fanfic (part 14) completed....

well,,i m new here but i thought of writing a fanfic....hoping that u will appreciate..

my story begins after leap year...   ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;   ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;   ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;   ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;   ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;   ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;

many things have changed as time went on...prem forgot abt mukti and has fallen for debo..😡 anu is happy with his married life while mr.bajaj is sad abt is wife and is totally sick...so tushhar and prem r looking after the business....

one morning...debo gets a call from that woman......

debo: hello

woman:hello have done the work i asked u to do.

debo: yes..but there has been some changesss

woman:wat ? wat kind of changes. it better be a nice change.

debo: actually when sharad tried to kill .......( she tell all the story that happened that night)

woman: wat? wat a good news...hum chotti billi ko pasana chahate the par uske badle bade mil gaya.....ab to humhari kaam ashhan se hojaye gi...aur sharad???

debo: uske phikar mat karye....yo jail pohoch cuka hai...

woman: me ajj bohot kush hoo..i want to meet u...meet me at 12:00 pm at hotel babylon.

( after that conversation ,debo goes to prem's office to meet him....she says him that she is going 4 shopping so she might b late..at 12:00 she goes to hotel and at the room where that woman is...)

debo:hello....hello aunty...

woman:hello....(when she says that hers lips are focused then her eyes then her hand rolling her hair while there is a backgroung .... din ta nak din...din ta nak din.........then she turns around ...she is none other than komolika......) hello debo....

then she goes and hug debo .....they both give an evil smile.............

plzzzzzz tell me how it is.........if u think it is nice then i will continue....😉

wow plz conti soon i like ur fan fic so carry on 👏

k fanfic do count soon
its rly gd

cool fanfic yaar do continue it

thx evry one........ 😛
recap: debo and komolika hug each other and give an evil smile....

debo returns home really late...when she reaches home she sees prem on the living room.
prem:(worried) where were u?
debo: oh!!! 😕 i..i was with my frend..(she was with komolika all day planning their plans to destroy bajaj and basu)
prem:ok..u look worried . r u ok?
debo:ye...ye..i m fine..i m just tired ..that's all. i think we should go to bed now..
prem:ye...goodnight.
debo:goodnight.


next day at basu house mohini is talking abt prem's marriage with debo...evryone is happy .bajaj family r in the basu house as well..debo acts like being shy and runs to the other room.....she looks around and calls komolika.
komolika:hello
debo:hello aunty ..i hav got a news for u....they have fixed our marriage...we will son get married and all property will be ours...
komolika: gr8 news...i m quite busy now..i will call u later..


at bajaj house ....bajaj is at his room..dinking..he is sad cos he remembers him getting married to prena and now she is not there.he looks at her painting and says:
why?why prena?why did u leave me alone.....u promised me that u will neva leave me alone.....why prena...why...and he falls downn.. 😭 ( sad version of kya pyarr karoge is played).....

more next time.........plz do comment.....

thx 4 the comment.....
recap: bajaj fall down saying why? why prena? why did u leave me alone....

evry one is excited abt prem and debo is excited but prem is not....he remembers mukti and his time together...just then debo enters
( in prem's office)
prem is leaving for meeting..
debo:prem ..i need ur signature here..( giving hima file....oh no!! it's not a file it's a power of uterny which allows all the property to be of debo and komolika...)
prem:not now..i m going for a meeting .i will do it after i come back...
debo: it's ok...if u don't sign it's not my loss it's urs... (😳 says trying to act innocent)
prem: alright then...go on..give it to me...where do i have to sign..
debo shows where to sign
when prem was going to sign,, really strong wind blows and all the paper drops and prem can't sign 😆 😆
prem: ok,,,see ..get the papers ready..i will sign when i come back...i m already late...

then prem leaves for meeting

debo(angryly😡) : how long will u run away??? one day all this property is gonna be mine......hahaaha(smiles evilly)

that's all 4 now...plz do comment... 😉

plz guys ....i need ur comment...

its really nice!!do cont dooon.!!

recap: debo gives an evil smile...
part 4
finally it's the day of prem and debo's marriage.evryone r happy except prem cos he misses mukti.while mr.bajaj is also sad cos it's the happy occasion and prena is not there....time goes on and prem and debo gets married....evry one r dancing ..prem has a fake smile infront of his family but deep down he is really sad...
seeing prem sad...sneha comes to prem and says....
sneha: prem,,,,r u happy?
prem:ye....i m .why shouldn't i be?
sneha knows prem is lieing cos he has tears in his eyes but doesn't say anything....
suddenly debo makes an announcement...
i have got a surprise for u evryone....i want u to meet my aunty.....aunty !!plz come in.(it's komolika din ta nak din in the background) [evryone r surprised.....but doesn't say anything cos they don't want another drama to happend in special occasion...]
then komolika goes to talk to mr'bajaj,mr'basu.
komolika: i noe u r surprise to see me here.but believe me ,i m not that komolika who was behind ur property.i m here just for my debo...
mr'bajaj and mr'basu looks at each other and says
both: ye ....

plz do comment

hey that was really gud 👏 👏 👏
keep up the gud work 😊 👏 😊