Rishabh and Prerna Bajaj ff updated pg 22 - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
Hahah relax Chandu,
She must be having something more important to deal with:)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow mind-blowing twist! Never thought abt this...that kasak could be hving a twin sibbling. Wow u shud be writing for serials...u r really good at soap fiction writing 👏

Keep it up! We want the next part! LOL. i think we all hv become fans of ur story :)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Kunal Rishabh Bajaj just goes to talk to the doctor about his father's health.

K: Excuse me, doc, can I come in?
Dr: Sure Mr. Bajaj, have a seat.
K: Thank u.
Dr: Are u here, to ask about ur father?
K: Yea, is he alright now?
Dr: Yes, he is fine, don't worry.
K: Then why isn't he conscious?
Dr: He is out of danger, he is just sleeping, right now he just needs to relax.
K: Great, I wasn't aware of the fact that he is …
Dr: Well, it is all thanks to your mother, Mrs. Prerna Bajaj, if it wasn't for her… the bottom line is your parents truly love each other.
K: yea, they do
- Kunal thinks to himself, that I have to clear the misunderstandings between mom and dad, because of me, mom is judging dad.

Kunal just thanks the doctor and leaves his office. The doctor said that he can take him home by tomorrow morning. Kunal goes to his father's ward and sits beside him. He touches his father's hand and then Rishabh feels the warm and caring touch and wakes up by slowing opening his eyes. He first looks at his son's hand on his, and then at his face. He then gives him a cute smile. Kunal smiles back and is much relieved now.

K: so, dad just chillin haan?
R: yea, just chillin. Alone beta?
K: no, mom was here.
R: I know.
K: so u are not gonna let her explain, not gonna give her a chance?
R: I will give her a chance, I have been giving her a chance, but she doesn't give me a chance.

Suddenly Prerna, who has been listening to the conversation, walks in, like her usual angry woman, and

P: yeh kya chance ki baat kar rahe hai aap Mr. Bajaj. Aap mujhe chance, dete aaye hai?

R: Prerna mujhe ab iss baareme baat nahin karni hai.

P: Baat karni hogi Mr. Bajaj, aisa kya kiya meine joh har baar aap mujhe dhoka dete hai.

Kunal is just sitting there, watching his parents fight, he kinda finds it amusing, and chooses not to interrupt.

R: tum please, dhoka dene ki baat mat karo, tumhare moo se acha nahin lagta.

P: Kisse diya hai meine dhoka? Mr. Bajaj pehle Tanisha aur ab yeh?

She points to Kunal.

P: Yeh, jo apne aap ko aapka beta kehta hai, aapka beta hai yeh koi aasani se keh sakta hai, kyunki woh bilkul aap par gaya hai, wohi chehra, woh sab kuch, lekin yeh mera beta nahin hai. Ab kiske saat milkar aap ne mujhe yeh dhoka diya.

Prerna sees her husband lieing on the bed, with his forehead bleeding, she is shocked, she realizes that she is causing pain to the love of her life, she runs to him and hugs him tight, and lays her forehead on his chest.

P: Kyun kiya aisa mere saath, Mr. Bajaj?

Rishabh sees his Prerna crying and then gets a bit tear eyed too, he takes her in his arms and then slowly lifts her face up.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
Too good.....yaar I wish someone like Kunal really comes in KZK 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
manasi u r the only one reading, thanks yaar. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
this is gud yaar people make such gud fanfics
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
HEyy Sammie,
Just because we all are a lot of lazy people, doesnt mean we arent reading;) LOL~ I wish Ronit himself plays Kunal and Rishabh both in kzk-

ROCKING stuff huh!! Keep it rolling:)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow rocking story. even i want ronit to play both the roles. gr8 going, plz post the next part 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
abey .. continue .. this is awsum
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey sammie this is Rocking stuff 👏 ...plzzzz continue soon.

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