fanfic (part 14) completed.... - Page 2

👏 .....plz cont....it waz gr8!

thx...evry one..

recap: komolika comes to the wedding....

part 5

debo requestes komolika to stay with them for some days...and she aggres.even mr'bajaj can't say nothing cos it's for debo and prem...thinking that prem will be upset if they don't respect his aunty...

komolika( with an evil smile): thx to u mr'bajaj 4 making my plans more easier.jab insan hi sap(snake)ko indar lyatahe to use dasne ke liye assaan hoga....

then she goes to her room....
meanwhile on basu house....anu is getting ready to go to his office.....he leaves his files so, sam gets it and gives it to him.....he kisses her in her cheeks and leaves for office...sam waves and blushes as mihini wz looking frm the window......

as time goes on debo and komolika have benn trying different plans but their plan alwayz fails.....prena has also finished her punishment....all of the family r gone to bring prena.....debo and komolika come to know abt this...

debo: ab to prena aakar hamara sab plan kattam kardege yo.. ab hum kya karenge...

km:yo to he...me prena ko barso se jante ho...yo apne parivar ko bachane keliya kuch be karegi chaye use apne jyyan be dena ho....

debo: after thinking a lot.....agar zindagi ki sabse badi ceez katam karde to kya hoga...

komolika: yo insan nahi rege paye gi....( then she smiles) debo ....u r such a nice planner..akhir beti kiski ho( not exactly beti but kind of as she is her aunty)prena ko sabse important ceez uske family he agr humne usko uske family ko khattam kardiya to yo ji nahi paye gi.....uske family ke badle me, hum uske sara doulet magenge...

hahahahahahahahah( both laughhss)
but while they wer having this conversation prem was listening and now he noes all about debo.... suddenly when prem was tryiing to run he pushes a flower pot by mistakes...

debo and komolika comes out and see it was prem....
komolika: agar humne usko chhod diya to yo sabko bata dega....hume isse marna hoga.. ( and turns to debo)
debo: u r right and gives an evil smile....

👏 👏 rly gd...will mukti be in dis fanfic?

👏 👏 really gud plz cont sooon!!!!

thx for the comment
recap: komolika and debo plans to kill prem as he noes their plann...

prem runs and comes downstairs....by the time he reaches their prena r already back......prem hurriedly tells all abt debo and her plans to destroy basu and bajaj family.... debo is behind them...she tries to run but prena goes to her ans slaps her like she slaped apo*na when she knew that it was apo*na who tried to create misunderstanding btween prem and her....

prena: tumme kya laga ..ke me tughe aise hi mere parivar to totne dunge......nahi..tum mujhe nahi jante .....me apne parivar ko bachane ke liya me kuch be karonge.....me tum jaise nahi ho jo appne parivar ko bigadte he.....now GET OUT !!!!!!!!

then she turns around and hugs prem.....
outside bajaj house...
debo: prena or prem....mujse tum logo ne panga leke bohot badi galti ki hai.....bohot pach taouge tum ...... 😡

recap: debo is kicked out of the house

part six

time goes on...prem looks for mukti a lot......evry day he searches her...but comes back home with a frown in his face.......seeing prem like this prena is really sad cos she can't do nothing....

one day prem was driving....debo saw him...she was driving as well...she purposely tries to push prem as to take her revenge.....
she drives roughly so that prem has an accident......
prem shouts: hey !!! you...can't u drive properly...someone is gonna get hurt
debo:( inside her mind) that's what i want...u to get hurt....

suddendly there is a truck coming frm other way....prem tries to stop the car but he can't.......then...the truck hits prem's car...his car falls down frm the big cliff and explodes......but debo doesn't get hurt ....she gets out frm the car to see if prem was dead or not...but sees prem stuck there IN A BIG ROCKK.....
prem: debo !!! plz help me ...plzzzzz
debo: tumme kya lagga ke mein tum or tumhare parivar ko aasaihi janne dungi...nahi....u all will pay for that....aor mein tummne maddat nahi karunge kyunki kal tumne mera maddat nahi kiya......GOODBYE PREM!!!!
AND SHE LEAVES.....
PREM SHOUTS AND SHOUTS FOR HELP.........HE IS TIRED BUT HOLDS THE ROCK HARLDLY...HE LOOKS DOWN BUT IS SCARED SO HE CLOSES HIS EYES..........HE STILL SHOUTS FOR HELP....SUDDENDLY HE FEELS SOMTHING....SOMEONE HOLDING HIS HAND.......AND TRYING TO PULL HIM....


HEY !!!!! I NEED UR COMMENT AND UR FEEDBACK
AND WHO IS THE PERSON WHO IS TRYING TO HELP PREM????????

wow tht was gr8 plz count soon 👏

wow that was really gud!continue sn!
btw i think its mukti helping him!!

thx for the comments...i will soon update...

part seven

Prem is pulled by someone else. He doesn't knoe who it is? he is safe now…he cleans his clothes and looks up at the person who saved him…he is shocked to see that person…it is none other than our sweet mukti….even she didn't know it was whom she was trying to save…

they both look at each other's eyes…( kabhi na sukkon aaya in the background)… there is a silence between them….they cn only see each other in the whole world…..words can't express what they r saying. Suddenly prem breaks the silence...
Prem: thanks…muk…
Mukti: it's ok…

Saying this she turns around. Prem hurriedly holds her hands….( so now prem is facing mukti's back) and says::::::: mukti,plzzzzzz I have waited long enough….now don't make me wait long…please…I know I have hurt u a lot in past…and I have realised my mistakes….plzzz mukti plz come back to my life…

Mukti in the other side is full of tears…but she suddenly gets her hand off from prem's hand (he was holding her) and drives away….

prem is left there with eyes full of tears…..he couldn't do nothing other than stare mukti going away…


Next time: prem goes to trouble mukti….
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and how come i got about 600 views and only 35 replies....plzzz guys i need ur replies saying my weakness ...so that i cn make it better...