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wow its really wonderfull $gr8 plz continue sooon

wow its fantasticc cont soon 😉

thx guys for all those comments...

part eleven...

( mukti goes to meet prena)
mukti: hi choti maa!!
prena:hi mukti!! ab mujhe choti ma nahi ma kehena padega...
mukti:(confused) kya matlab??
prena: ha!! prem ne mujhe sab bata diya hai...humne tumhara baba se baat ki thi...and he says ok...we also have fixed the date...

( listening this mukti blushes and runs upstaris to sneha's room)
sneha: congratzz mukti!!! ab to tumhare promotion hogaye...
mukti:wat do u mean??
sneha: ha!! ha!!jyada smart hone ki koshish maat karna...tum ek dost se babhi ban gaye ho...
mukti: shut up!! so, how was dev??
sneha: he was ok ( tuns around and smiles)
mukti:ok yaa excellent..
sneha: he was good .not only good he's gr8..
mukti: to baat fix kardo kya...
sneha: chup!!( blushes and walkes out the room)

(next day at mukti's house)
mukti: aray!! dev...subhay subhay kaise aaya pade..
dev:bas tumse milne aaya..
mukti:so, how was ur day yesterday with sneha?
dev:it was gr8...she is gr8 gal...
mukti:really?(and smiles)
dev:wat u laughing at??? ( he understood wat mukti was thinking) oh!!!u..it's nothing like that...
mukti:really???nothing like that and runs...
dev runs after her....

( at day time)
mukti is at home reading at some magazines....when she gets a call at her cell phone...
mukti: hi!!!prem...
prem:hi !! basanti...wat u doing???
mukti: reading sum magazines...
prem: it's so nice for u....but for me i have to work.....i really miss u..
mukti: me to...why don't u take a couple of days off...
prem:that's a gr8 ides...how abt we both go away next week...on our own....
mukti:sounds gr8..

sumone calls prem...his staff...
prem: mukti...i gotta go..i m a very important meeting...
mukti:mujhe ve jyada...
prem: nahi ...tumse badi important chizz kuch nahi hai...u r my life..
mukti: i was just kidding...go don't be late for ur meeting...
prem: c u in the evening...bye..luv u...
mukti: luv u too...

(in the evening)
prem comes to meet mukti....
mukti: wat happened???u look tired (trying to hug him)
prem: i have to go usa next week...cos of a project..i m really sorry abt the holiday we were going..
mukti: it's ok..i totally understand...kab jaoge...
prem: kal...
mukti is sad...

next day...in the airport..it's prem's flight...
prem: bye mukti....take care..me jatahu..
mukti: (holding his hand...)prem maine tumhe kitnibaar kaha hai....kabhi "me jatahu " nahi kahene ka liya...hamesha " me jakar aata hu" kehe ne keliya...( and hugs him)
prem: ok baba...sorry..me jakar atta hu...( and leaves)

mukti reaches her home...when she receives a call...she is shocked...her phones falls from her hand....

who is the person that called mukti????wat did she find???find out in next part...

guys..plzz comment...feel free to critisize.... 😛

very nice- 👏
but hope its not that bhaiya's filght crashed or smething 😕

its gr8 plz continue 😊 😊 soon

thx huys forthose comments...hope u like this part...

part 12
it was prena who called mukti. she told her that prem's flight was crashed and is in hospital right now...mukti is total shocked...the phone she was holding fell frm her hands...tears was rolling down her cheeks as well as she hurriedly ran for hospital...

in hospital...

prena, mr.bajaj,sneha,dev,tushar,doris,anu and sam r waiting....( mukti comes there ...she is out of breath)
mukti:choti maa...kaise hai prem...prem thik to hai na...koi mujhe batao na..
prena:(trying to calm her down) mukti, relax...doctor ne kuch nahi bataye ab tak...
(after sometime)mukti has cooled down...doctor comes out..evryone r curious to know wat happened..
prena: doctor...prem kaisa hai..yo thik to hai na...
doctor: i'm sorry...mrs.bajaj...(pause)we tried a lot but..(pause)..prem's brain doesn't respond us...
evryone r shocked
prena: kya? app ne thikse to check kiya...plzz doctor..kuch kizye...( and starts crying)
mr.bajaj: prena, samhalo appne appko....
doctor: he is in coma..(and leaves)

mukti can't believe wat doctor said right now...she slowly steps backs and sits on a chair...slowly tears rolls down...she remembers her time with prem...her and his good time together...(kabhi naa sukkon's sad version plays slowly as she remembers her moments....
prena calms her down herself...anu is sad and so is bajaj...sneha,tushar,dorris ,dev r total shocked....
mukti suddenly stand up..she goes out of the hospital..prena tries to follow her to check if she is alright after all wat happend but mr.bajaj stops her...

mukti is in the garden...she is remembering her moments with prem...how he was happy that they were getting married soon.... their good time...as well as her eyes is full of tears...sneha and dev come to see mukti...both of them come near her...sneha tries to touch her but can't ..so, takes her hand back...she turns toward dev and he gives her a "it's ok " nod....
sneha: (wiping her tears) mukti!!!yaha tum kya kar rahe ho??? agar prem ko pata chala ke tum ro rahi hu to yo hum sab ko datega..(laughing...tring to make mukti too)yo appne basanti ko aaise nahi dekh sakta..(trying to make mukti talk but mukti doesn't say a word....)

prena takes her home...mukti is just like a statue..she doesn't say anything, she doesn't eat anything...alll she does is look at prem's picture and cry...prena is really worried seeing mukti like this but she can't do anything...

that's all for today...hope u liked it...plzz comment and feel free to critisize ...

very good i hope prem comes back soon 😭

oh come don't keep us in suspense 😉 great job 👏

thxx 4 those comments....hope u like this part

part 13

it's been a week...prem is still in hospital...mukti is lot better now..she is talking instead of crying all day..that day she decides to visit prem....
mukti:choti maa, i m going to hospital...
prena: ok..beta..take care...
mukti: i will..

in hospital
mukti sees prem through window...she still can't believe that her prem was lying there with all the machines....she goes in side....she grabs his hand slowly...
mukti: (whispering )prem,....i love u a lot...don't leave me and go....
tears r rolling down her cheeks...when one drop of her tears drops on prem's hand...while mukti is hugging prem...suddenly mukti feel something moving...it was prem ...he was moving...but mukti got scared ...she immediately called the doctor...the nurse came hurriedly and so did the doctor..
doctor: omg...it's miracle...
mukti: (still confused)wat??wat happened doctor...( turns toward prem and sees prem opening eyes...)
she still can't believed prem was ok...he was fine....she hugged him really tightly..her eyes was full of tears of joy and she was laughing at the same time...
doctors and nurses leave..
mukti: prem...tum thik hogaya...and starts crying...
prem: basanti ,,,tum vi na..main thik ho gaya aur tum rorahi ho...kya tum khus nahi ho ke main thik ho gaya...(sarcastically...)
mukti: stop joking... i m really happy...wait..i will call choti ma...
prem: don't call her right now...if she will come she will start crying as well...
mukti: ye she will,,, but i have to inform her..
prem: ok as u wish....

on the phone...
mukti calls prena..
prena: hello..
mukti: hello..chottima...app abhi hospital aajaeye...
prena: (worried)kya prem thik to hain na???
mukti: hain choti ma...prem is fine...aur uski hosh aagaya hain..
prena: wat???(happilly..)main abhi aarahi hu...

after sometime...prena as well all the family come to meet prem..prena hugs...prem..prem is so, happy to see his all family happy...mukti is beside prem...
prem: thx mukti..
mukti: for what???
prem: for teaching me wat families r,wat love is and wat relations r..
mukti: it's ok....

after a week..prem is discharged.....mukti is taking full care of prem...his medication...food...and evrything...within a month prem is totally fine..and is going to office....

one day..prena was in the living room..when sneha comes in...
sneha: mama, mujhe appse kuch kehena hai..
prena: kya baat hai..batana..
sneha: woh...main or dev...( pause)
prena understands..
prena: tu aur dev ek dusre to pasand karte ho...
sneha: hai ma...(blushes)app papa ko batado na..
prena: thik hai, main mr.bajaj se bath karti hu...
sneha: thx mom...

prena and mr.bajaj conversation..
prena: mr.bajaj , mujhe appse kuch kehena hai..
mr.bajaj:kaho na...
prena: woo..sneha aur dev ek dusre ko pasand karta hai...
mr.bajaj: that's gr8..i m really happy that aur daughter is moving on....how abt prem mukti aur dev sneha ki ek hi din shaddi karwadi
prena: that's gr8...


prena tell abt marriage to evryone...and evryone r ok...prem is really excited...they call the pandit ji...and he tells that next month is gr8 time....


evryone r happy and r preparing for the day....the day was finnally here...bajaj house was fully decorated....one side there was prem and mukti's wedding while the other side there was sneha and dev's...prena was really happy seeing her child getting married happy......

that's all guys....next time will be the last time....cos i m ending this fanfic....it will take 3 yrs old leap....hope u like this part...plzz comment + fell free to critisize...

wow its really gud!its a shame its gonna end!!