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hey every1 i am gogin to start my fan fic today just ell me how u like it.

I m gonna start when mukti leaves frm the bajaj house bcz she saw prem sleeping wit debbonita and she went to canada .she bcomes a fashion designer now who is really famouse and nothing iportant to her but her work. on the other side in india prem got to noe debonita's real face bcz Bajaj heard her talkin on the phone to some1 but debbonita ddint told any1 that who was the person she was talin to . every1 got to nnoe dat prem didnt slept woth debbo ji. and asusal everyboday ask his forgiveness😆. prem and his family lookin for mukti but they dnont knoe where she is. prem is missin mukti and having some nice flashbacks of mukti and him having good time. he is lyin on his bed and thinkin bout her then suddenly his mom comes in

Prerna: prem woh.....

be4 prerna says anything prem: mom aap k kitni baar kaha ki nock kar ke aao. aap samjhti yun nahi

prerna: woh sorry beta actually tumhare liye ek urgent call hai mr. desai ka canada se. tum ja ke woh call recive karo.

prem takes the call

prem: heloo, yes, mr. desai. itni subhe subhe phone kyu kiya.

Mr. Desai: prem sir yahann ke dealers mein problem aa gayi hai keh rahen ke hamaramaterial theek nahin.aur woh apse baat karna chate hain. yahaan tak ki investor bhi unki batton mein aa gaye hain aur invest karne ko mana kar rahein hain.

Prem: wat the humph, yeh log bhi naa. bass, to aap kya chate hain ki main wahaan pe akar unse milun no, just for a minor problem main wahaan nahin aoonga😡{getin angry and hung up the phone}

Suddenly he relises that behind him mr bajaj is listing to his conversation.

Mr. bajaj: prem main yeh kyaa dekh rahan hoon tumne aaj tak kam ke saat koi compermise nahin kiya. ek minor si preblem ho to jaan laga dete ho us door karne main to phir aaj itni badi problem hai. kyoun nhi solve kar rahe isko?

Prem: daddy cool main aaj kal bhut bizzy rehtan hoon aur mujhse yeh trvlein nahi hogi plz try to undrsatn....

b4 prem could say anything

mr. bajaj : dejho beta tumhe wahan janna hog main e bhi bahanna nahin sunnugaan. yeh buzziness and isme yeh sabnahin chalta. gee jzzn lgani padti hai.

prem: okokokookokokok daddy cool. i will go. plz ab aap mother india ke tarahn bhashan mat shuru kariye.{ nd left frm there}

that's the first part tell me how u like it i ope u njoy😳😆

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khushi

Wow!Gr8 fan-fic pls continue soon!

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great yaar!!!
love the comedy!!!!!!
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cool fanfic yaar do continue it

cool!
i really liked the first part!
great start!
continue soon!
cant wait for the next part!

Yeah please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

dat was guddd. canada huh nice . i should make sure dat mukti's not livin on my AVE hahaha 😆 keep it up

thanx for those all comments. i hope u enjoy it till the end.
precap: mukti is in canada and prem had to go to canada for some bussiness problem
part 2
prem: is packing his stuff and suddenly he finds a pictures of mukti and him at the party of panchmeshwar. he is looking atpic and memorizing the old memories with mukti. and it stop when kookie comes in. he hides the pi.
kuki: prem jaldi karo nahi to flight miss ho jayegi.
prem puts the pic in his laugage and brings it down. sownstaris prerna.sneha and mr. bajaj are waiting for him.
prerna: prem sab paking ho gayi.
prem:{with a cool smile n his face} yep. u know me right. i am always ready for everything.
prerna: prem beta apna khyal rakhna{ and a tear fall frm her eye and she hugs prem}
prem: ab plz yeh rona dhona mat shuru karo. plz
{he huggs sneha and waves hand to every1 and ask mr. bajaj who is coming to the airport with him to come}
in the way they r discussing some bussiness matters and they reaches at the airport. prem hugs him and waves his hand to him and leve to the checkin are.

scene 2:
prem is in the the airplan set on his seat and working on his laptop and he start to yawn. suddenly he saw this gurl who just look like mukti frm the back. prem was stunned for a second then he stood up and walk toward her slowly with lots of questions on his mind, but when he reaches close to the gurl it was some1 else.prem comes back to his seat and close his eys. he oes to sleep while thinkin about m,ukti. after some time, he hears the annoucment that the plane has reched in canada. evry1 started to gather thier stuff and get of the plz. when prem comes out frm the airport he saw ta guy is holding his name board and looking evry where of him. prem waves his hand at him and the took his stuff and show him the way to the car. on the way to a hotel prem recived a call frm mr. desai.
mr. desai: heloo mr. prem how was ur journey? koi taqleef to nahi hui?
prem: it was ok. aap mujhe yeh bataiye ki meeting kab hai.
me.desai: meeting kasl hai sharp nine aap aaj raat aram kar lijiye. aur ek baat disscuss karni hai .lat year jo apne compnay kholi the the prem's fabrics. uske liye hume naya dress disgner chahiye. purana dress desginer bhut problems de reaha.
prem: uski disscussion hum kal meeyting ke baad karenge. aap bas yhaan ke best dress designer ki list tyar rakha. phir uske baad hum dekheenge ok. gud nite.{he hung up}
prem is now at the hotel and doinfg some formatlities of the haotel and mangers gives him the key. he went to his rooms and go to washroom to get fresh. when he comes out he saw a waitress waitng fot him at the door of prem's room
prem: who r u?
waitress: actually mangaer send s me here to ask if u want somethin for drink ar eat. if u need something i will get it for u here's the menu.
prem: actaully i already ate in the airplan so i dont want anythinf now. u can go{ and he gives a 10 doller tip to her.
waitress: thanx{ and left frm there} prem lie down on his bed and turn on the tv. he didnt find anyhting so he turn it of and open his bag to get his night suit. he is looking for the stuff and he fingds the pictu7re. he take look at it and put in his coats' pocket and went to washroom to get changed and after thet went to sleep. im the mornming around 8:50 he gets a call{prem feels like throw the phone away but the trecive it.
prem: heloo who's this?
mr. desai: it's me sir i am desai.
prem: with a angry face : itnti raat gaye phone kyun kiya.
mr. desi{laughing} pr. prem just get and look outside it's canadda not in dia and subhe ke 9 bajne mein 10 minute reh gayen hai.
prem suddley open his eyes and looked at the watch:
prem: oh my god , mr. desai i am coming in 5 min u just get rweady with files and reach at restuarent montabeloo's with the investors.
prem runs toward to the bathroom takes a shower and wears the same suit te wore yesterday and comes out lock the door and left from there.
scene three amonatbello's restaurent.
prem: i am sooo sorry gentle men, i am late. i apologise.
mr. desai: here u go with the files.
he looks at the files and start the meeting and about after 1 hour the investor said that they need time to think about this dael and they will tell him tomrrow.
prem: no preblem just take ur tim.welll taht's it for today gentlmen. the meeting is over. prme is also about to leave but mr. desai stops him.
mr. desai: woh mr. prem apne woh kal desiner ki list lane ko kaha that yeh rahi woh list.
prem. oh i almost forgot about that. lets see. suddnly he got a call frm some1 and he take out the phone from his poicket and accidentlly he drops the picture sof mukti and him. and ddint relises it. mr. dai picks up the picture and take a look at him and start smilin.
after prem done with his call and hang up.
mr. desai: o apne dress designer select kar bina uski preofle dekhe.
prem: {surprised} kyaa?
mr. desai show s the picture and says: aap mukti ko jant hain yeh. yeh canada ki top disnger hai. and shows him the profile of mukti.
prem is surprissed and stunned: yeh aap kya keh rahen hai. mukti deshmukh aur she the best dress designer of canada. he start smiling and keep looking at her profile .
well that's it for today. reply how u guyz like it. 😳 😳 😳

wooooooooooow its gr8..plz plz plz continue..i loved it

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