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part 14
3 yrs old later

we see a house...with a loud music...and a boy dancing....downstairs...a woman reading magazine....suddendly she shouts..
woman: partik, turn off the stereo....( then she removes the magazine....it's none other than mukti....she was wearing a red saree looking as beautiful as ever...)
mukti:pratik....turn off the stereo...omg..this boy never listens to me...

she goes upstairs....opens the door and turns off the stereo...we see a boy dancing...abt 3 yrs old..he turns aroung...he had dressed like this

mukti: pratik...how many times have i told u not to listen loud music...( well..pratik is prem's and mukti's son)
pratik: mom!!! that's the kind of music u listen today...
mukti: oh really...and where's ur dad..

suddendly prem comes there....
prem: did anyone call me???and hugging mukti...
mukti: prem, i have asked pratik many times not to listen this kind of loud song...he never obeys me..
pratik: comon..dad...say mom that that's the music u listen to in today's generation..
prem: (supporting pratik) ye mukti....that the way u listen to songs....loud..
mukti: (staring at prem...)what???did u say prem...
prem: nothing...pratik u sud obey ur mum...she is right..and winks at him...
pratik...( he understands that prem was only telling him off in front of mukti) ok dad....i will not listen to loud music again..
mukti: good...and leaves...

pratik: mum's a fool...she didn't understand...and gives hi5 to prem..

mukti's comes again..
mukti: did anyone call me fool????and stares at pratik..
u r grounded for a week...no music...no tv...and no..games...and smiles at him...
while pratik is sad....prem laughs at pratik cos he got punishment...
pratik: mum..this is not fair...dad was the one who was saying ur fool...
prem: no..i never..
mukti: i have got a even more better punishment..u will help me cook dinner today...as chotimaa and sneha r coming for dinner...

later that evening...we see prem cutting onions and crying...mukti comes there and teases him..
mukti: prem...i never knew that u wud cry..
prem: i m not crying..
mukti: so, what is this tears in ur eyes..
prem: it's cos of this stupid onions...
mukti: now....don't blame the onions...
prem gets frustated..and sees a packet of flour there...he grabs the flour and goes towards
mukti: prem..ruko..maine kaha na ruko..i have just showered..plzz don't..
b4 she cud say nything..prem puts all the flour ove mukti and starts laughing....

mukti showeres ...and after sometime...prena...mr.bajaj, sneha, dev comes...sneha has a daughter called sweta...
they talk...and after sometime...they all leave...
mukti goes to pratik's room...she sees him asleep...so, she kisses him...and says"goodnight"
she goes to her romm...changes and see comes out of the bathroom and suddenly prem grabs her by her waist...
mukti: prem, chodo mujshe...
prem: kya mushe kal vi tumhe kitchen me help karna padega...cos i had a gr8 time with u today...
mukti: really..if u did then u cn help me alwayz....
and then they go to bed...prem kisses mukti in her forehead...and then they go to sleep...holding each other...

and that's how my fanfic ends...hope u liked it..plzz comment and feel free to critisize... 😉

please count soon its really good 👏 👏

hey morlen...i have finished this fanfic...so, i can't continue more...

luved, it was beautiful, hope you write many more fanfix as these!!!!! muah*

it waz awsome kajal! 👏 ...really good an sweet 😳