta died n gone to heaven without knowing cuz the story is mindblowing!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Kunal just goes and sees his father sleeping peacefully and doesn't want to bother him, he just touches his hand and smiles, he is about to get up and leave when he sees Anurag and Prerna staring at him like he has done a crime.

A: Tum kaun ho?

K: Mein, kaun hoon? Kunal, the name is Kunal Rishabh Bajaj.

Anurag and Prerna are shocked.

A: Yeh kya bukwaas kar rahe ho.

K: Excuse me, hum bahar jaakar baat karte hai, let my dad rest.

Kunal just walks out, he is just like his dad, the same style the same looks, the same personality. He is just rocking. He doesn't say much but conveys a lot.

Anurag and Prerna follow him, Prerna just stares at him.

K: Mr. Basu, I would like to thank you for making sure the operation goes through, by doing all the formalities, I appreciate it, a little delay would have put my father in further danger and my father is my life.

A: Mr. Bajaj is not your father. Yeh hum tumhe pehli baar mill rahe hai, yeh dhoka dena bandh karo.

Kunal just walks to Prerna, and takes her blessings. They both look into each other's eyes. She could feel it that he was telling her the truth. Tears run out of Kunal's eyes as he sees his mother for the first time.

K: Mom, aap ne mujhe pehchaana nahin?

Prerna is dumb-founded she is standing in front of her son, he is the symbol of her and Rishabh's love, Kasak's twin brother.

She could immediately recognize him, but thought it too good to be true, she waited before criticizing him, she could feel him as a part of her. She touches his face, and she finally gives in. She hugs him tight and they both cry.

Anurag stands there confused but happy.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Prerna is not able to control her happiness. She goes down memory lane and recollects the fact that when she was in labor, the doctor had told Rishabh and prerna that they were gonna have twins, and they were absolutely excited, that they are gonna have twins. But the doctor declared one to be dead at child birth itself. Obviously the parents were devastated but at the same time happy that the other child is absolutely healthy.

Prerna is confused as to how, this could be true, she is happier than ever but at the same time how could her son, the one she lost during child birth be alive today. Then all of a sudden she thinks that this is only Rishabh's son and not hers. The only reason she can believe that he is Rishabh's son is because he is a carbon copy of him. She is devastated now she ends up misunderstanding Rishabh. All of a sudden she removes the thought off her mind that he is her blood.

She suddenly lets go of him.

P: Tum mere bete nahin ho sakte. Meine mere bacche ko 25 saal pehle hee kho diya tha. I lost him at child birth.

Kunal doesn't say anything, coz he doesn't want to justify himself because he knows that his mother is going through a lot, and he has his entire life to prove himself. He just keeps quiet and walks away from there. He goes to talk to the doctor about his father. Kunal is hurt that his mother, failed to recognize him.

Prerna thinks that Rishabh has betrayedher.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i guess its not good enough. i wanted some kind of a twist. so i went ahead, i know this part wasn't that gr8
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Heyyyy Sammie!! It was grrrrrreat yaar,loved this twist- really looking froward to the way you are going to carry this ahead!

Keep on rocking!
:)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sammie,at last itne wait ke baad.u gave such a rocking story,its awsome,pls cont,and its different totally,wow twin kids of bp,how cute,pls cont

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